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nice update😃...w8ing 4 next part😊
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here we go with the next part but before there i must tell you that i use to write about a particular scene and mostly emphasize on bringing humour in the situation or the dialogues.rona dhona is not my types so i can't write on an emotional part but can write on bringing humour in utterly emotional scenes you will get to know about this blabbering later on now lets go for this

Raman came down to his family to bid them good bye and seeing him the situation goes as-

Romi-bhai aap tho hamme hi pechaan mein ni aa re ho tho aapko aur koi kya pehchanega???

Mihir-par jo bhi ho aap in kapdo mei mast lagre ho

Romi-chennai di kudiyan tho gaiii...

MR Bhalla-sai hai bhai

Raman-kya papa...

Mrs Bhalla-oye mere puttar nu tang karna band karo.kisike nazar na lage.aapna khayal rakhna.

Raman-haa maa, aap log bhi.

Mihir in his mind-aab thode time ke liye bhai ki daant ka dar tho hatega .aab roj details tho ni dena padega.

Raman to Mihir-aur sun koi galti ni honi chahiye yaha aur saare ditails mujhe roj chaiye samjha aur koi galti hui tho dekh liyo.

Mihir-aapko mind reading bhi aati hai????{asked shockinglty}

Raman-paagal tho ni ho gaya na

Raman-accha main chalta hu.bye and take care,

Raman all set to go on his journey,comes to airport and board flight but being Raman he can't waste his time sitting doing nothing in the flight for a long time,so,he put out a file and starts to evaluate it.
but much to his despair,there comes his seat partner or rather say the bordening partner.

Partner-Hello mister, I am Abhay and you are???

Raman-Raman

Partner-vaise i am from chennai itself.you know hometown,my hometown is chenai.now u will ask if my hometown is chennai then why i am here,in delhi?Haina,then let me tell you that ,actually my father wanted me to work in chennai itself but i got job in a big firm in mumbai and then got transfered to delhi actually not completely transferred,i just shifted here and got my pending leaves.so basically i will join after my leaves.and for now i am going to chennai to meet my family.
you know who is my boss?well you must have heard about him,he is RKB,the heir of Bhalla industries and you know i am his favourite man. i do not have a habit of talking much so now you tell me something about you.

Raman in his mind-company mein aisse namune bhi hai and that too my favourite man,my foot.agar main yaha sirf raman na hoke RKB hota na phir isse dekhta par beta do din maje le phir tujhe kaam main dooga

Raman to his dear seat partner-i also work for the same man.and pointing towards his file he add-now may i..
.
Partner-yes ,yes, ofcourse vaise agar tumhe raman sir se kuch kaam ho tho mujhse bolna,arre sir mujhe bahut mante hai.mai boluga tho sab kaam chodke pehle tumhara hi kaam dekhege.samjhe,

Raman-ha jarur

Prtner-vaise kya,kha jaa re ho,Chennai????

Raman to himself-nai raaste mai utar jauga,tera khoon karne ke liye.

Raman-ji,kyoki yeh plane wahi jaata hai

Raman in his mind-yaar,papa ne tho common man vali baat jyada hi seriously le li arre chennai pahuchne tak yho wait kar lete.kya jaroorat thi economy class mein bhejne ki.yaar,aaj tak tho bas business class mein hi baitha hu vo bhi shanti se aur yaha ye ek namoona mil gaya jisne chup rehna ni sikha

Partner-aur batao tumhaari family me kaun kaun hai?mere tho amma,appa,ek sister aur bahut saare relatives and friends hai.tumhaare??

And with this raman lost it,he gives the man an angry glare and get him shut by his words

Raman-agar tere muh se aab ek aur shabd nikla tho tere chai mein jeher milake abhi ke abhi bhagwaan ko pyaara kar duga.

to himself-patani iss ek mahine mein kya kya hoga jab starting hi itni jabardast ho gai
.
and now he reads his file in peace as the intimidated fellow dared not to speak a single syllable let alone to complete a sentence.

whereas in ishita's home

a melodious sound coming out of a room.

Abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi
Jagi dhadkan nayi
Jaana zinda hoon main toh abhi
Kuch aisi lagan iss lamhe mein hai
Ye lamha kahaan tha mera
Ab hai saamne
Issey chhoo loon zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa
Khushiyaan choom loon
Yaa ro loo'n :'( zaraa
Mar jaaoon ya jee loon zaraa

Ho o.. abhi mujh mein kahin
Baaqi thodi si hai zindagi

mihika coming in the room
Mihika-ishu akka, aab tak tho sabko pata lag gaya hai ki hamari singer aaj not so good mood main hai.kya ho gaya bolo na???

Ishita-arre yaar,aaj mere sarre appointments khatam ho gaye the aur vo senior doctor ne mujhe apne do appointments de diye aur vo bhi chote baccho ke.

Mihika-arre tho isme kya,aapko tho vaise bhi chote bachon ko treat karna pasand hai tho kya ho gaya???

Ishita-arre usne apne appointment cancel kare kyoki unhe aapni wife ke saath movie dekhne jaana tha.matlab agar main waha na hoti tho vo bechare bacche...

Mihika-arre akka chodo na aab tho sab ho gaya naa.waise suno kal meri freedom ko last day hai tho mujhe aapke saath enjoy garna hai.OK.so you are coming with me tomarrow.

Ishita-as if i do have any other choice?? tell me the plan

Mihika-yes,you don't have any other choice,so the plan is;pehle meri office attire ka selection then lunch at your favourite restaurant which is near by airport then shopping and back to home and no night party as per vadu akka's strict instructions.and for now come to have dinner.

Raman & Ishita take their dinners and went to sleep waiting to meet their destiny rather say to meet the upcoming joke of life.

next afternoon ishita all set to go for lunch after completeing a great task i.e. choosing outfits for her baby sister which is no less than fighting a battle

Ishita-lets go mihika aur kitni der?????

Mihika-ha challo,jiju and akka are there and now we just need to go to their car downstairs.so lets go
but today no typical south indian food

And here Raman's flight was about to land

Raman to himself-first thing i am gonna do is to go to a nearby restaurant and have food

his flight land and he checks out,find a cab and reach to a nearby restaurant
here enters Ishita and toli and both the parties ask for their orders.Raman for non veg and Iyers for veg.but the waiter mistakenly mixed the two orders and ends up giving Raman veg and Iyers non veg dishes.
Raman being really hungry forget about his order and started to eat whatsoever was being served.but tension was to the Iyers.feeling that the dishes looks somewhat different from the ones they asked for.they ask the waiter about the same and the poor soul blurted out the name of non veg dishes and here the instincts of Ishita pricked her and she starts to shout on the waiter for mismanagement.

Raman's back was facing the Iyer table so he couldn't see them but he was listening to the shouting lady very intently as if io gather something from the wordings but only chuckles on imagining the waiter's plight who was at receiving end.being it to be in tamil he couldn't fathom anything.
ultimately she comes to rest warning the waiter not to do such thing again.

The poor soul lefts from there but raman caught him and asked him why the lady was shouting and as the waiter told him about the switching of their orders mistakenly,raman tell him

Raman-any other day i would have strangled you for this but today i was really hungry so i am not saying even a bit but on second thought you have had enough for the complete month in just 45 minutes' lecture of the lecture queen and went away from there to know about his stay and settlements and to take rest for the remaining day.

And the Iyer clan without going for shopping retired to their home without even taking their lunch.



Here ends the day. now the question arises what will happen when they will come face it face,to face each other.




""""""""PRECAP-ABHI THO BAS SHURUAAT HAI,AAGE AAGE DEKHO HOTA HAI KYA""""""""


JAYADA BADA HOGAYA NA,AAB CHOTE CHOTE HI LIKHUGI.PLEASE TELL 'HOW WAS IT GOOD OR BAD.



THANKS FOR READING
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nidhi,awesome story dear.precaps are intresting.thanks for regular update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's gud jayda bada b ni h aur chota b..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Arreee wah wah... What a story yaar...👏
Totally loved it..👏
Lol it sooo funny...😆
Now raman in chennai... Cool..😆😛
My god when raman and ishu meet maza ayaga..😳😆
Read 2-5 in a gooo..😉
Pl. Give long updates like this..
That flight and hotel incidents were sooo funny..🤣
Continue soon...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome part
Do continue soon and do continue with ur long updates 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AngelSREE

<font size="3" color="#996699">Arreee wah wah... What a story yaar...👏</font>

<font size="3" color="#996699">Totally loved it..👏</font>
<font size="3" color="#996699">Lol it sooo funny...😆</font>
<font size="3" color="#996699">Now raman in chennai... Cool..😆😛</font>
<font size="3" color="#996699">My god when raman and ishu meet maza ayaga..😳😆</font>
<font size="3" color="#996699">Read 2-5 in a gooo..😉</font>
<font size="3" color="#996699">Pl. Give long updates like this..</font>
<font size="3" color="#996699">That flight and hotel incidents were sooo funny..🤣</font>
<font size="3" color="#996699">Continue soon...😃</font>





thank u for this encouraging and longest comment i have ever received. well most probably the next part would be today.
Please can u tell me about how to do pms and what is buddy list.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb yaar.
PS : i like the title of your FF " View of life "
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Mihir-papa aapne bhai ko chennai bheja aur job diya,par job thoda dhang ka tho de dena tha na,jab bhai ko pata chalega tho wo bahut gussa hoga.

Mr Bhalla-ha,ha,pata hai.usse gusse ke alava aata hi kya hai aur waise maine pehle iske baare mein socha tha.

Mihir-tho mujhe bhi tho batao

Mr Bhalla dekh wo har waqt hamaare ni tho company ke bare main hi sochta hai,apne ko ni dekhta.pagal hai ekdum.tho isliye maine usse yeh choti si job plus free ka holiday package diya hai

Mihir-par aapko pata hai na ki wo uss incident ke baad holiday wagerah pasand ni karta

Mr Bhalla-ha,aur yeh bhi pata hai ki uski koi galti ni thi bas faltu mei abhi bhi wahi aatka pada hai aur khudko hi blame karta hai

Mrs Bhalla-ha,sahi keh re ho aap Bhalla ji,aab bas usse apne kam mein hi rehna pasand hai.kaash wo pehle jaisa ban jaaye

Mihir-haa pehle waale bhai se kam darr lagta tha,aab wala tho meri band bajake rakhta hai


Romi comes in and listens only the last part by mihir and then adds his two cents to the ongoing conversation

Romi-patani bhai, tu hi raman bhai se itna kyoo darta hai,mujhe dekh main tho mast rehta hu,isiliye bhai ne mujhe meri dream bike bhi dilva di,naaki teri terah fattooo

and here starts the bickering session of two brothers in the presence of laughing audiance in the name of their parents

Mihir-tu na kam bol warna mai bhai ko teri uss gf ke baare main bata duga

Romi-ha,ha,bata do.yeh bhi bata dena ki aap bhi mere saath the

Mihir-tho main yeh bhi bata duga ki tune kitne peg maare the

Romi-jao batao roka kisne hai,par mai bhi batauga ki mr. sharma ki file kaise miss hui thi aur yeh bhi ki in the middle of presentation what happened that you had to suddenly went out that too postponing it

Mihir-how do u know about it,i haven't tell anyone about it except maa...

and then he looks at her with blank experation and ask her

Mihir- maa aapne isse kyu bataya,aabh yeh mujhe blackmail karega.this is not fare...maaa

Mrs Bhalla-puttar mai tho...

but not letting her complete her words romi started

Romi-bhai maa ko do-teen peg lene ke baad pata kaha chalta hai ki kiska secret khol ri hai

Mihir-maa galat baat hai yeh.This is cheating.

Mr Bhalla who was enjoying the family drama to the core stepped in the conversation to have fun

Mr Bhalla-arre aab kya tum peene pe bhi rok lagaoge

Romi-papa hum thaire punjabi and daaroo-shaaroo is in our blood.na piye tho punjabi thodi kehlayege

Mihir-haa papa,thoda hi sahi peeta tho main bhi hoo.bas bhai hi ni peeta

Romi-ha tho hum sab jab piye hoge tho gaadi kaun chalayega,yeh sochke bhai ni peeta. u know DON'T DRINK AND DRIVE

ARRE AAB CHALO JAO JAAKE SO JAAO

at raman's place

Raman-wah!kya mehal mila??? papa is great.chal beta raman so jaa kal apni hi company me job karna hai,kisi aur ke orders sunne hai

at ishita's place

Ishita-kitna bakwaas din tha,baahar gaye aur bina enjoy kare hi waapas aa gaye.kaash aab aisa din dobara na aaye

MORNING TIME

AT 5:00 am

Raman's phone rings and he fell down the bed and to shut the phone up he gets up holding his aching back

On the other end was the mother of our angry young man or currently, angry young funny man

Raman-hello haa maa

Mrs Bhalla-puttar tu uth gaya,vaha koi takleef tho ni hui na

Raman looking at his bed-nai bilku nai maa, bahut kush hu mai yaha infact aaj se jyada khush kabhi ni hua hu

Mrs Bhalla-changa puttar...leh apne papa se baat kar

Romi-oh ho maa hamne kya gunah kiya ???phone loud speaker pe rakho

Mr Bhalla-oh puttar tu kaisa hai??thik tho hai na...

Raman-theek!!!!!papa yeh kaisa ghar hai?ghar chodo kaisa bed hai??aapko pata hai phone aane par aur uske alava raat me.paanh baar main bed se gir gaga.yaha meri kamar tut gayi aur aap pooch re ho thik hai kya????yeh sab chodo aur pehle iss romi aur mihir ko ek ek lagao,inhe badi hassi aa ri hai na

Romi while trying to control his laugh-sorry bhai sorry bas imagination ne hassi dila di ke aap kaise giree hoge

Raman-chup kar,tujhe tho mai baad mein dekh looga, aur yeh bata tum dono itni jaldi kaise uth gaye????tum tho10 baje bhi na uttho!!!!

Romi-bhai wo bhi aapki hi wajah se

Raman-matlab?????

Romi-arre bhai,aapko tho aadat hai jaldi uthne ki par hame nahi aur aapki wo alarm clock band hi ni ho ri hai.jaldi uska password batao,taaki main usse shaant karu aur chain se so jaau

Raman-bewakuff kuch try tho kar leta...

Romi-kiya naa aapka, mera,mummy papa ka naam simmi dii aur rinky ka bhi,company ka ,company ke managr ka iske alava aapka phone no.,aapki car ka no. sab kuch kar liya

Raman-aab itni mehnat kar hi li tho mihir ka naam bhi daal le

Mihir-tho main hoo password...

Raman-nahi bewakoof tera naam...tho itni jaldi password ke liye phone kiya tha...tumhara tho kuch ni hona.bye.

and with this he cuts the phone and said to himself-chalo fresh hoke walk pe jaata hoo

Ishita iyer's house

Ishita-amma mai jaldi se walk pe jaati hoo aur wapis aake iss mihika ko office jaane ke liye torture karti hu

Mrs Iyer-torture matlab????

Igita-matlab isse thoda tang karna hai,thodi taang khichai karni hai.aaj se madam ka office shuru ho raha hai tho starters ke liye itna irritation tho banta hai na amma..

Mrs Iyer-tum dono kab sudhrogeee?????

Ishita- not so soon amma.aapka yeh dream shaayad hi true ho kyuki main tho ni badloogi aur iske badalne ka koi chance hi nahi hai..

at 5:30 am

Raman-arre jaau kaha pe????yha ka tho kuch bhi ni pata.google map me search karta hoon...
30 seconds later
milgaya ek park,yahi jaata hoo

Ishita-jaldi park mai chalti hoo taki jaldii waapas aa jaooo

AND HERE COMES THE MOST AWAITED MOMENT
😆

Both raman and ishita enters from opposite gates into the park and starts their walk which soon got converted into running and while running they both bumps into each other

(NOW we will get the glance of their natures)

raman considers it to be his mistake and for ishita she considers it to be his mistake,yes his mistake cauzz being the epitome of perfection,she can't do any mistake and for now,this stranger who intrude her pleasant morning walk,is gonna have a tough time.and with this she started her accusing session that too in her native language anh this stranger's foreign language i.e. Tamil.


as before,this time also raman couldn't fathom about anything that was coming to him but as he considered himself to be at fault,so he politely said to this lady

Raman-Lady,i am really sorry

now she spoke in english

Ishita-sorry,!!sorry my foot.can't you walk seeing if anyone is coming to your way or not??? and here she goes again...

But getting a sorry from raman is not a normal thing but here he said sorry,and then also getting the scoldings and it was enough for him.now he comes with reply

Raman-oh madam!..you are absolutely right that was MY way not YOURS
so you came in my way and also lecturing me.WOW!!!!!

Ishita-oh hello,i always use this path,you came in my way.this is my space.

Raman-oh!so you want space..then join NASA.what are you doing here??go ...go...

Ishita-oh hello mister...listen

Raman-yes miss,i am listening

Ishita-you are...you are...you are just disgusting,an abnormal creature

Raman-oh madam!!always remember one thing,everyone is normal until you get to know them


And here, for the very first time Ishita do not get, to have an upper hand over any discussion and that too because of a stranger.so,out of frustration,she stomped her foot on the gronund and moved away

Raman with a plastered smile ,no no,grin-PAGAL MADRASAN
and with this he came back to his house.


LIKE THIS THEY MET FOR THR FIRST TIME-FACE TO FACE



""""""""""PRECAP-NOW ITS GONNA BE THE INTRODUCTION OF SUSPENCE"""""""""

😊


comment and tell me, how was it.
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Yeah finally 1st interaction hogya...
I yhkn mihika Raman k sath hi job krne wali h..

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