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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kismat

Part 27

ISHRA ROOM

Ishita was crying... raman was consoling her

Ishita: if you haven't reach on time raman to??

Raman: ishita please now stop crying... sab theek hai... jab tak mien tumhare saath hoon kuch galat nahe ho sakta...

Ishita: please raman don't leave me ever...

Raman: never ...

Boht hugs...

Param gets a call... he gets shocked... He rushes to hospital and sees ashok in icu... fighting for his life...

Param: ashok mery bhai ye vada hai... jaise tum yahan tarap rahy ho na wesy hi raman bhalla bhi tarpy ga... I will take revenge...

He comes home and sees that all are happy and enjoying... he fumes with anger and thinks: bus kuch hi dair phr tum sab sirf roo gay... He calls someone and plans raman accident... He laughs in heart...

NEXT DAY

Raman gets ready to go to office.. ishita ask him to stay... Not to go to office..

Raman: kiya baat hai... Aj bohat mood mein ho...

Ishita: please don't go

Raman: I will be back... kaam hai na

Ishita: promise??

Raman: pakka promise... now may I leave...

Ishita: yes I am permitting you but your princess is angry on you for leaving her...

Raman: aur mein apni princess ho manana janta hoon..

He kneel down and kisses ishita tummy and says: sorry princess papa has to go.. but promise me you will take care of you mumma and mumma ko tang mat karna... Papa will be back soon...

Raman: I think princess maan gai hai...

Both laughs and hugs ...

Raman returning from office... Param ask a truck driver to make sure that raman should not be alive...

raman talking to ishita on phone: yes ishita i will be back why are you worrying so much... see you are bothering my princess...

ishita: raman ye mazak nahe hai... jaldi ao na...

raman: okay dear i am coming... phone band karo phr hi to drive kar kay aonga na...

ishita: bye... drive safely...

raman: yes madam sure... take care...

raman cuts the call...

Truck coming towards raman car... and ...

AT BHALLA HOSUE

phone rings,,,,, ishita takes the call... and screams RAMAN.....

all family gather and ask ishita what happened... mihir takes the call and get to know that raman met with an accident... all rushes to hospital...

At hospital:

Doctor informs them that they could not save raman... his body is completely burned due to blast in car... ishita feels devastated and cries..

param laughs thinking wah mera half revenge to poora hogaya... raman bhalla is dead...

mr bhalla and mihir perform the last rituals of raman... while mrs bhalla and simi tries to console ishita who was completely in shock...

ISHRA ROOM:

ishita sitting in room remembering raman... how he use to talk and makes her happy... toshi jee comes, ishita cries and hugs her...

toshi jee: ishita...

ishita: maa... kiyon kiya raman ne ye??? kiyon wo muje choor kar chaly gaye...

toshi jee: na puttar roo mat...

ishita: kaise na rowoon maa... mein raman kay bina kaise jeeyongi???

toshi jee: you have to live... iss bachy lay liye...

ishita: mein nahe kar sakti ye... mein raman kay bagair iss bachy ko nahe paal sakti... wo aise nahe kar sakty maaa... unhain wapis ana hoga... mery liye... hamare bachy kay liye... raman ko ana hoga... wo wapis ayengay na maa...

toshi jeee: sambhaal ishita... wo nahe ayega... wo chala gaya hai... raman nahe ayega...

ishita: maa... raman..

toshi jee: sach ko maan lay ishita... hamara raman mar gaya hai.... hum khud uski chita ko aag laga kar ayen hain...

ishita screams : NO.... and cries vigorously and loses her conscious...

doctor comes and examines ishita and tells them to take a good care of her.. its not good for baby and her health...

toshi jee makes ishita sleep and caresses her head.. thinking: mata rani... kis kin azar lag gayi humari khushiyoon ko... Mien kaise ishita ko sambhaloon...

At night:

Ishita wakes up screaming raman name... toshi jee calms her...

Ishita: raman... kahan hai raman??

Toshi jee: shaant ho ja puttar... Arman kar... so jao

Ishita: nahe maa... raman kahan hain... unhain bulao...

Toshi jee: wo nahe ayega...

Ishita: wo ayenga maa... wada kiya tha unhoon ne... wo zinda hain maa... ap sab jhoot bol rahy ho

Toshi jee cries

Lakh duniya kahe 'tum nahi ho'
Tum yahin ho, Tum yahin ho
Lakh duniya kahe 'tum nahi ho'
Tum yahin ho, Tum yahin ho

Meri har soch me, meri har baat me
Mere ehsaas me, mere jazbaat me
Tum hi tum ho
Tum har kahin ho
Ho o laakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho
Tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho
Ho o laakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho
Tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho

Tumne chhoda hai kab saath mera
Thaame ho aaj bhi hath mera
Koi manzil koi rehguzar ho
Aaj bhi tum mere humsafar ho
Jaaun chaahe jahaan tum wahin ho
Ho o o lakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho
Tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho
Ho o o lakh duniya kahe tum nahi ho

Tum yahin ho, tum yahin ho...

Morning:

A sad morning at bhalla house... all were sad at the sudden dismiss of raman.. ishita was sleeping... then she wakes up screaming raman name.. all rushes to her... she gets up and runs towards main gate... toshi jee tries to stop her but ishita runs to main door and opened it... Waiting for raman...

Toshi jee: raman nahe hai ishita... chal...

Toshi jee holds her and walks back... ishita steps halt she turns again... all cries seeing ishita in this state...

Toshi jee: chal puttar..

Ishita: raman... And cries... she runs and hugs raman who was standing on entrance with some injuries... raman hugs her...

All gets happy seeing raman back...

Ishita: raman ap theek ho na...

Raman: haan...

Toshi jee: raman... She hugs him...

Param gets shocked seeing raman alive...

Param: per ap bachy kaise???

Raman: mera accident nahe howa tha... aik thief ne mujse wallent aur car gun point per lay li thi aur muje gun ka but maar kar jo maadir kay pass road hai na thori hilli hai wahin gira diya tha... Thori height say girne ki wajah say... chotain ayen... Baqi mien theek hoon... Behosh tha is liye kal nahe asaka...

Mr bhalla: mata rani ka shukar hai... Tu sahi salamat hai...

Ishita still hugging raman not leaving him...

Raman: ishita ab choor bhi do dard ho raha hai...

Ishita: kahan dard ho raha hai raman...

Raman: dard ko chora ye kiya halat bana li hai tum ne?? chalo mery saath...

While leaving raman was eyeing param... And lost in some thinking... All feels relieved seeing raman back...

Precap: param tries to misbehave with ishita...

That's it I hope you all will like it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
First of all sorry for late response.coming to update it was an heart drenching update yet awesome.poor ishita I cried with her.happy he is back.arggh this param.can't wait for next .please please update soon.thanks for pm.
Edited by Divanru - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
I knew it Raman is safe n he is having doubt on param way to go Punjabi puttar precap is scary but he wud he wudnt be able to as Raman is alive n ashok wat happens vd him Vn he tried to .. Vd his ishu VN dy wre newly married new she is his wife vd his child param u r dead gone baby
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
Thank God Raman is safe.
Ishu in emotional turmoil is sad..
Hope Raman catches Param.
Cont soon Riddi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Superb n thanks for pm n nice ki raman is safe
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
😲u really made me cry...
thank god raman is back...
superb update
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
lovely sad too raman doubt param n precao
is scary how he can tease a preg lady i was sure raman is safe thx for it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
thank god raman is fine
wonderful update
thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
nice update
raman is alive
i think raman knows about param
continue soon
thnks fr pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Thank God Raman is safe and doubting param
Wanna see the confrontation
Update soon

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