Itna Karo Na Mujhe Pyar: FF (Part 3 on Pg 17) 29th nov - Page 5

Originally posted by: nimmo_3397

Seriously di what a start once again bechari ishu uska weird dress code embarrassment ka reason upar se uski harkate like seriously sidha thapad de diya I have only one word for raman poor Raman
But uske bad kya insult hui ishu ki poora revenge liya Raman ne
But they are typical ishra you know nok jhok n all both were on fire
mihika aj total form me thi bht tease kiya bechari ishu ko so cute and the last part of fight ravan kumar n JKR I loved the most and then Raman ki famous wink aur kya chaiye but ap relax mt karo bcoz hme jaldi se ek update jaror chaiye can't wait seriously

Originally posted by: Richajin

Good to see the characters in their real form.. The best part of this chapter... The last one when raman self talks... Beauty toh hai but beast bhi saath main hai... Photo nahi li toh thapad maara and le le leta toh... That made me laugh... And u know what when she snatched that phone to see what he was actually doing with his phone.. I dreaded that shagun would come in picture... Then i realised none of ur works had shaggy as a prominent character... Other boys acceptable but shaggy not at all...
Continue soon...
And RIP yhm... But we still have maanvir on the forum.. Not for yhm but for ishra.. U get the characters alive.. And its refreshing break from that onscreen stuff... Please dont quit writing...

Originally posted by: karenp

very nice.. Continue it

Originally posted by: v.kaavya

this is a super start😊👏...lookin forward!! luv it!☺️❤️!

Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare

Haiye 😳

Super likes to super awesome start

The phone conversation was damn cute

Starting with I hate you and end with I love you that was so cute

And the meeting in star bucks was very interesting 🤣

Ishita ke izat ka kachara hogaya but bohot funny tha 😆

Originally posted by: maanvir

Hehe...u make sense...

The parts in dis thread will only be chapters of the novel...

The othr thread will be thestory of IshRa of Char Kadam

I hope I made sense now😲

The thread "Chaar Kadam: Safar Ab Jaari Hai" will be Chaar Kadam's IshRa... Ok that makes sense :)

Haha.. lovely start! Such a cute first meeting. Especially loved the ending when Raman was thinking about her😳

Hello...

Sorry...maine Iljam nahi lagaya tha...bas Dil me jo aaya wo bol diya...bura laga ho to realy very sorry... 😭

"Agar pata hi tha to aisa prologue kyun likha? Title se laga ke it is going to be full of romance. But ye kya tha? Shuru me hi tragedy! Kya sochke padne chali thi aur kya nikla! I hate you Raman"
Exactly my words...

"Solution is simple. Agar tumhe nahi pasand aya then just quit reading. As simple as that"

TMKSJNS & IKNMP ka 1st part padke mere Dimag me yeh hi aaya tha...

But You already know... "Kaise quit karun Raman? Ye novel aap ne specially mere liye likha hai. Agar mai nahi padhungi to apko bura nahi lagega kya?"

Matlab jo Prologue tha...wo CK ke IshRa ke liye nahi...par IKNMP ke IshRa ke liye tha...jo sirf imagery hai...so no problem...afterall Hero Heroine to CK wale IshRa hi hai...& Raman bhi apni Preggy wife ko Koi aisi wesi Story to dega nahi padhne ke liye...

& Yeah...TMKSJNS...part 13 very good...realy...bachpan ki yaad dila di...Uss thread par Reply karne ka time nahi hai...so...Bye...Diwali par Milte hai...tab tak...

Tata...See You...Sayonara...& Miss You...but what else can I Do...Exam Time...

& Purani baat ka bura laga ho to Dil se Sorry...