Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 85

Beautiful part. ...
All simmi wanted to say his bhai also coming but she didn't listen. ... 😆
The bus part...they playing antakshri...saying their dil ki baat through songs ...

Best line...
"Jab mere baaju nahi jeena toh mere baaju mein baithe kyun? Kahin aur jaake kyun nahi bait the? I asked him.
And I made a fool of myself yet again. 🤣 🤣 🤣

Too good ...
Continue soon

beautifully written loved it yaar

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

Res

UNRES

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kya bolun comment mein main...it is just getting tougher for me to comment 😉

will think of something and edit my comment

for now it was PERFECT

Originally posted by: chandu1234

Nice update dear

Stry is not movng frwrd dear...show them as grown up

Originally posted by: mayraa

Awesome part Di...

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Rula diya yar 😭

Teacher ji sachi mai 😭

I feel sooo bad for himm

Plzzz kuch karo naaa😭

Ufff yeh ishu bhi na 😆

I like that teacher in the update today 😆

Par yeh angath kha se tapka hoga 😉

Manna padegaa teacher ji u fulfill ur promises ishra romance on the way 😉

Originally posted by: avni_19

Omggg! Ths s sooo damnnn beautiful. I loveddd it.. explaining their feelings thru a song made me cry...! Heart-touching update. Poor Ishita wants to believe him but somehow not able to.. I loved how u do tht...not giving in easily. Loved ishita's and simmi's conversation.

Cont soon...! Wanna knw wt happens next!

Originally posted by: 9900

Nice update 😊

Really loved it a lot😊

However much ishu thinks of running away from raman he comes more closer to her😆Poor ishu😆

Even I can't trust raman at all. He'll come close and break ishu even more😕

But I felt sorry for raman when he sat in a corner all alone.

Your story is a very good depiction of how a girl's heart melts so soon which causes for their own grief.

Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃

Originally posted by: Angels_Ring

Beautiful part. ...
All simmi wanted to say his bhai also coming but she didn't listen. ... 😆
The bus part...they playing antakshri...saying their dil ki baat through songs ...

Best line...
"Jab mere baaju nahi jeena toh mere baaju mein baithe kyun? Kahin aur jaake kyun nahi bait the? I asked him.
And I made a fool of myself yet again. 🤣 🤣 🤣

Too good ...
Continue soon

Originally posted by: sulochana90

beautifully written loved it yaar

i got to emotional after reading this

thank u

im so happy n i really cant thank u enough for such a wonderful update

senti kardeya na yaar