Will you forgive me? An IshRa FF- Chapter 5 updated Page 28 - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

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How was Onam? R u in kerala r8 now?


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Posted: 10 years ago
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raman is not at fault so now i can understand his anger
aww d bond appa n raman share is so sweet
awww d ishra scene was so cute
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

hey karthik thanks for d pm
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awesome update yar
raman is not at fault so now i can understand his anger
aww d bond appa n raman share is so sweet
awww d ishra scene was so cute


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hi Kaarthikk
read both chapters together...very beautifully written👍🏼
loving d friendship of raman and abhi
i was imagining d scene where raman was chasing abhi while reading 😆
past is disclosed
raman still loves ishita
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Originally posted by: rufana10

hi Kaarthikk
read both chapters together...very beautifully written👍🏼
loving d friendship of raman and abhi
i was imagining d scene where raman was chasing abhi while reading 😆
past is disclosed
raman still loves ishita
hope he will forgive her soon😳
waiting to read more
thanks for pm😊

Thank you rufana for liking the updates. Will update ASAP😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 3

Oh Teri! I won't leave you today.

When they started to come out, Ishita entered the same time colliding with them. Oops! Sorry yaar said Abhi.

Its Ok. I didn't expect you guys. Actually I came to give this quotation copy for our next project to Raman Sir.

Kya Ishita? Just call bhai as Raman.

Its not like that Simmi, just as it is the Office.

Whether Mr.CEO kuch kaha? Asked Abhi.

No he didn't say anything replied Ishita.

Arey bhai kuch toh bol na told Simmi.

I never asked her to call me Sir. She can call me whatever she want. I never butt into third person's interests said RKB with a straight face & went out.

"Raman" called Abhi by following him.

Leave it Ishita said Simmi to pacify her.

Accept that your bhai is Raavan Kumar, atleast now said Ishita with a glare.

Haan zaroor. Lets go, she dragged Ishita to her Cabin.

Meanwhile Abhi & Raman were walking towards the Garden chitchatting.

U r too much Raman.

Its amazing that u r easily switching sides, dickhead!

Today evening we are throwing a party in our office for all our new clients Man. You should be here by 6 pm atleast.

Hmmm. Yeah, sure you make some arrangements regarding that. I am going out now.

Meanwhile Mr.Iyer reached Bhallas to chitchat. As usual both the senior pros are chitchatting with their respective ladies bickering about the gossips of the town.

Don't worry Mr.Bhalla I had a talk with Raman. Sooner he might be in talking terms with both of you.

Its ok Iyer sahib, atleast he could talk with his mummyji na.

Everything will get well Toshi, nee kavalapadadha! Smile brightu. Madhavi Iyer tried to cheer up Toshiji. Elders continued to talk for a long time catching up the untold stories.

I can understand his anger Madhu. Praying that someday he will speak to us said Mrs.bhalla.

Abhi & Simmi got ready with matching colours. Here Ishita got ready with Blue colour Saree with minimal make up & a simple jewellery. Raman was also ready with his blazing blue shades which is favourite. Everybody arrived at the party except Raman. All ladies were looking for the mighty RKB who used to kill with his looks normally at any formal parties. When RKB entered the party arena all girls were drop dead seeing his killer look especially with his clean shaven face after a long time.

Welcome Mr.Bhalla greeted Mr.Mehta.

Hello Mr.Mehta! Hope u r enjoying the party.

Of course thanks for the invite. This is my wife Mrs.Shefali Mehta.

Hi Mam! Pleasure to meet you.

Its nice to meet you Mr.Bhalla. U r looking amazing & I should say all guys in this Party might plan to kill you & ladies might kidnap you later winked Shefali.

But this guy won't budge to any woman interfered Abhi.

Coz my bhai is a gentleman, Simmi tagged along him.

Raman was just smiling during the whole conversation.

But some day some girl might steal your brother Simmi said Shefali.

Well I want to meet that IronLady! Laughed Abhi.

Ishita entered the hall at the same time which he shocked Raman to the core. She was nothing less than an angel. He was rooted to his spot. She came towards them & acknowledged them.

Wow Ishita! U r looking beautiful dear complimented Simmi.

I think I am going to agree Simmi for the first time said Abhi.

Thank you guys. But I know about my beauty, so don't butter up replied polite Ishita.

U r so modest yaar. Learning something Simmi said Abhi.

Oh shut up Abhi! No girl is seeing you in this party & u r pissed off coz of that.

Yeah! U r behind me like that Hutch dog where ever I go, so girls r afraid of u woman complained Abhi.

What am I a dog? I am going to kill you. Bhai look at your friend pleaded Simmi.

Then only they understood RKB was eyeing Ishita all the time. Simmi just went near Ishita & said something in her ears which made her blush with a hit in her arm followed.

Abhi husked in Raman's ear, "Nice na".

"Gorgeous" muttered RKB unknowingly. He came back to senses & gave a deadly glare to a giggling Abhi. Then they had a nice chat with everybody who were invited by them on behalf of their company. Both Raman & Ishita were stealing glances all the time. While looking casually he noticed her waistline which made him sweat like anything.

He muttered himself "madrassan badal gayi, maarne ka iraada hai kya?"

What happened Mr.Bhalla? U r sweating heavily quizzed Mr.Mehta.

Nothing , just like that. I think there is a problem with this part of AC. Raman said trying to cover up.

Problem with AC or problem with someone? Winked Abhi while whispering in his ears.

Muh band karo! Muttered RKB.

Meanwhile Simmi & Abhi were plotting something to make sure Ishita should go with Raman after the party. Abhi said something in her ears & went to Raman.

Simmi came & said "Lets drop Ishita & will go then Abhi."

Yaar I planned a night out for us, plz don't ruin it.

How can I leave her alone? quizzed Simmi.

Its Ok. I will drop her. U guys carry on. Came a stern voice from the mighty RKB.

Thank you so much dude, Abhi hugged him by winking at Simmi.

Raman muttered "tujhe kya lagta hai? I can't see what you guys are doing. I will leave her" to Abhi.

Shocked would be an understatement for Abhi. Simmi dragged a shocked Abhi while Raman winked at him which made his mouth wide open.

Ishita was searching for Simmi-Abhi duo.

What are you searching? Asked Raman.

Huh! Nothing, replied Ishita.

They went for a night out. I am going to drop you. Lets go.

Ishita's eyes bulged out & she doesn't know whether to go or not especially considering his anger & short temper.

In Lift Ishita was fidgeting her pallu while he noticed that. To lighten the mood he said "Don't worry. I won't eat you up".

No, I am not worried about anything said Ishita trying to hide her nervousness.

Are you Sure?

Yeah! Yeah!

Then he came near with both their faces were so close to each other & asked " Are you Sure?"

Ishita went numb. Her throat had gone dry. She was feeling his breath on her face. She was feeling weak on her knees. She tried to say something but couldn't say coz of their proximity. Raman was enjoying her plight to the core. Then lift came to the ground floor & the sound brought them back to the reality. Both of them moved apart.

After reaching the car he asked her "Shall we?"

Hmm. Yeah lets go said Ishita while praying that everything should go well in this journey.

That's it for this part Guys. Hope you will leave your comments & suggestions.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for the late comment karthik
Actually engrossed in some work
OK coming to update it was good so simi and abhi r trying to bring them closer
Abhi tell her hutch dog🤣
Continue soon
Edited by cutieruhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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All I can say is I'm eagerly waiting for 2 things: Short-term = The car journey 😃 Long-term = How Ishita will seek Raman's forgiveness Please make her a bold Ishita who makes her way to his heart 😳 😳

Love the friendship banter between Raman-Abhi-Simmi-Ishita. It makes the plot fresh 😳 😃

Story is weaving well 👏 😃 Please continue soon Kaarthik 👏
Edited by -Nidoo- - 10 years ago

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