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Posted: 10 years ago
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Character sketch:-
Ishita comes from a poor family with a retired father & mother who doesn't keep very well. She has a passion for writing. Her family is in full support of her and lets her pursue her dream.
Subbhu is in love with Ishita & wishes to marry her. He is a greedy, spoilt brat who values money more than relationships. He's a useless fellow who lives off his father's income.
Devyani is Subbhu's mom and brain washes Subbhu against Ishita and him being the fool that he is; easily falls into her trap.
Raman is a divorcee with a daughter who he loves dearly. However, due to his work he ends up neglecting her
Toshijee is Raman's mom and is a very supportive person towards Ishita.
I've kept the character sketches very short. I'm thinking of adding a prologue below
(written in English)
Ishu I believe its time we get you married. As it is your Amma doesn't keep very well & I worry for you no less. We are growing older as the days go by. We can't possibly think of you being left alone after our demise!
Please Appa don't speak such words. May you both live a hundred years..!!
Ishu for how long will you carry our burden, huh? One or the other day, you will want to get married and live happily with your husband and children! We are not trying to force you Ishu yet want to see you settle for good now. Your Appa is retired and I also don't keep well. You wanted to write & make a living we allowed you but it's getting out of hand now. Neither are you taking care of yourself neither do you want to give a thought to marriage. Darling, you will need a companion to tide through the hardship of life. Aren't I right?
Amma please!! I don't want to hear your lecture on marriage for the nth time. I've told you this before.. I'm no less than a son to you..!
Beta.. I know you deep down!! Your stories reflect your inner personality.. your ambitions, dreams and desires. Your Appa get's his pension we will survive but won't be very happy if you refuse to get married anytime soon. You have savings and with your Appa's pension we will organise a lavish wedding for you. After all, you are our only daughter; we'll leave no stone unturned.
Ok! Appa & Amma I'm willing to get married with the boy of your choice but just let me in on who you've chosen for me.. or shall I make a guess??
Well, beta I'll just let you know.. It's Subbhu who we have chosen for you! They will come exactly next week..
That's it guys!! Do give your reviews.. & guess how Raman & Ishu will be interconnected??

P.S. Sorry if u find it difficult to read

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good one...
Seems interesting. Continue soon
Can't wait to see how IshRa are connected
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Good one...

Seems interesting. Continue soon
Can't wait to see how IshRa are connected

I'll definitely continue soon.. Thank you.. I hope I don't disappoint you 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey its very NYC
New story... Ishu is a writer... Lyk it..
Plz pm me 4 next updt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It seems to be a really nice concept...
Pls continue it soon n do PM me when u update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dearies.. Those of you who have asked me for a PM .. Please add me to your buddy list..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey, the concept's really awesome.😊
And again there's a coincidence.😆
A few days back when I hadn't written anything and was planning to start a story an idea popped up and see the coincidence it was somewhat similar to yours
But the difference was Subbu had left Ishita due to her medical condition.
Ishita's parents were persuading her to marry but,
after a few days she ran away from her home
to fulfill her ambition of becoming a writer which she dropped due to Subbu. 😡She was taking
shelter in n Shagun's and Mani's home- her friends. In this process she finds her love- Raman.😳
Meanwhile Shagun loves Mani and Mani loves Ishita or thinks so.
So- two love triangles are formed.
The story is based on Love, Ambition and Friendship.
What will happen to mani ishita friendship and shagun's love and Ishra love? was the main thing.
But sadly, I didn't continue it.😭
Cause it was my first work and to write on such a huge concept requires really good writing skills which I lacked back then. Right now, I am brushing up my skills.
One day I wish I'll continue it. I don't wanna write it now cause I want it to come out really good- first story na. And I added mani and shagun now instead of Khushi.
Anyways enough of my talks.

Coming to yours- I really loved the concept.😛
Ishita writer ha- I loved it.👏
Continue soon.
Will love to read.😊
How is Raman connected to Ishita?
Ruhi, mimi,
Both connected with profession(mostly this in my opinion)
Neighbours
or Family Friends
And accept my buddy request na.

Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: darlingpinks

Hey, the concept's really awesome.😊<p></p>

And again there's a coincidence.😆
A few days back when I hadn't written anything and was planning to start a story an idea popped up and see the coincidence it was somewhat similar to yours
But the difference was Subbu had left Ishita due to her medical condition.
Ishita's parents were persuading her to marry but,
after a few days she ran away from her home
to fulfill her ambition of becoming a writer which she dropped due to Subbu. 😡She was taking
shelter in n Shagun's and Mani's home- her friends. In this process she finds her love- Raman.😳
Meanwhile Shagun loves Mani and Mani loves Ishita or thinks so.
So- two love triangles are formed.
The story is based on Love, Ambition and Friendship.
What will happen to mani ishita friendship and shagun's love and Ishra love? was the main thing.
But sadly, I didn't continue it.😭
Cause it was my first work and to write on such a huge concept requires really good writing skills which I lacked back then. Right now, I am brushing up my skills.
One day I wish I'll continue it. I don't wanna write it now cause I want it to come out really good- first story na. And I added mani and shagun now instead of Khushi.
Anyways enough of my talks.

Coming to yours- I really loved the concept.😛
Ishita writer ha- I loved it.👏
Continue soon.
Will love to read.😊
How is Raman connected to Ishita?
Ruhi, mimi,
Both connected with profession(mostly this in my opinion)
Neighbours
or Family Friends
And accept my buddy request na.


my story is completely different to your's and I'm sure you'll do a brilliant job! Thank you so much for the appreciation!! It genuinely means alot to me... & yes I shall now accept your buddy request!! Waise your story seems absolutely awesome 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: darlingpinks

Hey, the concept's really awesome.😊<p></p>

And again there's a coincidence.😆
A few days back when I hadn't written anything and was planning to start a story an idea popped up and see the coincidence it was somewhat similar to yours
But the difference was Subbu had left Ishita due to her medical condition.
Ishita's parents were persuading her to marry but,
after a few days she ran away from her home
to fulfill her ambition of becoming a writer which she dropped due to Subbu. 😡She was taking
shelter in n Shagun's and Mani's home- her friends. In this process she finds her love- Raman.😳
Meanwhile Shagun loves Mani and Mani loves Ishita or thinks so.
So- two love triangles are formed.
The story is based on Love, Ambition and Friendship.
What will happen to mani ishita friendship and shagun's love and Ishra love? was the main thing.
But sadly, I didn't continue it.😭
Cause it was my first work and to write on such a huge concept requires really good writing skills which I lacked back then. Right now, I am brushing up my skills.
One day I wish I'll continue it. I don't wanna write it now cause I want it to come out really good- first story na. And I added mani and shagun now instead of Khushi.
Anyways enough of my talks.

Coming to yours- I really loved the concept.😛
Ishita writer ha- I loved it.👏
Continue soon.
Will love to read.😊
How is Raman connected to Ishita?
Ruhi, mimi,
Both connected with profession(mostly this in my opinion)
Neighbours
or Family Friends
And accept my buddy request na.


and you'll have to keep reading to know how IshRa have a connection...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: umeirah02

my story is completely different to your's and I'm sure you'll do a brilliant job! Thank you so much for the appreciation!! It genuinely means alot to me... & yes I shall now accept your buddy request!! Waise your story seems absolutely awesome 😊


your right cause the plot is different but similarity and coincidence in the sense of ishita being a writer. And so as I told the point I told the whole story. Afterall,
har ek ka apna andaz hota hai

and yup as I also wanna become a writer I know how happy it makes you feel that somebody likes your work and your hope increases by every comment and sometimes sometimes I feel a bit jealous seeing other's work having more comments😉 but nevertheless that feeling makes me work more .( I know u shouldn't be jealous but hota hai insaan hu na)

Again thanks for appreciating the story.😊


Thnks for accepting buddy request.😊

If not Ishra are friends or maybe best friends?.???? That's the only possibility I see.

Cntinue soon
You weave your plot perfectly giving justice to every character.
I can tell only this cause I have read only ur plot and there's perfection in linking of character and story.
Hope you become a writer one day.😊

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