FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Hahahahaha Vee Diii..perfect and amazinggg updateee! I was ROFLing the whole time.. kithna jhot bolna padta hai... omgg! Lodhi garden gup chup..hayeee! And Bala-Guru-Abhi act was super se upar wala scene. Had a good laugh. Sach mei..

And toshiji's buscopan to bus kho fan was extremely hilarious that I felll off my bed laughing! ;-)

Raman Ishita getting desperate...awww!

Looking forward for the next part... Aur mei chali Gudniteee! Thanku for making me laugh in this midnight! ;-)

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143rhb

@143rhb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

Awesome update.

Waiting for "abi na jao chod ke"

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khushi

@khushi_shankar

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#173

I just loved Chapters 15 A and B! Both of them were just perfect! I even read them a few times because they were just so good! Amazingly written!

Keep up the good work!

Chapter 15 C was good too, especially the first half with Ishita and Raman. They are just so cute in the story! Little Ruhi was just so adorable in both parts!

But, the only thing I wish you could done is to include the Panditji fooling Abhi. That would have made great humor. (Normally, I am not so demanding but I really think you could have pulled it off well. This was jsut my one desire.)

Rest all was good.

Par mein bas ek cheez se naraaz hoom ... mujhe in dono parts ki PM kyum nahi mili? Warna mein yeh chapters jaldi padhleti "

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maaloo

@maaloo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Amazing update as usual Vee.. Love the Lodhi garden setting.. and love the chupa chupi wedding too.. wanting to be with each other but not able to ..

Reminds me of the scene from the movie Saathiya starring Vivek oberoi and Rani Mukherjee..

And the rings on the thali part.. that was superb..

Why didnt I think of all this when I got married?

Now I am looking forward to the phone call.. Raman to Mrs. Bhalla on wedding night.

Bejaan Dil Ko Tere Ishq Ne Zinda Kiya
Phir Tere Ishq Ne Hi Is Dil Ko Tabah Kiya

Tadap Tadapke Is Dil Se Aah Nikalti Rahi Hai
Mujhko Saza Di Pyaar Ki Aisa Kya Gunaah Kiya
To Lut Gaye Haan Lut Gaye
To Lut Gaye Hum Teri Mohabbat Mein

😳

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#175

Wonderful.update V.

Loved lodhi garden setting chup chup ke 😉

Raman saying about 'mang bharana' too good.

Bala convinced Abhi.

Awwa every had a stomach upset 😆

Now waiting for abhi na jao chodkar ..

First conversation as Mr and Mrs bhalla 😉

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cloudy24

@cloudy24

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#176

Wow...super updates😊 next update kab hai?😃

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beckysharp

@beckysharp

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Posted: 10 years ago

#177

Oh my V, this is absolutely marvellous, and something to take our minds off the bs that is going on in our show !

You have to visit India ! Then both of us could go and ogle at puttar whilst he is shooting !😆🤣

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143rhb

@143rhb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#178

Abhi na jao chod ke dil abi bhara nahi.

Yeh dil mage more yaar

Update soon.

Desperately waiting for next update

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#179

this was so sweet bala is so cute awesome update

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#180

Thank you for al the comments guys. I have another part ready, just need to do translations, but will post later today. It's a short part, just the rest of 15C which I didn't complete because I was feeling down from all the spoilers and KP leaving rumours etc.

Anyway, Part 16 is based around one of my all time fav songs Abhi Na Jao Chodh Ke, Ki Dil Abhi Bhara Nahi. It's about meeting and separating " Milan and Judai" . Hope you like it, will post soon. After this, no more updates for a while, since I have an unbelievably horrendously busy schedule from Monday. Will most likely post at the end of the week.

Haven't been sending PMs recently because I am on my ipad at home and it's too difficult to send mass PMs from the ipad. Sorry about that.

Thank you for reading.

Next part is dedicated to Paru, Vidya and the lovely ladies on our regular thread ( Becky, Anu, Shalz, Geno, Doc, Gan (where r u?) Aru ( where r u too?), Coco, Krishy and sorry if I've missed anyone) who have been keeping me positive through this really really shitty track and all the rumours. Yuguyz rock 😃

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