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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

hercules is not lethal in ADVEHTURE

it came in another story named unnamed.

there Rama n leaves it for security of Ishit and Ruhi

thensome people try to attack there.

Hercules knocks every one of them out.

It has a different chain which Raman makes.

It has full of spikes.so you can't hold chain evrytime.

only Raman knows how to handle it

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

omgvthis was such cute sweet n emotional update

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shreya

@Shre28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Interesting. Loved the flashback and Hercules scene.

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Mehak Ashraf

@Mehak_KPian

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Great going Di. Loved the FB. :D

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Amina Choudhury

@sparkleamina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Thank you all for your fab comments...I am so happy you liked the first part...think @vidya_prasad is writing next or maybe Bhai will be...?

@prachi_vrushan, @mehak, @attitudebaby & @shinseen...thanks for your comments and reviews...it is much appreciated...comments like these inspire me to write more and also embarrass me cos you liked what I have written..!

You are all superstar ;)

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Amina Choudhury

@sparkleamina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Bhai,,,,thanks for the background of Hercules...I have yet to finish AdVehTure 1 and haven't read Unnamed so that is why I didn't know about Hercules that much...

Waiting for the next update on this...be interesting to see where the next writer takes the story...

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

ya forget to mention.Hercy is patch up master.

I used that in UNDEAD.

there when ever Ishra quarrel .Hercy will be sent to make patchup and it will not let them go unless they patchup and dissolve the matter

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Isha Pathare

@Isha_Pathare

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Dear Amina wonderful update beautifully written and the carnival incident was damn funny loved it

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Amina Choudhury

@sparkleamina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare
Dear Amina wonderful update beautifully written and the carnival incident was damn funny loved it

Aww thank you Isha...you are too kind,...I am so so happy you found the carnival incident funny...I was trying to make the first part light hearted as the current track is so sad!

Thank you 😊

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usaonly

@usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Lovely story Amina and thanks for English translation dear.your DP was cute that is new one on The day they went for shopping. Back to story it was fun reading this part so many lovely moment for them to remember even thy not be together. Love Shravu he such sweethearts for Ruhi to call and chat with her and ask how she was. Hercules is the new member for them too and he very smart dog. I love.m this part and I don't know who will do next just have a request If they can continue in English transaltion will be grateful. Thank you for writing this OS and the PM dear. Have a wonderful week start for new week dear.🤗🤗

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