Ishra ss-meera si deewani part 21 on page 137 added on sept 12. - Page 84

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

nice update
poor raman had a mu
soon clear this mu
n raman is ao cute he loves her so much



Thanks for liking it prachi
Will continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10

fabulous update
raman misunderstood ishu and rahul's practice
that boy threatens raman...don't know what he will do with him
poor raman...he is fearing that ishita will go away leaving him alone 😒
ishu understands that something is bothering him
looking forward to read that what is going to happen in valentines day 😉
update soon di 😊



Thanks for liking it dear
Yes Raman misunderstood their practice
Don't worry everything will be fine soon
Will continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Look like you have to prepare for #2 thread soon.😉🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Look like you have to prepare for #2 thread soon.😉🤗




Thanks for ur good wishes jum
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 21
Next day when Raman wake up,he check the time and found it was 8o'clock in the morning. He was late for the morning class.he calls jaan where r u.make a cup of tea for me.I have headache.

But he didn't receive any answer,when he get out of the bed he found a note.

GOOD MORNING RAMAN.I KNOW U R LOOKING FOR ME.BUT I AM GOING TO COLLEGE SINCE WE HAVE A FUNCTION ON ACCOUNT OF VALENTINE DAY. UR TEA IS IN FLASK.WATER IS READY FOR BATH.TOOK OUT UR CLOTHES FOR THE DAY.PLEASE BE READY AND BE THERE IN AN HOUR.

LOVE U
UR JAAN.

He smiled reading that note.thinking how much she cares for me and love me.let's forget about yesterday, since its our first valentine together let's celebrate it fully.she will definitely tell me about that later.

Soon he was having his breakfast and tea dressed in a blue crisp shirt with blue denims.he was looking just too handsome in that.
Within an hour he reaches the college but not before buying a diamond ring for his lady love.he was very happy thinking about the spark in her eyes when he will slip the ring in her finger.

He was looking here and there for ishita when mihika told him,she is in the auditorium. He walked towards the auditorium in a jiffy.when he entered the auditorium a announcement was going on,now I like to welcome Miss ishita iyer to perform her dance performance, his lips curve in a smile listening her name but the smile disappeared hearing the rest of announcement, along with Rahul.

Soon they were on the stage performing on the song pyaar ki ek kahaani suno,they were dancing very well and everybody was applauding for them but Raman couldn't see anything since his vision was blurred with tears.all the hopes and happiness was gone seeing them together. He was shattered.he didn't want to think bad but he can't overlook the obvious.he goes silently from there.

Ishita sees him walking out of the auditorium. Soon after the performance she goes behind him sensing something is very wrong.from that far also she can see her tears.she didn't understand why his smile broke into tears suddenly. When she didn't find him anywhere, she knows he must be in that far most corner of the college where they meet everyday.

She goes and find him standing there.she goes and hug him from back.

Ishita-u don't know how anxiously I was waiting for u.u r looking so handsome in this blue shirt.did u like it.why u came out of the auditorium, don't u like my performance.

Raman shouted-why will I stand there,to see u with rahul.yesterday I see u saying I love u ,but I didn't say anything thinking that must be a misunderstanding but today u were happily dancing with him.if u love him tell me,I will go from ur life.

Tears started flowing from her eyes.she said softly Raman its not like that,

Raman interrupted I don't want to listen anything.

Ishita-but please listen once.

Raman-please leave ishita .

Ishita ran from there crying.

After ten minutes or some ,when his anger reduced ,he realised that he had gone overboard.he must have listened to her.its not that he don't trust her but seeing her in someone else arms is something he can't tolerate but that doesn't mean u can treat her like that .Raman thought she is ur wife ,she deserves all the respect ,trust and love from u.u must apologize to her.

Thinking so he was about to go when he heard rahul's voice.

Rahul-i love u dear.

Raman saw he was proposing to a girl.

Girl-thank god u proposed me or else I have to propose u .from last three years I am waiting for ur proposal.u r so late rahul.

Rahul-i wasn't ready to propose u still.but Ishita told me to do that even she teach me how to propose. Poor girl yesterday she took time to teach me how to propose.

Girl-ishu is a great girl.

Rahul-yes she is.but why we r discussing her.let her enjoy her valentine, we will enjoy ours.saying so he kissed his girl.

Raman was shocked to hear the truth about yesterday proposal. He was very guilty to shout at her jaan .he ran to the college to find her.he was looking for her but couldn't find her.he thought he lost her due to his rude behaviour. He sat on the stairs thinking about her,her smile ,her eyes ,her love everything.

He was lost in his thoughts when his phone beeped.it was a message from ishita.with trembling hands he pressed the view button expecting the worst.

Hi Raman u were not ready to listen so thought of messaging u.yesterday rahul was practising to propose someone and I was only helping him.today his partner got a leg sprain that's why I had to perform with him.my performance is yet to happen. It is dedicated to my love that is only u.please come in the auditorium to make me believe that u forgave me.I love u.

Teri deewani.

Raman was surprised .how can she seek for forgiveness when he is at fault.he ran to auditorium and her performance was about to start.

She was on the stage.she smiled looking him coming.the song started.

Preet ki lat mohe aisi laagi
Ho gayi main matwaari
Bal bal jaon apne piya pe
Ki main jaon waari waari
Mohe sudh budh na rahi tan man ki
Yeh toh jaane duniya
Bebas aur lachaar phiron main
Haari main dil haari.

Tere naam se jee loon
Tere naam se mar kaun
Teri jaan ke sadke mein
Kuch aisa kar kaun
Tune kya kar dala
Haan haan Ji ho ho Ji
Ho gayi main Teri deewani deewani
Teri deewani

She was dancing beautifully on the song.his lips curved in a smile seeing her love and dedication for him.he silently thanked the almighty to send that angel in his life ,who is erasing all loneliness out of his life.he felt blessed having her in his life.

Ishq junoon jab had se badh jaaye
Haste haste aashiq sooli chadh jaye
Ishq ka jaadu sar chadh ke bole
Khub lagaa lo pehre raste rab khole
Yahi ishq di marzi hai,yahi ran di marzi
Tune kya kar dala,haan haan Ji ho ho Ji
Ho gayi main Teri deewani deewani
Teri deewani

She was dancing looking at him and suddenly fell off the stage but Raman was quick enough to save her in neck of time.she closed her eyes in anticipation fearing to fell.but open her eyes feeling herself in his strong arms.she look at him and smiled ,a tear escape her eyes ,they share an intense eye lock.their trance was broken by the applause.he put her down.

Host-that was a beautiful performance Ishita but as u fell,u r disqualified. Sorry dear.

Raman goes from there ,after sometime ishita also gone behind him.he went to the same place where they were sometime before.

Ishita-r u still angry.

Raman turned and hugged her .tears was flowing from his eyes.

Raman-i am so sorry jaan.I doubted u even though I know how much u love me.I am so sorry.I made u cry jaan.

Ishita wiped his tears and said its OK Raman.if u love someone u always fear to loose her.its not ur fault.

Raman-no jaan I shouldn't said those harsh words to u.u always do something that no one has ever done to me.I love u.

Ishita-i love u too.

Raman-please punish me,so that I will never repeat this .

Ishita-ok ,propose me formally.

Raman kneel down and said-Miss ishita iyer ,u r the love of my life .I love u more than anything in this world.I will not promise u moons and stars but I will keep u happy no matters what the situation will be.will u be mine forever.saying so he slipped the ring in her finger.

Ishita was overwhelmed by his proposal.she cried and hugged him tight.he slummed his lips on her lips relishing the soft petal like lips.he deepen the kiss ,kissing her softly and gently.she responded back.he entered her mouth soon tasting her softness.Raman said in between the kiss,I missed u so much.Ishita replied,I miss u too.they broke the kiss in need of oxygen.

Raman-i an sorry because of me u lost the competition.

Ishita kissed his nose and said because of u I learn living,thank u.come with me.

Raman-where.

Ishita-dont ask just come with me.

She take him to car and when he sat inside, she blindfold him.

Raman-what r u doing.

Ishita-kidnapping u,keep quite or else I will make u quite.

Raman nodded .after a ride of about one and half hour.

Raman-where we r going.
Ishita-we r just there ,have a little patience.

Raman-how much patience .I am bored of closing my eyes and mouth.

Ishita-then utilise ur lips in some other work.she said and stop the car.she came forward and said softly,u can kiss ur wife.

Raman came forward and captured her lips once again.they were kissing like mad,like their life depend on it.Raman broke the kiss and said rubbing his lips on her neck,can I open the blindfold and see my beautiful wife.

Ishita-not yet.she said and take him out of the car and said now open it.

Raman open it to see they were on a beautiful hill surrounded by mountains and the weather was foggy.

Raman-its so beautiful.

Ishita-u haven't seen its beauty yet.let me show u.

She screamed Raman I love u.

Her voice echoed in the air making him smile.

She screamed again,I love u so much Raman.

That was echoed too.Raman come near her and said thank you for coming into my life.

Ishita-ur welcome Raman.its ur valentine gift.did u like it.

Raman-i love it.but love u more.


That's all for now.will wait for ur reply.

P.s -make sure I have to write another update in next thread.I think u understand what I an trying to say.
Edited by cutieruhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi next part is updated above .enjoy and don't forget to leave ur reply.will wait for it.
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Its updated. Have a look
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update rakshu..

i like the spirit of ishu ..she not think like a pagal ladki and dnt think like a egostic human..she waited patiently and she messaged to raman is a perfect move bcoz she not go in to shell to cover up her tears ,she quickly take the action in her hands and again win her love back.

this incident teach a lesson to raman before going to question her love for him in future...

Raman loves ishu offcourse if we see the same situation b/w ishu and rahul ,we also thought same,as raman did..
Haa some what he not trust ishu or his fate?he hate his fate..
yeah his fate,he already lost everyone in his life,he dont have that much strength to lose ishu ...

O ishu is raman deewani,she disqualified in dance performance but qualified to win raman love again..

I like their kissing scenes..i like the suprise too.
Rakshu meri mood acha tah iss liye meri boring comment padlo..he he he

omg second thread is coming soon..

thanks for pm..
Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amezng dear plz continue soon and also continue ur othr stories.
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Posted: 10 years ago
simply awesome update...
haye raman..is so possessive and zalkukda too ..

nice song teri deewani...

liked the way raman proposed her...so simple yet beautiful...

congrats in advance for new thread...🥳

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