#2 New Ishra SS: Muskuraane Ki Wajah Tum Ho...(chap 17- chap 28 )

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Greeshma

@FreedomOfSpeech

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Very nice update DW 😃 ... Thanks for giving lenghty one... Uff Raman missed her stage performance & he know everything was plan to get back old Raman 😎 ... Really good dear... And again his past(shagun) dying to know what's his relationship with her... You're just killing me with this suspense :/ ... Try to update little faster... Thank you again for such a smooth and peaceful update. 🤗

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pcnsb

@pcnsb

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#422

~res~

~unres ~

Okay sabse pehle toh party banti hai ... do do updates. .. amazing yaar...!

Thank you so much for that. ..

Coming to the update... it was beautiful... raman missed her performance. .

So he knew ishita 's real mission to get old raman back. .. isse bolte hai understanding...

Yaar you stopped at crucial point... i mean come on how can you leave us like that...

Update soon...

Nandini

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#423

Aarohi I hate you yes yes yes I hate you ... For stopping at the wrong moment n breaking the good wala atmosphere :P

Ok kidding

But from starting we were getting the old Raman. Love was in the air n I could feel that this side too. But past ne beech me a kar kachraa kar dia

Now update soonish

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#424

Simplyyy beautiful! Loveddd itt...esp the party seq n the emotional raman. Looks like raman might disclose his past to her. But ishu will help him overcome this pain.

Beautifully written.

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#425

Res...

remind me to unres if I dnt do it bfr Thursday ok?

Finally unres...

Special cmnt to maine pehle hi de diya hai...ab official cmnt de rahi hoon😳

Firstly thnx fr the dedication...

But mai koi shrey nahi lena chahti kyunki honestly mera koi contribution nahi raha hai tere is write up...

But its really sweet of u to credit me just because a teeny weeny part of dis chapter is inspired by my writing style...

I am honoured and thanx a lot for that...

Nw cmng to the updt...

It was a lovely updt...

Its gud to see that IshRa r shedding their inhibitions and coming closer...

Song choice was perfect...

Bt u still hv to work on incorporating the story into the lyrics...

Plz dnt mind...being ur didi i thought it was my duty to point out ur weaknesses as well...

I m too happy with the length of the updte...

End me ye kya tha?

Show me Shgun ki prominence kafi nahi thi jo tune idhr b usko ghused diya?

Just kidding😛

Sorry fr the dely in unres...

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Tc_Tc

@Tc_Tc

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#426

Read both threads in one go... Very well written

Idk y but it kind of reminds me of ArShi

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ayezarahmat

@ayezarahmat

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#427

amazing one dear thanks for d pm ur late update is justified by d long update

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anisha960

@anisha960

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#428

beautiful storu
loved d slow n steady progress in their relationship
each updte increases d curiosity level !!
lookng forward too read d updates
updte soon !!

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#429

Awesome update I thought Ishu success in Bring Raman out of his shadow and be happy but only 2 wweks his nightmare coming back . Poor them. The party was nice and everyone happy and enjoy. Th e quality time they spend together was beautiful and their relationship was change equation now.they still not sure and confess their feeling yet and they did not cross their boundary😳 but the last short was so hurt for Ishu what happen to Raman why he come home drunk and did he met with Shagun. Please continue and thank you for awesome update. Sorry for late reading and comment dear.🤗🤗

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Isha

@..Isha..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#430

Hii Aroohi di I know I'm very late I'm so srry..
My 5 chp are pending.. me jaldi jaldi pd kr comment kronge.. 😃 iss br itta late ne hoga.. paka.. Even I didnt congo you for new thread
So congo di.. 😃 😆
Res.
I will be back soon 😛

Edited by ..Isha.. - 10 years ago