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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare

Heyy didu back with a rocking update

brilliant update
the intro of our solid raman was out standing this is how I always imagined raman but serial wale toh usse raste pe bhi laya 😡
anyways coming back to the update
Our poor yet dramebaz ruhi was awesome as always
and the way raman took charge of all secrecy I just loved it aise fast fast decision lina he expect kya tha loved it
and when inspector was about to tell I was literally re read raman's and mihir's line don't know why but was eager to know how he explains the situation how raman will know full truth was really thrilled while reading entire update
and when inspector said it at last I was more over excited while reading raman's reaction
you really did justice to the situation to the story to the reaction my expectations I mean readers and it can't be better than this
"Sharma, I don't care what you do. But make sure they get the utmost punishment for doing this. Make sure they both get a head wound, broken ribs and dislocated bones just like ishita if not more. " this was the Bestest dialogue didu you nailed it

"You did not see what I saw that night Mihir. Ishita's condition, her face bleeding, her eyes blood shot red and crying, her cloths all torn, she was scared and was trying to free herself from that man. So don't judge me for being possessive here. I know what I am doing and I have no regrets. She is very close to my heart and very precious to my ruhi. And I will do anything to protect her."
This really made me shiver with fear and the flashback of the situation really don't ever want to imagine it 😵

Awesome update di I will never get tried of telling you that it was awesome. Your every update is awesome but this is really what I was waiting for so long
one more thing I thought mihika is cousin of ishita as usual so she will be shocked seeing her akka in such terrible state but as you have not mentioned it yet let's see what's happening further
our chotu patakka was trying hard to grab her papa dears attention but our baby is unaware what her father and most important ishita aunty went through
Missed ishu in this update hoping to see her better in next update... and gaonwalo uss ashwin ke baacheko chodna nahi oops not gaonwalo police walo
Hope you are doing great di take care

hi kanna. thank you so much for such a lovely comment. i love you so much for always liking my work.
i love karan patel, so i don't really care what happens in the serial. i just see him and ignore everybody else and the storyline. 😳
silly? i know. but i can't help. he is an awesome actor and very handsome. 😆
i loved the character raman in the show at the beginning of YHM. the take charge kind. now, he always reacts after the fact. he is always being overshadowed by the character of Ishita. that is what i feel. the show's name should be yeh hai ishita ki mohabbatein. 😃😛
ok, enough about the show, and back to my story: you aren ot gonna like this kanna, but the more i am thinking about the next chapters, i think ishiya's hurtings is not finished yet. raman's hurtings will start as well😭
the more close they will get, the more they will be hurting. so more ansoo girane padenge. 😭
me so sorry. but i promise it will all be worth it
i love you kanna. have a good day yourself as well.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: monalisa123

hi kanna. thank you so much for such a lovely comment. i love you so much for always liking my work.
i love karan patel, so i don't really care what happens in the serial. i just see him and ignore everybody else and the storyline. 😳
silly? i know. but i can't help. he is an awesome actor and very handsome. 😆
i loved the character raman in the show at the beginning of YHM. the take charge kind. now, he always reacts after the fact. he is always being overshadowed by the character of Ishita. that is what i feel. the show's name should be yeh hai ishita ki mohabbatein. 😃😛
ok, enough about the show, and back to my story: you aren ot gonna like this kanna, but the more i am thinking about the next chapters, i think ishiya's hurtings is not finished yet. raman's hurtings will start as well😭
the more close they will get, the more they will be hurting. so more ansoo girane padenge. 😭
me so sorry. but i promise it will all be worth it
i love you kanna. have a good day yourself as well.

well now after seeing such pathetic drama I have put yhm on mute I think I am really over yhm now it's getting worse day by day leave it I don't wanna talk about it but karan is 😳😉
back to update how can you even think so didu that I won't like 😭 mere didu logo ko kya hogaya hai saab hi ko lag raha hai that mujhe rona nahi accha lagta why😭
and is it possible that you will write and kisi ki maajal usse aacha na lage well you always make sure that you will make reader fall in love with the story more and more by every update
aur rahi baat aabhi next updates mein aap kitna rulana hai rulao I don't mind because rona is always worth for your story
so make ishu cry but raman ko bhi 😭 aacha thik hai
aabhi bahut excite kiya jaldi se update bhi dedo😊 please 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
The tales of healing has started and
I am loving it..
Loved the way Raman was possessive about Ishu..
The way he told Mihir that Ishita is very close to his heart is beautiful..👏👏
Waiting for next update yaar..😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Isha_Pathare

well now after seeing such pathetic drama I have put yhm on mute I think I am really over yhm now it's getting worse day by day leave it I don't wanna talk about it but karan is 😳😉
back to update how can you even think so didu that I won't like 😭 mere didu logo ko kya hogaya hai saab hi ko lag raha hai that mujhe rona nahi accha lagta why😭
and is it possible that you will write and kisi ki maajal usse aacha na lage well you always make sure that you will make reader fall in love with the story more and more by every update
aur rahi baat aabhi next updates mein aap kitna rulana hai rulao I don't mind because rona is always worth for your story
so make ishu cry but raman ko bhi 😭 aacha thik hai
aabhi bahut excite kiya jaldi se update bhi dedo😊 please 😊

thank you baka. reading your comments makes even more excited. i want to write this story till the end of time. explore all of the angles of human emotions. my titles seems to focus of them as well.
i will never be able to disassociate myself from the show though yaar. however it is, it is still my prerna. that is where i get my muse. i personally try to see the meaning behind all of the crap on the show and trust me karan and divyanka makes it worth a watch, at least for me. they are superb actors.
voh kehte hai na ki kar kaali raat ke baad ek ujala savera hota hai, waise hi meri story abhi kaali raat se guzar rahi hai aur sirf savera hone ki der hai.
next update- up in few minutes
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: VENBA

The tales of healing has started and

I am loving it..
Loved the way Raman was possessive about Ishu..
The way he told Mihir that Ishita is very close to his heart is beautiful..👏👏
Waiting for next update yaar..😊😊

i have just scratched a surface of raman's possessiveness. i will have fun writing more about it. and hopefully you all will have fun reading it.
next update in few minutes yaar😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: monalisa123

thank you baka. reading your comments makes even more excited. i want to write this story till the end of time. explore all of the angles of human emotions. my titles seems to focus of them as well.
i will never be able to disassociate myself from the show though yaar. however it is, it is still my prerna. that is where i get my muse. i personally try to see the meaning behind all of the crap on the show and trust me karan and divyanka makes it worth a watch, at least for me. they are superb actors.
voh kehte hai na ki kar kaali raat ke baad ek ujala savera hota hai, waise hi meri story abhi kaali raat se guzar rahi hai aur sirf savera hone ki der hai.
next update- up in few minutes

both are brilliant actors that's the reason I am seeing it nahi toh saach mein nahi dekhte ...
waiting for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 12:

The tales of despair and desperation:

(Author's note: mihika is not ishita's sister/cousin in my story. Though she will be a very close friend of ishita in future)

Raman's desperation:

A man sitting in balcony with his 7 months old sleeping daughter is desperate. He is desperate to make everything alright. He is desperate to find a way to make ishita better, desperate to make ishita forget all that happened to her. He is hell desperate to punish those two bas***ds 😡. His desperation is taking a toll on him.

Looking down at his sleeping daughter, he finds his oasis of peace and happiness . His desperation takes a back seat for a second 😲. But, boy that desperation fights its way back to the front seat in his mind as well as his heart as soon as he hears muffled cries coming out of the bedroom 😭.

Ishita's despair:

(all of below mentioned events is part of ishita's nighTmare)

After almost 2 days of being bed ridden, ishita is still sleeping, going thru a chain of subconscious thoughts, thoughts playing a slideshow of what happened to her last night and some fears embedded in her mind. She feels being slapped and pushed. Her hand automatically goes to her head. She brings back her hand and looks at it. It is covered in blood. She feels someone sitting on her stomach, smothering her. It is getting hard for her to breath. She is fighting hard to push that someone off of her🤢. Her eyes automatically darts towards the door and she sees Ashwin standing there😡, watching all that is happening. She feels a bright light behind Ashwin. She squints her eyes and finds raman standing there with a giggling ruhi in his arms ❤️. Next she finds herself sitting on the floor with someone's head lying on her lap. She is frantically putting pressure on that person's stomach. She raises her hands only to find them dripping in blood. She looks down, her cloths are soaked in blood too. She adjusts her eyes to see the person's face and she sees raman lying on her lap, bleeding out. She feels being dragged away for him, back to the bedroom and hears a door being slammed.

She is screaming her lungs out in her sleep

"let me go. Chhodo muje. I will kill you, you bas***d 😡. Raman... Please stay awake. Raman...don't close your eyes😭. Get off of me you jerk. Someone please save raman. Please help me raman, get up...leave me you asshole 😡..."

This is how raman finds her. She is screaming hell in her sleep. She startles our sleeping princess ruhi as well as the nurse who had dozed off. Raman hands ruhi to nurse (she leaves the room) and goes to ishita.

He slowly sits down by her and starts patting her head.

"ishita, aankhe kholo. I am right here. Look. Nothing has happened."

Ishita jerks open her eyes hearing his voice. She sits up suddenly, wincing in pain, and pats raman's stomach. She is checking to make sure he is ok. Raman is looking down at her hands on his stomach, wondering what she is doing. She looks up at him and hugs him relived of finding him alive and says

"woh khoon, kitna sara khun beh raha tha raman. Aapko to stiches bhi nahi hai. aap think to ho na? aur ruhi? Ruhi kaha hai? maine bohot koshish ki thi, par main kuch nahi kar payi. I am so sorry. Meri vajah se, you had to go thru all of this. Aur phir kya fayda hua??? They took my everything raman. They made me a dirty woman. A bloody bazaaru aurat."

Raman's blood is boiling. He wants to hit something so hard, someone perhaps. He tries to get her to look at him.

"ishita, idhar dekho. Meri taraf dekho ishita."

Ishita is still clinging to him. Shaking her head in his chest, denying to look up at him, feeling ashamed.

Raman jerks her out of him and raises his voice.

"I said look up at me, damn it."

She finally looks at him. He cups her face and says

"vo sab bas ek bura sapna tha ishita. Jaisa tum soch rahi ho, aisa kuch nahi hua. You have to be strong. Nothing happened besides your injureis. You were saved before anything. he didn't even lay his finger on you after you came to my door. do you remember coming to my door ishita? hmmm?Aur mein aur ruhi bhi safe hai. humein kuch nahi hua. Dekho..." saying so he gets up, giving her a 360 view of him by twirling around to assure her😳.

"raman, I am scared. What if they come back? What if they come back to hurt you and little ruhi?"

Raman wants to tell her that they will never come back. He wants to share with her how all of that is being taken care of. He feels the need to tell her that her contribution will be needed to put them behind bars. She will have to testify against them.🤢

But, he feels this is not the right time. She is badly shaken up and is not in her senses.

Ishita ke liye asliyat or bure sapne ke bich ki lakir dhoondhali ho chuki hai😭

She is unable to cope up with the despair. Her condition is miserable right now. And he doesn't want to make it worst. An idea struck his mind and he texts the nurse to bring ruhi back in.

He takes ruhi from the nurse and lets her go for the night and walks back towards ishita who is staring down at nothing.

"ishita, dekho to, mein kise laya hoon?"

Ishita looks up hearing the giggling sounds.

Her eyes sparkle seeing the ever smiling little princess. Her vision getting hazy as tears come knocking on her doors (eyes).

Raman extended his arms with ruhi to her and put her in ishita's lap. Within a fraction of a second, she forgot all of her pain, all of her fears.🤗

Little ruhi is as happy as she can be by being back in the lap of her favorite lady, who is kind of looking weird with the bandages and all.

"HER THERE MY FAVORITE LADY. GIRL, WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOUR FACE? YOU USED TO BE PRETTY. JUST KIDDING NOW. DON'T START CRYING LIKE A LITTLE GIRL. OH, WAIT THAT'S ME. SORRY. BUT I AM UPSET WITH PAPA.😡 HE IGNORED ME FOR WHOLE FIVE MINUTES. I SECRETLY DROOLED OVER HIS SHIRT SLEEVE TO TAKE MY REVENGE, PRETENDING TO BE ASLEEP. SHHH...IT IS OUR SECRET😉. RAM KASAM KHAO KI APP PAPA KO NAHI BATAVONGI?"

Suddenly ishita realizes that she is not in any hospital or at her apartment or at raman's. She notices that it is somebody's bedroom. She looks at raman, getting ready to ask him and like reading her mind, he answers her

"I didn't want to take you to the hospital. So I brought you over to my bunglow."

"raman, to phir yeh marham patti??"

"I had the doctors make a home visit." Raman said

"Oh..." is all she can say.

After a while, the silence is prevailing in the room, with all three of them sitting on the same bed, with a very happy ruhi in the middle😉, ishita breaks the silence. She wants to ask a question that has been clouding her mind for the last few minutes.

"raman, voh Ashwin or voh aadmi ka..."

Raman doesn't let her finish, "wahi hua jo aise logo ke saath hona chahiye.😡 Khair we will talk about that once you feel better. Kuch khaogi? You have been on saline since last night. You must be hungry"

Mihika and Mihir had come back with dinner. Raman goes and brings the soup for her. She could only eat couple of spoonful due to her dislocated jaw.

"raman, I can't eat it. My jaw hurts. 😭I will try to sleep. Ummm...can I ask you something?

"yes, of course"

"Can I keep ruhi with me here? I mean...if you don't mind?"

"only if she can be in her crib. You have four broken ribs ishita. I don't think it's a good idea to strain yourself. And what if she accidentally kicks you? After all she is my daughter, a college soccer team captain. And she kicks like all hell in her sleep 🤣."

"I have no problem." Ishita nodded obediently

"umm.. one more thing. I might have to be in this room as well. To make sure ruhi is ok, if you are ok with it?" he wanted to stay over to watch over her, but used ruhi as an excuse 😳.

"I KNOW WHAT YOU ARE DOING PAPA. USING ME AS AN EXCUSE, HMMM. ADD THAT TO THE LIST OF FAVORS I WILL BE DOING TO YOU. THE LIST WILL GETTING BIGGER DAY BY DAY. I HOPE YOU WILL PAY UP. OR ELSE I MIGHT HAVE TO PUT COLLECTION MAFIAS BEHIND YOU." Squills ruhi .

He goes and brings ruhi's crib in ishita's bedroom. Lays ruhi in it and helps lay ishita back down. Covers both of the ladies and goes to fetch food for ruhi.

Ishita's despair is disappearing for the time being due to raman and ruhi and raman's desperation is getting lesser seeing a smile on ishita's face.

What the future hold for this trio is still unknown to me, the writer and to you all, the readers.

HAVE A GREAT WEEK MY LOVELY READERS😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Yay! First one to comment! The update was so brilliant!

The beginning with Raman was really nice to see since he wanted to do anything possible to make Ishita better and loved how seeing Ruhi provided a moment of peace for him.😳 Loved it!

And poor Ishita is still having those nightmares! Is it just me or whenever she has a nightmare, it's always about Raman or Ruhi getting hurt that really gives her pain. It really goes to show how important the two are in her life. And how she clung onto him trying to make sure everything is okay with him even before thinking about herself and where she is😳.

Loved again how Ruhi is always the one who bring peace for these two people who are hurting right now, First Raman felt better with her around and Ishita forgets her pain with her mere presence. And Ruhi's talks are here again and as cute as ever especially about Raman making excuses using her name!😉 ❤️ So the trio are in the same room all watching out for each other, the cutest thing ever! I loved how subtly the trio are coming so close to each other. Their journey is truly wonderful

Thank you so much for the fabulous and beautiful update! I loved everything thing about it and will be waiting eagerly for the weekend to come because this story adds one more reason to look forward to the weekend!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one...
Ruhi was too good in this...
Loved desperation and despair of both...

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Posted: 10 years ago
So the healing track has started.. Now to see how and when love will blossom in their lives... Continue soon..

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