IshRa FF : ||Tum Dena Sath Mera||(chap 17/pg 132) 17th OCT Th #1 - Page 40

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awesome update
so param ki entry ho gyi
awww raman is so cute
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thanks for pm...
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lovely update
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param... evil😡

pleae jaldi sy raman ko wapis lay ao... i hope param does not show his true color before raman arrival and harm ishita,,,,,,

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awsum update yr..
so this creepy param is back..
continue soon
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cute update...
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Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update
so param ki entry ho gyi
awww raman is so cute

Hehe, he is... and thank you...
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thanks for pm... Welcome dear...

warna mien update miss kar deti... Aww.. Sorry for late pm...
lovely update Thank you..
raman ko mumbai jana para😭 But he will be back on next update... 😉

param... evil😡 😆

pleae jaldi sy raman ko wapis lay ao... i hope param does not show his true color before raman arrival and harm ishita,,,,,, No, he will not... Param ko yaha le aya so that Toshi jee can see Ishita's kindness...

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cute update...
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Back with the next chapter... Do read and don't forget to comment...

Chapter 11

"Aiyyo Murgan !! fridge mein koi sabzi nehi hai.." Ishita murmured when she was going to make dinner and find the fridge empty...

( Ishita : There's no vegetable in the fridge.. )

"Ab mein kya karu?? Neelu... Haan Neelu... Who meri madad kar sakti hai !! Par usse abhi mein baat kaise karu?? Agar koi usse yaha atein hue dekh liya toh !!! Raman bhi yaha nehi yaha nehi hai.. Nehi.. Nehi.. Mein yeh khatra nehi utha sakti.. Phir.. Phir kya mein khud bazaar chali jau.. Waise bhi paas mein hi toh hai.. Haan !! Yehi sahi rahega.." She thought...

( Ishita : What should I do now ?? Neelu.. Yah Neelu.. She can help me.. But how will I contact with her?? If anyone finds her coming here.. Even Raman is not here.. No.. No I can't take any risk !! Then should... Should I go alone ?? Even the market is near the house.. Yeah, this will be right... )

"Mein khud hi chali jati hoon !!" She took the purse and walked out...

( Ishita : Yeah, I should go alone... )

She locked the flat and was going to leave when she collide with Param, her purse fall, "Umm.. Maaf kijiye !! Meine aapko dekha nehi..."

( Ishita : Sorry !! I didn't see you... )

"Arey koi baat nehi Ishita jee !!" Param said while taking the purse, just then Rinki walked out from her house "Are bha.." But she found Param there, so she stopped "Ishita, aap kahin jaa rahi ho??"

( Param : It's okay Ishita jee...

Rinki : Ishita, are you going somewhere?? )

"Haan, Rinki.. Who ghar pe koi sabzi nehi thi... Toh bazaar ja rahi thi.." Ishita replied..

( Ishita : Yeah, Rinki... Actually there's no vegetable in house... So, just going market... )

"Ohh !! Par ruko.. Mein bhi chalti hoon..." She said and looked at Param, "Jiju, aap andaar jao, di hai ghar pe.." Param once looked at Ishita and walked in...

( Rinki : Ohh !! But wait.. I am coming with you.. Jiju, you go inside, di is there.. )

Rinki looked at Ishita, "Kya bhabhi?? Aap akeli bazaar ja rahi thi !! Agar bhai ko pata chalta yeh toh woh mujhpe bohot gussa hote !! Aapne mujhe bataya kyu nehi??"

( Rinki : What bhabhi ?? You are going alone at market !! If bhai comes to know about this, he will be mad on me !! Why didn't you tell me ?? )

"Mujhe maaf kar dena Rinki.. Meine tumhe phone karne ke bare mein socha par phir socha tum shayd busy hogi, iss liye tumhe takleef nehi di itni choti si baat ke liye..." Ishita said apologized...

( Ishita : I am sorry Rinki, I thought to call you but then I thought you must be busy, that's why I didn't bother you for this small thing.. )

"Koi baat nehi bahabhi, par agli bar aise maat karna.."

( Rinki : It's okay bhabhi, but don't do this next time.. )

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Ishita and Rinki were walking on road when Ishita asked, "Rinki ek baat puchoon ??"

( Ishita : Can I ask you something ?? )

"Haan !!"

(Rinki : Yes !! )

"Paramjeet, woh kya karte hai?? Aur tumhe lagta hai ki who hamari Simmi ke liye theek hai??" Ishita asked hesitated...

( Ishita : Paramjeet, What does he do?? And do.. Do you think he is perfect for our Simmi... )

"Param jiju, NRI hai, who India ke bahar rehte hai aur mummy papa ne unko pasand kiya hai toh achha hi hoga.. Par.. Par aap kyu pooch rahe ho??" Rinki asked curiously..

( Rinki : Param jiju is NRI, he lives out of India.. And mummy papa choose him, so they must be find him nice.. But.. But why did you ask?? )

"Nehi.. Nehi.. Kuch nehi.. Tumhe pata hai na yeh Simmi ki puri life ki baat hai.. Iss liye bas pocha !!" She said smiling...

( Ishita : No.. No nothing, you know it's about Simmi's life... That's why I asked !!! )

They went to the market and bought vegetables, after they coming back to the complex, Ishita heard a familiar voice calling her... She searched the area and found a girl coming to her running, "Mihika !!" She moaned...

"Ishu akka, aap.. Yaha !! Mumbai mein !!" Mihika greeted her and hugged her excitedly..

( Mihika : Ishu akka, you here.. In Mumbai !! )

"Mein achhi hoon !! Tu yaha !!" Ishita asked shocked..

( Ishita : I am fine but you here?? )

"Mein yaha rehti hoon !! Par aap yaha aur pairi appa who kaise hai ??" Mihika sked and looked at Rinki confused...

(Mihika : I lived here but you here.. How's pairi appa ?? )

Ishita's smile flew away, "Akka !! Sab theek hai.."

( Mihika : Akka, is everything alright ?? )

"Mihika chalo hamare sath, bhabhi chalo andaar.." Rinki said and took her, Mihika noticed her calling Ishita bhabhi'...

( Rinki : Mihika, come with us.. Bhabhi let's go inside.. )

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"Akka, kya hua ?? Kuch toh bolo.." Mihika asked worried as they sit on sofa..

( Mihika : Akka what's wrong ?? Say something... )

Ishita looked her with teary eyes and told her everything "Kya ?? Itna kuch ho gaya aapke life mein aur aapne hume bataya tak nehi ??" Mihika asked hurt...

( Mihika : What ?? All this happened in your life but you didn't bother to inform us... )

"Mujhe maaf dena Mihika, par yeh sab itni jaldi mein hua iss liye mein kuch nehi bata payi aur yaha akar tumhare ya phir chitti ke number bhi nehi tha toh mein tum loho se baat nehi kar pai..." Ishita said looking down...

( Ishita : I am sorry Mihika, all this happened in a hurry that's why I couldn't tell you and later I don't have your or chitti's number here, so couldn't able to contact with you... )

Suddenly Rinki's phone rings and she excused, "Akka, kya aap iss shadi se khush ho??" Mihika asked...

( Mihika : Akka, are you happy in this marriage ?? )

"Haan Mihika, aur Raman Woh bohot ache hai, who meri bohot care bhi karte hai..." Ishita replied..

( Ishita : Yes Mihika and Raman, he is very nice person and he really cares for me a lot... )

"Phir unhone ghar pe kisi ko kuch kyu nehi bataya aapke bare mein??"

( Mihika : Then why didn't he inform about you to his family ?? )

"Who batayenge, ek baar who Delhi se wapas ajaye phir batayenge.." Ishita replied smiling...

( Ishita : He will.. After coming back from Delhi, he will tell them... )

Then they had a talk, later Rinki too joined them and Mihika and Rinki became friends... Later Ishita excused, "Rinki please take care of my Akka, she is so innocent.."

"Don't worry Mihika, we all are here.."

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Later Ishita and Rinki see off Mihika and walked in their respective house, Ishita directly walked to the kitchen, just then lights turned off "Aiyyo !!" She murmured and went to light up the candles when she found a shadow... But she ignored as she thought it was her illusion.. She was lighting up the candles when again she saw the shadow...

"Yeh saya !!" She followed the shadow..

( Ishita : This shadow !! )

"Kaun.. Kaun hai ??" She grabbed a vase for protection and towards the shadow, "Meine kaha kaun hai waha??" but she didn't get any answer and found the shadow moving towards her, she get scared and was going to hit with the vase but the person hold her hand "Arey Jhansi Ki Rani yeh hai hoon !! Tera pati, Raman..."

( Ishita : Who.. Who's there?? Speak up.. I said who's there??

Raman : Jhansi Ki Rani, it's me your husband, Raman... )

"Raman.." She moaned and dropped the vase, "Phir kuch bola kyu nehi ??"

( Ishita : Then why didn't you speak ?? )

"Arey mein pani pee raha tha, par tut oh mujhe jaan se maar hi daal rahi thi.." Raman says shocked..

( Raman : I was drinki, but you were going to kill me.. )

"Agar aise andhere mein aaoge toh aisa hi hoga na ..." Ishita said rolling her eyes "Aur waise bhi mein darr gait hi.."

( Ishita : If you come in dark like this then that will happen with you only and by the way I was get scared... )

"Haww !! " He chuckled and pulled her for a hug...

"Par aap aye kab?? Aap toh kal aane wale the na ??" Ishita asked confuse..

( Ishita " But when did you come?? You suppose to come tomorrow... )

"Kyu?? Mein ek din pehle nehi aa sakta kya??"

( Raman : Why?? Can't I come a day before?? )

"Nehi aisi baat nehi hai... Meine aapko dekha nehi aate hue.."

( Ishita : No.. Nothing like that.. I didn't see you coming... )

"Haan !! Tum jab apni behen ke sath busy thi tab mein aaya tha aur sidha uss ghar pe gaya tha aur jab tum aur Rinki niche gaye the tab hi mein yaha yaha, socha ki tumhe surprise dunga, par tum hi mujhe surprise kar diya aise mera welcome kar ke.." He explained and shook his head...

( Raman : Yeah... I came when you were busy with your sister and directly went to that house and when you and Rinki went down, I came here.. Thoght to give you a surprise but you gave me surprise by welcome me like this... )

Ishita looked down and said "Par meine toh darwaza bandh kiya tha.."

( Ishita : but I locked the door... )

"Oh, meri Madrasan, mere paas dusri chabi thi.."

( Raman : My Madrasan, I have dublicate key.. )

"Aur apka.." But before she could say Raman said "tumhara yeh jasoos giri baad mein kare?? Abhi bohot bhook lagi hai.."

( Ishita : And.. How's..

Raman : Oho, do your enquiry session later, I am very hungry... )

"Par Raman, meine abhi tak khana nehi banaya.."

( Ishita : But Raman, I didn't make food yet... )

"Okay, phir chalo.." Raman pulled her when she said "Abhi?? Par kaha??"

( Raman : Okay then let's go..

Ishita : Now?? But where?? )

"Yeh Mumbai hai meri jaan, yaha tumhe sab kuch kabhi bhi kahi bhi mil sakti hai, toh chalo.." He dragged her from there...

( Raman : It's Mumbai, my dear.. You will get anything whenever you want, so now let's go.. )

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"Khana kaisa tha ??" Raman asked as they had their dinner in a Punjabi dhaba...

( Raman : How's the food ?? )

"Bohot hi achha, Raman.. "

( Ishita : It's delicious, Raman... )

"Dekha, meine kaha tha agar tum ek bar Punjabi khana khaogi toh kabhi iska taste nehi bhoologi..." Ishita smiled...

( Raman : see, I told you, if you have Punjabi food once, you will never forget it's taste.. )

Then they took a leave from there, Raman was driving the car whereas Ishita was enjoying the breeze when suddenly she saw Param...

"Raman, ruko.. Woh Param hai na ??"

( Ishita : Raman, stop.. Isn't Param ?? )

Raman looked at him through mirror and said "Haan.."

( Raman : Yes... )

"Par who ladki kaun hai uske sath??" She asked..

( Ishita : But who's that girl with him ?? )

"Arey jagga jasoos, ho sakta hai uski koi risteydar ho, shayd uski engagement ke liye ayi hai.." Raman casually said and she convinced and nodded, they leave from there...

( Raman : Jagga Jasoos may be sh's his relative, maybe she came here for his engagement... )

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"Raman yaha kyu ruke??" Ishita asked as he stopped the car near the beach...

( Ishita : Raman, why did you stop here ?? )

"Aao !!" He took her near the sea and they enjoyed the sea-shore, when Raman forwarded his hand "Kya ??" She frantically asked...

( Raman : Come !!

Ishita : What ?? )

"Let's dance.."

"Par koi music nehi hai aur mujhe yeh sab aata bhi nehi.." She said shyly...

( Ishita : No music and even I don't know how to dance... )

"Tumhe jaanne ki zaroorat bhi nehi hai, sirf mujhe pakdo.." Ishita smiled when he played a song and she hold his hand and he made her hold properly... Raman put his hand on her waist under her saree, when his hand toched her bare waist, she felt a shiver and she looked down shyly...

( Raman : You don't need to know, just hold me tight... )

Background

Mila hoon ab jo tum se

Hai dil ko mere kasam se

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..

Tujhe hai paaya Rab se,

Hai dil ko mere kasam se

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..

Har pal haseen sa huaa hai

Saanson ko tune chhuaa hai

Badhi tujhse nazdeekiyaan

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.. mm..

Mila hoon ab jo tum se

Hai dil ko mere kasam se

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.. mm..

Jab se juda tujhse jiya

Chain o qaraar dil ko mila (x2)

Jab bhi rahoon sang tere

Bhoolun har gham shiqwa gila

Tere ishq ka hi nasha hai

Meri rooh tak mein basaa hai

Tune aankhon se jo chhuaa

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila.. mm..

Mila hoon ab jo tum se

Hai dil ko mere kasam se

Sukoon mila, sukoon mila..

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Next morning, Ishita walked out from washroom and find him sleeping peacefully, she then looked at the clock...

"Aiyo Raman.." She murmured and went to wake him up, "Raman utho... Office nehi jana hai aaj ??"

( Ishita : Raman... Wake up.. Don't you have office today ?? )

"Yaar, 5minute aur, please.."

( Raman : 5minute more... )

She smiled and was going to leave when he pulled her hand and she fall on his hard chest... "Kya hai yeh !!"

( Ishita : What's this !! )

"Meine kya kiya?? Mein sirf meri biwi se pyar kar raha hoon.." He said while pulling her more close...

( Raman : What I did ?? I just make love with my wife.. )

That time water droplets fall from Ishita's hair, Raman looked at her intensely and slowly tucked her wet hair behind her ear and slowly decrease the distance between them , Ishita closed her eyes when they heard the door bell, Ishita quickly straighten up and ran away from there to open the door...

"Rinki tum ??" Ishita opened the door..

( Ishita : Rinki you ?? )

"Bhabhi bhai kaha hai??" She asked horrified..

( Rinki : Bhabhi, where's my bhai ?? )

"Kyu kya hua??" sab theek hai na ??" She asked worried..

( Ishita : Why ?? What happen ?? IS everything alright ?? )

Just then Raman walked out from his room ehile rubbing his eyes " What happen Rinki ??"

"Bhai, maa aapko dhund rahi hai.. Unhone aapko room mein nehi dekha aur phone bhi kia tha.."

( Rinki : Bhai, maa is searching for you.. She didn't find you in your room, she even called you... )

"Oh shit.." Raman quickly grabbed his phone from table and walked out with Rinki, but in next moment he walked in the house and kissed on Ishita's forehead "Mein baad mein aata hoon.. Dhayan rakhna.." He left..

( Raman : I'll come later.. Take care... )

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"Yes maa.." Raman said huffing...

"Kaha that tu?? Mera phone bhi nehi uthaya.."

( Toshi jee : Where were you?? You didn't receive my call... )

"Jogging pe gaya tha aur phone silent pet ha, yeh batao hua kya hai..." Raman asked tensely...

( Raman : I went to jogging and my phone was in silent, you tell me what's wrong !!! )

"Kal Simmi ka engagement hai aur taiyari karni hai.." Toshi jee said..

( Toshi jee : Tomorrow is Simmi's engagement and we have to do the preparations... )

"Oh come on maa, you called me so early to discuss this small thing.. I will arrange everything, you don't worry.. Even Mihir is here too.. " He said irately and walked in his room, Rinki followed him..

"Bhai Bhabhi will attend the function na ??" Rinki asked, Raman shook his head and walked in washroom...

"Cool, Rinki let's plan something..." She thought and smiled mischievously...

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So, how's the part?? Don't forget to comment...

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Fantastic update. Param kameena yahan bhi! Hope Raman & Ishita attends engagement function together...

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