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Posted: 10 years ago
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Probably tomorrow coz I have my exams going on
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Originally posted by: desire_nikki

wow..such a cute n sweet chappy..glad to know that Raman is giving her a chance..continue soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KpCrazyFanRashi


Probably tomorrow coz I have my exams going on


no problem
will wait
best of luck for exams
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello lovelies! 🤗 So so sorry for the delay exams chalu hai meri.

Iss baar no pm's too coz really busy 😭

I wrote this part in a hurry so not spell checked. Toh maybe bohot saati mistakes hongi. Maaf karo uske liye.😃

Happy Reading!

All positive, negative comments welcomed.😳

Part 3:

Raman got up in the morning and found himself very close to Ishita. He was mesmerised by her beauty. "Kitni cute lagri hai sote waqt" he thought. He got up quickly so that she dosen't feel awkward when she gets up. He gets up and goes to the balcony for some fresh air. Just then someone tapped his shoulder. It was Toshi.

RAMAN: "Areee maa app aaiye naa. kuch kaam tha kya? Mujhe bula liya hota naa.."

TOSHI:" Kyu bina kisi kaam ke main apne puttar se baat karne nahi aa sakti kya?"

RAMAN: "Arey maa mera voh matlab nahi tha. Aap jab chahe tab aa sakti hai."

TOSHI" Puttar main jaanti hu ki tenu Ishita se pyaar nahi hai aur humne zabardasti yeh shaadi karvai. Lekin Raman ab jo mein gal karne jaa rahi hu dhyana se sun. Puttar Ishita ek badi hi soni kudi hai. Main Madhvi ji ko bohot saalon se jaanti hoo. Bada hi changa parivaar hai voh. Dekh tum dono ke beech jo kuch bhi hua main nahi jaanta ki kyu hua par job hi hua shaayad Mata Rani yahi chahti thi. Ishita pregnant hai aur aisi haalat mein ek aurat ko uske parivaar ki sabse jyaada zaroorat hoti hai. Dekh Madhvi ji aur vishwa ji toh ab Chennai settle hone jaa rahe hai aise mein ab hume hi Ishita ka khyaal rakhna hai use bohot pyaar dena hai. "

RAMAN" Ha maa main jaanti hu aap chinta mat kariye main Ishita ka poora khyaal rakhunga."

TOSHI: "Shabash mera baccha. Accha chal tu taiyaar ho jaa office jaana hai na. Aur haa raat ko tera aur Ishita ki reception party hai toh office se jaldi aana ."

(Very good my son! Ok now you u get ready you have to go for work also na. And yes come early in the evening its yours and Ishita's reception party.)

RAMAN: "Jee maa main pahunch jaaunga."

(Yes mom I'll reach on time)

AT RAMAN'S OFFICE:

Raman tells his CEO to handle all the meetings for today as he has an important personal work to do. He called up some one and told that person to meet him at a coffee shop.

GIRL: "Hey Raman finally you're here bbatao kaise yaad kiya apni ex ko??

(hey raman finally you're here. Tell me how did you remember your ex?)

RAMAN: "Not again Mihika! Yaar I know your angry but jo ho gaya so ho gaya. Accha maine tumhe ek important kaam se bulaya hai. As you know aaj shaam ko Ishita aur meri reception party hai toh I wanted to gift her something can you please suggest something?"

MIHIKA: "What the hell Raman you called me here for this?? I thought you wanted to spend some time with me yaar. How can you just forget all those moments spent together.?"

RAMAN: "Dekho mihika main tumhare alawa Ishita se jude kisi aur ko nahi jaanta toh please batao na please."

MIHIKA: "Why don't you gift her a broom on which she can just sit and go away somewhere? I hate her. She has ruined my life. You too Raman go to hell ."

Saying this she walked off leaving a very angry Raman behind. Raman went back to his office and searched the internet to find a perfect gift. When he finaaly found what he had to give he headed home for the reception.

BHALLA MANSION:

All the guests had started coming in. The hall was beautifully decorated with blue and white balloons. Ishita kept staring at the door. She was waiting for Raman to arrive. Just then someone tapped her shoulder. It was Mihika.

MIHIKA: "Hello akka. Oh wait wait wait what should I call you ummm Mrs Ishita Raman kumar Bhalla. Apne pati ko dhund rahi ho aap? Abhi tak nahi aaye aapke pati parmeshwar? Awww soo sad. Aapki kismet kitni kharab hai naa akka I mean pati aapka hai lekin time mere saath spend karta hai. Aaj poora din hum dono ek saath the in a coffee shop."

(hello akka. Oh wait what should I call you umm Mrs Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla. R u searching for your husband? Didn't he come as yet? Awww soo sad. Your fate is soo bad na akka I mean he might be your husband but he spends time with me. Today the entire day we were together in a coffee shop.)

ISHITA: "Dekho Mihika stop all of your nonsense ok! Bohot saare mehmaan aaye hue hai toh mujhe koi tamasha nahi chahiye. Aur jaha tak mere pati ka sawal hai I trust him more than my life. So please go and enjoy the party."

It was really late and the party was in full swing but raman had not arrived yet. People had started to gossip now. Ishita was near to tears now. She started feeling tired and weak. Toshi told her to go and get ready as she had to perform.

ISHITA: "Mummyji how can I perform without him?"

TOSHI: "I know puttar but we have no other option. As it is bhallaji has told everyone that Raman is stuck in an important conference so might be late. U have to perform alone it self. God knows where this idiot son of mine disappeared. Let him come home I'll show him. Puttar you go and get ready."

Ishita went and got ready. She looked like a radiant angel from heaven in her silver off shoulder gown.

Bhallaji announced to the crowd thet his daughter-in-law was going to perform next.

Ishita went and stood on the stage hell nervous of performing alone. She decided not to perform and was about to get down the stage when someone held her wrist. It was none other than Raman.

The applause of the audience died down as they tried to ignore the stares they received. At last, Raman had come. They took their places and waited for the soft flow of music to begin.

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon

Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon

Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

(Female)

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se

Tum se hi sab batein ab se

Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

They took a step forward and bowed. they circled each other, their gaze remained locked. Raman placed his hand on her back, her hand on his shoulder, and their free hands finally met and they started wth much grace and co-ordination

(Male)

Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon

Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon

Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

(Female)

Hum ko kya lena hai sab se

Tum se hi sab batein ab se

Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun

Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya

Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai

Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Tu kahe to tere hi kadam ke

main nishanon pe

Chalun rukun ishaare pe

Tu kahe tho khwabon ka bana ke

Main bahana sa

Mila karu sirhaane pe

Ohhh

Tum se dil ki baatein seekhi

Tum se hi yeh raahe seekhi

Tum pe marr ke mein tho

Jjee gaya

. Together, they danced to the music, their feet in perfect sync to the beating of their heart. As the song progressed Ishita felt relaxed, and allowed a small smile to form on her lips. He was perfect she thought. Raman had worn a white spotless suit, which matched her dress. His eyes, refreshing as spring rain, were deep and irresistible.

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun

Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya

Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai

Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khudaaa...

The song ended but both were lost in each other's eyes unaware of the surrounding. Their lips were a few inches far when the audience applauded loudly which bought them back to their senses. Ishita turned pink and moved back and ran down the stage.

The party was going on in full swing where all cousins and friends were performing for IshRa. As the last performance ended the light went.

RAMAN: "Arey yeh light ko kya hua?"

(what happened to the light?)

Soon a small light was lit on the stage and a person appeared.

The person started saying:

"Suna Hai Khuda Ke Darbar Se..
Kuch Farishtey Faraar Ho Gaye..
Kuch to Vaapas Chale Gaye..
Aur Kuch Humare Yaar Ho Gaye."

PERSON: "This one is for you bhai"

O bade ok soke chada hai fitoor

Leke do-pe sho-pe hoja mash'hoor
Mujhe masti chadhi hai from head-to-toe
Jinhe nachna hai nache
Jo na nache F.O.

Ve-ve-velle mat betho gand paao in the club
Ch-ch-chill to machao ruk jaaye beat jab (x2)

Chal le le stance
Ready to dance
Aane wala hai gaane ka
Hook.. hook.. hook.. hook...
hook hook hook hook...
Ho nacho saare G phaad ke

Hil ke nacho-nacho
Hil dul ke nacho-nacho
Hil ke nacho-nacho
Nacho saare G phaad ke (x2)

Aa ha.. aa ha.. aa ha..
Ho nacho saare G phaad ke
Aa ha..

Sarphira hai tu, sarphiri hu main
Ya hum dono hain sahi
Aur sarphire hain saare
Behki-behki main aur behka-behka tu
Behke-behke lag rahe kyu aaj ye nazare

Chal sarka dena pare zamaane ko
Kisko fikar hai ye kiska qasoor

Ho okay sokay hua set mood
Ek feeling bole ca-ca-carry on dude
Mujhe masti chadi hai from head to toe
Jinhe nachna hai nache
Jo na nache F.O.

Ve-ve-velle mat betho gand paao in the club
Ch-ch-chill to machao ruk jaaye beat jab

Chal le le stance
Ready to dance
Aane wala hai gaane ka
Hook.. hook.. hook.. hook...
hook hook hook hook...
Ho nacho saare G phaad ke

Hil ke nacho-nacho
Hil dul ke nacho-nacho
Hil ke nacho-nacho
Nacho saare G phaad ke

Aa ha.. aa ha.. aa ha..
Ho nacho saare G phaad ke
Aa ha..
Ho nacho saare G phaade ke

The person danced with full energy.

PERSON: "Sorry bhai could't makeit to your wedding but I am very happy for you. Kya bhai laayi hai aapne mere liye. But be careful ek shaadi ka laddoo khaya humesha ke liye phas gaya."

The audience roared in laughter. Raman ran towards him soon as he came down the stage.

RAMAN: "Mihir mere yaar. Kitna time lagaya tumne. Shaadi me bhi nahi aaya."

MIHIR: "I missed you too meri jaan."

Mihika was passing from there when Mihir noticed her.

MIHIR: "OMG look who we have here. Meri chutki"

MiMi hugged each other.

MIHIKA: "Mere jaaneman kaisa hai? College ke baa dab dikh raha hai."

(My love how are you? After college we are meeting now)

Mimi were engrossed in conversation.

The party ended at around midnight.

ISHRA BEDROOM:

Ishita was getting ready for going to bed when Raman entered the bedroom.

RAMAN: "Ishita suno naa aaj kitna maza aaya na party mein. Itne dino baad aaj Mihir se mila tha. He's my yaar, meri jaan, mera sab kuch."

(Ishita listen na today's party was so much fun na. Today after so many days I met Mihir. He's my everything.)

Ishita smiled watch Raman talk.

RAMAN: "Ishita mein tumhare liye kuch laaya tha wait."

Raman went to the cupboard and bought out a big box.

ISHITA: "Itna bada box?"

RAMAN: "Haa dekho toh sahi."

He opened the box and took out all the belongings from it.

RAMAN: "Yeh dekho yeh ek diary hai. Isme hum aaj se saare yaadein banaenge. Humare baby ki first kick, tumhari god bharai, delivery, baby ka hare k month birthday ke pics, uska first word, jab voh papa bolega, jab voh chalna sikhega ets uske saare moments hum capture karenge."

He took out another gift.

RAMAN: "Yeh tumhare liye pregnancy par book. Aur yeh kuch cd's hai agar yeh sunogi toh mind shaant hoga."

He took out the third gift.

RAMAN: "Aur yeh last but not the least yeh.

Ishita looked at the gift and was surprised.

ISHITA: "This is so cute Raman. But it must have be expensive naa?"

It was a beautiful diamond heart shaped locket.

RAMAN: "Iss locket ko tum aise kholkar isme beechme koi bhi do photos laga sakti ho. Ek hum dono ki aur dusri humari with our baby."

ISHITA: "Raman this is beautiful thank u so much. I love you loads Raman and thank you for coming in my life."

Raman pulled her into an bone crushing hug promising her to keep her happy always.

Thats it for now. I know it is not that good. But I have my exams on and in between them gave an update.

Do like, comment.

Lots of love,
Rashi.❤️
Edited by KpCrazyFanRashi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
fabulous update
ishra dance was romantic 😳
loved it
all d best for your exams dear 👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
thank u
all the best for your exams
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely
Awesome Update
Loved it
I really like this Raman.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ishu's pregnant in your story... that broke a part of my heart! :-()
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anum_says

Lovely

Awesome Update
Loved it
I really like this Raman.


ty 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rufana10


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fabulous update
ishra dance was romantic 😳
loved it
all d best for your exams dear 👍🏼


ty 😳

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