New OS: Raman... I Need You! - Page 4

Originally posted by: cloudy24

You made me cry a lot...i was reading it while travelling that didnt stop me from crying😭

Originally posted by: -Nidoo-

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This is such a wonderful OS 👏 👏

You've described Ishita's mental situation so believably. Their pain and their handling the situation individually, yet together, is what makes this unique 😳 Loved how Ishita only wanted Raman, and his name was the only thing running in her mind, despite the chaos ❤️

Originally posted by: -Anku-

Reading your work for the time dear. But this has to be one of the bestest One shots I have ever read. I cried so much the first time and similarly every time I read it. This was heart wrenching, painful but also it kind of warms you. It's wonderful when a person going through tough times gets space to feel what she wishes to and the whole family.. especially husband and kids are so supportive and wonderful.

Loved the moments between the family. Ishita, Raman and their kids. Loved Raman's understanding of Ishita and the time he gave her. He just needed her to know he's there. And he trusted she would seek him when she was ready to break down.

You've penned the last bit of the story so so well damn. Could visualize Ishita's breakdown, which had a very valid instigating. And then the way she chanted Raman's name, called for him and the way he rushed to comfort her.. and how he did was just 😭

I think there's no need to tell you this again. But this piece of writing is definitely the best conclusion I've seen to a track. Wish we could have seen this in the show. 😳