New Ishra SS: Muskurane ki Wajah Tum Ho....(chapter 16 on page 137) - Page 5

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Albeli26 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: smilesforever98

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First of all so sorry for commenting so late. Was caught up in studying and writing my own updates!

Its ok dear. I can understand. Studies comes first. I hope your exams are going well and about your story...we are always waiting for that.😉 Greedy ppls we

Back to the update...I loved this update! It was so cute! So finally IshRa are friends and have started to become more comfortable with each other, great and perfect progression! And Raman is going a step further by being mesmerized by Ishita's beauty and it was so adorable the way he was so lost in her. Oh ho protective Raman😉, seriously it was so nice to see the same Raman who let Ishita go in that saree to the party despite knowing she was uncomfortable is now being protective about her and covered her with a scarf. That moment really made the update beautiful for me.👏

Hey thanks for this beautiful analysis. Actually this is the beauty of arrange marriage. Every day u explore about ur partner new thing. And this stage finally came in ishra life. When u mentioned about saree incident, that time my mind clicked and I realsied why this things not clicked in my mind??? Silly me but thanks again for this brief analysis

And Mimi are so cute here, the way they were in the restaurant and so many meetings in such a small time.😆 Their love story has caught the bullet train😆

Bade miya toh bade miya, chote miya subhaan allah, actually mihir know ki bhi nahi phasaaya toh yeh jaaegi 😉

And one last thing, congrats on the 100 pages 🥳 although this is on the 96th page😆. Really happy for you! Your writing and this story deserve this completely and I understand how excited you must be right now! And I wish you many 100s of pages and looking forward to when this story goes to the second thread! Thank you for giving us this wonderful story, and keep on writing this fabulously! Looking forward to your next update!


Thanks dear for your wishes. Main yeh sab kabhi bhi nahi kar paati agar tum log mujhe itna pyaar nahi karte. Thus is all because of u ppls. Bas tum log issi tarah mujhe pyaar dete rahe toh 2nd thread par bhi pohoch jaaenge. Waise we all are waiting for 25th to get regular updates from u. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: shreyalvishra

Ok so you have crossed 100 buddy congratulations okay so u dont know me buddy let me first intoduce myself i m shreya . lets talk about ur story ummm unbelievably fantastic mindblowing and what not !!!! ... U knw what i started reading ur story yesterday 12:30am and i completed it at 4am trust me buddy mujhe pata bhi nhi laga time ka supurb !!! The way ishra were not getting their deserved love by each parent and they have progressed there relationship so well without even knowing raman helping ishu n there friendship was heart touching seriously man ... Waiting for next update eagerly !!!

hi sherya. sacchi bolun, I seriously don't know how much time I smiled while reading your beautiful comment and smiled. I seriously have no idea that my stoy is capable to bind ppls for almost 3.30 hrs. hats off to u. toy are seriously so sweet person and I am literally so happy by finding reader like u. and will always try to reach upto ur level. thanks buddy again for appreciating this work
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Hello Aarohi
sabse pehle a big congratulationsss for crossing 100 pages...i can understand how you must be feeling as i underwent the same feeling...may you cross many more milestones and get loved by everyone

sorry for being MIA from IF lately and not reading the last two parts...i received your PMs for both the parts and thank you so much for the PMs...i intentionally didn't res bcoz i didnt know when would i unres

but see finally i am here reading both parts together in a go

Part 12:

Ishita's thank you feelings were so sweet...it is actually true...when someone tries to fulfill ur dream for which you lost all your hopes long time back...you actually feel the same

and the hug was so heartfelt so nicely described...very thoughtfully written

Raman's inner battle was genuine...when you have decided to do something and then you yourself want to move back and oppose your own decision, the heart and the mind battle same way

Ishita's newly discovered feelings which are a mix of gratefulness, respect and love were so cute

awww dosti ho gayi dono ki...mujhe woh song yaad aa gaya tum ladki ho main ladka hoon aaya mausam dosti ka 😆😆😆

but i really liked how you made Ishita take a step...i mean why not...why will only a male take all the steps...very nice aarohi 👏👏

and Raman toh ek dum maan gaya dosti ko...no nakhre at all...he was too desperate 😆😆😆

and the name madrasan ke peeche login 🤣🤣🤣

oh ho Mihir Mihika ki bhi love story chalu hai boss...sahi hai sahi hai...dono superfast hain 20 din mein 9 meeting that too bahane bana banake

Ishita and Mihika's conversation was cute...that's how besties talk

all the sweet nothing moments like him noticing her excitement...Mihir congratulating Ishita...Raman and Mihika's moment...everything was so cute and close to reality...i mean that is how we all are in real life

mere biwi gir jaegi 😆 he is too possessive

lo Mihir ko notice hi karna bhul gaya Raman...he is behaving like a teenager in love 😆😆😆

jab aap bhabhi ko nihaar rahe the 🤣🤣🤣

Raman's self questioning session was nice

yeyyy celebration...Ishu truly deserves it and Raman agreeing so easily was surprising

and finally getting ready in evening

oh ho madam plans to kill raman with her looks and raman was shamelessly gazing at her but why not...khud ki hi biwi hai jitna marzi ghuro bhai 🤣🤣🤣

but his discomfort on seeing her visible cleavage was so cute...ek ache gentleman ki nishani types...plus i think his possessiveness for her was another reason why he wanted her to cover...obviously the sight is exclusively for him and nobody else

but i liked how he didnt tell her and yet made his point...i am sure in coming future when their relation progresses eventually all such discomfors and inhibitions will go

aarohi sorry for this late comment but this was such a cute part...loved every bit of it 👏👏👏

i hope my long comment covers up for the delay




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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
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this is my fastest unres i guess...i reserved coz i wanted both my comments to be one above another...i know it makes no sense 😆😆😆

one request Aarohi

hindi version aur english version ke beech space daal diya kar plz plz plz if you can

coming to update now...

lo Mihir ji mihika pe lattu...ghure hi jaa rahe hain bas...i liked this shy Mihika as well par warna show mein toh she is sherni

Aww Mihika's thought process for Ishita...her concern so sweet and lovable...she is a true friend and good that she is giving all the credit to Raman because he deserves it in every sense

roz daure padte hain 🤣🤣🤣 he and his one liners

Raman ne bhi notice kar li Mihir Mihika ki badhti nazdikiyaan...😊😊😊

loll he is gussa because there is no plan and Ishita thinks his gussa will bring earthquake 🤣🤣🤣

awww her voice calmed him...he is so much in love with her already...he drove patiently on her instructions without knowing where they were heeding was too shocking actually...Raman Bhalla and itna patient

orphanage thing was so thoughtful...you should give credit to me for it baby 😆😆😆

aww Raman befriended all the kids so lovingly...again the beauty of this relation where both have accepted each other's families and friends

Shivu wanted to marry Ishita so cute...we say so many kiddish things when we are kids

but his kiddish question about holds so much importance and depth

her hopeful eyes and his inhibitions...nicely written...you have not rushed things which is very good and natural

his questions to himself...i hope he finds all the answers soon and answers her too

Ishita is so cute and innocent...like a baby...i think that is also a result of her troubled childhood...when kids dont get that love at home...they search that love and affinity outside...and these unknown kids give her that solace...you have written it beautifully 👏👏👏

mud house was a very sweet idea...such a girly thing and i am glad he didnt make her fun but understood how such things are close to a girl...so good to see he understands her feelings her dreams and everything about her

song 😳

park wala conversation was painful to read...unke maa baap hai nahi aur humare hokar bhi nahi hain 😭😭😭...that part was just beautiful...i really felt the pain...brilliantly written 👏👏👏

eeeshhh why you had to mention about paranthe wali gali...i had a watery mouth reading it...i m missing delhi now...delhi ka roadside food is just yummm...i hate you for this

rainnn 😳

your description of rain was sooo beautiful...humse aake gale lag jaati hain so true

actually the rain is the same every year every season but our companions make it beautiful or dull...it is just the state of our mind...it looked more beautiful to him now because she was with him

last part hottt...dono ko kuch kuch hua aur rain toh humesha se catalyst rahi hai romance ki 😳😳

i love you for the song

again this was just a beautiful part...i am just liking this story too much

good job done girl and now you will have to give next update jaldi jaldi coz i am back to being active


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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: usaonly

Lovely update Aarohi instead of rain dance we get mud splash😆love MIMI to give alone time for Ishra.ishra get beautiful time to cherish their childhood time that both had lost long time back and they had heart content laught and behave like a kid again. Raman even ask Ishu to clime on the pipe to go back inside the house must be memorable experience for her to do thing she never did before.Now both are learning eaxh other and becoming understand and caring for each other very soon this friendship start to bloom and turn to be strong relationship. They think alike and have painful childhood memory and now they are together will hold each other hand and will slowly open up more to each other like Ishu taught. I really love this update hope we can still see light moment and their progress relationship before it turn to be their love. the last part lok like Ishu worry for Raman is there any past if him that we don't see yet. Thank you for lovely update dear and the PM dear.🤗🤗

thanks jum di for this beautiful review. I just tried to give some cute moments of ishra and I am so happy that you peoples enjoyed this. ya soon the friendship will blossom into love and ya soon I will introduce new thing better said Raman's past. just wait for upcoming parts
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nitii

i am sorry for not commenting all these time..

i have nothing to say..because you are--

pls continue soon😳

hello niti di. I saw your likes on my update but always wait for your comments and I am so happy to see it. your comments are always worth to wait. thanks for liking this story, I will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I like it... very different but interesting concept.. please continue and do PM me when you do!😊
Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice and different story...
Plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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no joota and chappal yaar...

this is amazing and interesting...
looking forward for next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Very interesting concept. Really looking forward to the next part.

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