TS: Palat Palat Palat *Part 2 - Pg. 8, English Translation Added*

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: qwerasdf
Nice 😊
Waiting for the next part

thank you! 😊 Hopefully you like the upcoming part. 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: avni_19
Doc, hi5 for 16 hrs study! Salute! Mujhe toh 9 ghaante se zyada nahi ho payega! My brain gets fried up! Hahahhahaha! ;-)

Back to update! Supercute and Adorable update! A true study break for me!

Tipsy to Talli Ishita! Hahahahhah! Maza aagayaaa By God! Raman amused and bewildered is fun to see.. kash serial mei aise kuch ho jaata hai!

Loved hw u incorporated DDLJ scene...

Jaldi cont kro... looking for the romantic Ishita! ;-)

lol Sunita last week before the exam so a lot to cram and a lot to review hence the long study hours. 😕 You are studying for exams as well? Good luck buddy!

Romantic biwi and bewildered Puttar is coming up in the next segment. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: swati62
Amazing,super cute

Thank you Swati! 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: -Gan-
Aww this is cute!! Very ishita raman esque 😆
I really wish they would give those about SRK smoking as dialogues to IShita.. Will kill two birds at one time.. Message for the audience abd the actor who plays Raman 😆😉

Update the next part soon 😊

G!!!! I couldn't agree more, Ishita should say these lines to Raman when he is trying to get close to her to serve the dual purpose this would be much better than me sending KP anti-smoking literature and smoking quit kit. 🤣

Right now finishing up cardio par I have so many songs to use that I can't decide which to use...so getting anxious because you know music and me! And I don't know how I will be able to write 'frisky' business between them..the inner grandma is not capable but this little story calls for some friskiness...😕 I am in a pickle. 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: maaloo
A talli ishita and a jealous Raman... Wah.. Great combination.. Oooh me likey!!! Awesome !
Good luck with ur exams doc.. Stress mat lo... You will rock it.. ⭐️

Thanks Maloo! I hope your wishes come true and I do well in the exam. 😃 Talli biwi and jealous puttar are gonna be romanchik in the next update in their classic style. 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: kaa1202
superb do cont soonn...

Thank you! 😃 Will update soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: cocololo123
Doc this is so cute. I would love to see Ishita act like this on the show. How great would that be. Also I just couldnt stop laughing while I was reading it. Cant wait for the next part.😛

Thanks Coco!!! I am glad you liked it, I wish that we get missus talli behaving all flirty with puttar on the show but till that day comes I am going to let my imagination run wild. 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: shadeslayer
Doc this was adorbs!!!! I like many here wanna see Biwi Talli and Puttar trying to handle her- A la DDLJ style
Waiting for the next part!!!!! (And for the songs!!!)

Thank you jee! Biwi talli and puttar handling is coming up with lots of songs! Don't know if I will be able to do justice to the romance but I will try my best. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: RS472
Great post.

Thanks! 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Veeann
That is just so cute doc. I love it. Please do complete it soon, but after you get lots of sleep !!!!!!!!!!
👏 👏 👏

🤗Jhappi to you! Vee I am glad you liked it, I can do emotional dialogues, Romance isn't my forte so this gonna be a disaster come next update. 😆 Chalo dekho kya hota hai.