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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: s_kavya
Beautiful...Beautiful update Aani loved it 👏 👏 The song has beautiful lyrics i keep humming this song nowadays and also this song suites ishra a lot... loved the update especially bed sharing part how i wish ishra also start sharing bed in the show... 😳

Awesome update..Thanks for the PM Aani 😊

thanks Kavya 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: krikumar.91
That was brilliant Aani... Romantic...

thanks Kri 😊

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Yashh...
All I can say is...BEAUTIFUL

thanks Yashh😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Drb6
Thanks for writing this! Really enjoyed it...simple and cute

thanks dear 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Nichuss
amazing os...

hurt ishu on knowing rkb lied to her...

mostly hiding...

this bomb blast im expecting in yhm tooo...

the way raman made angry jkr...

to cute kitten was nicely penned down...

thanks Nichhs 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Superb OS !

thanks Radhi 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: SuryaIshraholic
love it 2 d core.. ❤️ 👍🏼
awsome work..

thanks Surya 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
Perfect piece of writing by a flawless writer! ❤️

thanks Mrinalini 😊☺️

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: usaonly
I am glad Aani that i am not miss to read this story.it is awesome Sand really mix with emotion and passion.Ishu is angry is justified cause Raman not tell her the truth and she taught he not trust her at least it clear and he know how much Ishu love him and don"t want him to go to the pain.Sometime the circumstance made us has no choice have to follow the flow.And love him he know how pomade hisJKR mood better. I am sure we will not get this kind of story in the show it is happen in the your wonderful writing world.Thank you so much and have a fantastic weekend. Sorry for late comment dear.🤗

thanks dear 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: -Anku-
Your writing is sheer magic Aani. And this one shot is magic 😳 I love how you've picked an untouched issue in the show. Ishita is obviously going to have a reaction if and when she finds out. But this one's made me hope it plays out exactly this way.

IshRa have improved on the communication front, but still have a long way to go. Raman's habit of hiding things isn't healthy and I love how you mulled on it here. Ishita's anger and Raman's curiousity and restlessness on her not talking to him was SO CUTE. The way he finally approached her, the way she spoke to him and questioned her concerns. In all her anger, her concern was foremost and it was adorable how Raman was finding it funny because he felt so happy and assured on being loved and cared for. It had a glimpse of how barren his life was without a life partner who genuinely cared so much not just for him but also for his self respect and did not want him compromising on it. It was a brilliant way of showing the couple's love and bonding.

Your writing, your quotes all are so brilliantly thought and then tallied with the story, that it makes it worth not just one read but many to just let the beauty of it all sink in.

Wonderful One SHOT and a lovely conclusion to it 😳

Thank you so much Anku 😊

Honestly I have no idea where this came from all I know is I heard this song and somehow things started popping in my head and things fell into place.

Trust I believe is very vital in any relationship but most of all in a marriage. And while we may have the best of intentions at heart for someone' welfare - a lie is a lie and its bound to have its repercurrsions.

Raman didnt tell Ishita about his job offer because he knew how she would react and somehow that is precisely the brainwave that sparked this piece 😳 and like you said communication is still a work in progress for these two.

Thanks again for this beautiful comment Anku and @blue yes that was also a thought process behind this piece 😳