Aik Pal ~OS~

AIK PAL

Raman I've something to tell you!

Kaho naa!

Aap jab ghar aayenge tab batao gein!

She hears a crashing sound

Hello! Hello! Raman?

After two minutes she hears a guy say

I'm sorry this gentleman has met with an accident! We are taking him to City Hospital!

Without any thought in the world she rushes to the hospital.

****

I'm sorry to tell you Mrs. Bhalla; your husband is very critical! He might not be able to survive through the night!

What nonsense!? I wanna meet him NOW!

OK!

Just a while back they were merrily chattering away and now he was no condition to even pass a smile!
She inched closer to him

He opened his eyes!

Ishu...

Raman, I'm pregnant!

A tear rolled down his eye!

The next moment he closed his eyes forever; never to return!

THE END

iyyo!! it was small di but enough to give the wonderful message. only and only one single moment is ablwd to destroy our lives and same is happening with ishra. Raman who was chaating with her was unknown other the fact that it was their last chatting while ishita who was weaving the new dreams of their baby was unknown that their baby will never see his fathers face. loved it di a lot. I still not understand why didn't u write more. u should rite seriously. bcz it WS fab.

apna Twitter handle bataao. I will follow u

Originally posted by: aarohi26

iyyo!! it was small di but enough to give the wonderful message. only and only one single moment is ablwd to destroy our lives and same is happening with ishra. Raman who was chaating with her was unknown other the fact that it was their last chatting while ishita who was weaving the new dreams of their baby was unknown that their baby will never see his fathers face. loved it di a lot. I still not understand why didn't u write more. u should rite seriously. bcz it WS fab.

apna Twitter handle bataao. I will follow u

thank u! Twitter is @TheUmeirahBegum (u asked me so cutely 😳)

oh my... I loved this di
Par I'll pray nothing like this happens in show
can't bear to see Raman in that way
short and sweet
very well plotted

its small but a beautiful message is being given..

Ayyo little one but so meaning full..:-)
awesome os

Originally posted by: malaxmi

Short and sweet.

awww thank you!

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

oh my... I loved this di
Par I'll pray nothing like this happens in show
can't bear to see Raman in that way
short and sweet
very well plotted

this idea was so fascinating! Thank u!

Originally posted by: umeirah02

thank u! Twitter is @TheUmeirahBegum (u asked me so cutely 😳)

I've actually written another version in the form of a SS ...

Originally posted by: NAKSH_Abi

awesome...😊

Thank you so much!