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Posted: 10 years ago
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UnRes ❤️

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You know what the first two lines pushed me to DFL 😳.. How true are these lines and I know you will understand its meaning ☺️ ☺️

Coming to the update , How beautifully can you write every time ?? I am jealous , Sacchi 😃. The way you have brought out the passion, that crazy love between the two along with desire. Certain things are meant to be just like these two. The way he tried explaining this to her and her insecurities so well put.

Eeekkksss.. Kissie ❤️. Can I like use the word drug here ?? Yes I will, Drugged in their thoughts and the outcome was beautiful indeed. Seriously Anu, I felt with the story and their pain. Glad you did not dwell in to their thoughts I would have got all emotional 😭😭

How much you love me ?? har jagah meri naam 🤣 .. Did you get what I mean here 🤣🤣 ?? Socho Socho 😆😆.. And you have hit puttar's weakness.. Getting another guy in between them, abh tho ye milan hokar hi rahega. Can't wait to read more.

For this brilliant update , Jhappi pa le 🤗❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Anu awesome start ...

wow ishita's feeling while looking to his eyes, even he reciprocated the same....
the feel between IshRa was beautifully written, each and every feeling was so amazingly written...
ooh it was dream, but the desire between them is full on 😉...

The lines u wrote in Italics was so lovely❤️❤️❤️❤️,
He was in her. in her very soul. She belonged to him- the word very spoke many things there...wow brilliant line yaar👏👏👏
raman getting to know wat was she dreaming, oh raman would have comforted her but vihaan😡😡...

u have stopped the story in such a position so eagerly to know what happened between them...

the title is just apt to the story⭐️...
very well written.👏...
waiting for next update...



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Posted: 10 years ago
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anu di ss from u🥳 it was superb😳 dream tha😲 it was hot😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was such a lovely read. Both desire each other hopelessly, yet keep each other at a bay!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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too hot to handle off to take a cold shower😳😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Out will go home and read aaram se

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Anu yaay finally an SS👏.
this is me after reading ☺️. how ell described their longing and them belonging to each other.😃
but then WTH happened 😕.don't make them be apart for long😭. me don't like it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start..
Very interesting...
waiting to know what will happen next...
Please pm me the next update...😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Anuuu... omggg! Brilliant startt yaarrr!! The first two lines gave me an idea of what the update is all about! Uff!

I felt Ishita's and Raman's pain! How sadd! What made them apart!? And Goddd.. that intimate encounter, sach mei I thought that ws for real, but that turned out to be a dream! Shucks! Nevertheless that dream ws hot sensuous! Desire burning couple!

Vihaannn... true villian in their love story.. Raman will not leave this man! Hahahhaha!

Chaloo.. ab addiction, seduction, desire sab hog khub saara! *facepalm*! ;-)

Cont soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow anu hot update.its too hot and touching my soul.ishitha and raman are equally hurted.i hopu u will continue this..:-)brilliantly written .loved it.their desires just awesome.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start please Update soon & please PM me

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