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modernfamily

@modernfamily

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#891

Was up at 4:30. Wide awake when you posted. So much for a day off from work. Read it like 10 times already. Loved every bit of it.

When a guy like r&b smiles at you it must be out of the world so that when you don't get it you get gloomy.

He follows her everywhere. His anger had fizzled out the moment he read that post it on Mrs Sagar's desk followed by texts and a call from Tan and Sam respectively. I'm sure that made him see the demand for a pre nup in a positive light. ...to see what he already knows, that she's a wonderful and innocent girl who doesn't want to make relations sour with anybody. She wants to do things the right way. I'm sure he understands, he's a man of principle himself. But I felt that he was filled with adoration or love or whatever when he met her at the parking. She seemed like the sweetest thing on earth to him at that moment. The kiss is a testimony to that.

Suman-bally are so cute. I actually had a scene like this on my wishlist but with Tan and Sam.

The battle of words, figures, statistics was a brilliant build up for sexual tension.

The monet is like a lucky charm in their house. Their pyaar ki nishani.

Last scene- do I need to say anything. ☺️

Just a post above yours is my opinion on choodas

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blue5sky

@blue5sky

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#892

Hey Nisha,

Just caught up with your new update!

And boy i loved it.

Actually celebrating...

RnB in my head (as you have sketched him) is nothing if not astute and II extremely conclusive!

This guy who has been around done all that he does to her and many other things that she doesn't even know exists ...now she has him ' buckle' under the blessing of the same Monet that she buckled under...almost fully clothed.😃 Her grip on him is complete.

The man is proud of her - look at how he talks of her to Sam and Mrs.S.

She actually follows up on her I want to keep my name and pre-nup...AWESOME!!!

These two just have to be on each others throat - arguing or settling arguments.

Whoever said road to true love was easy to find or keep...

When you see a tale like this fantasy seems real!

👏👏 LOVE YOU BABE! ❤️

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TanjoreGirl

@TanjoreGirl

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#893

Will write more later right now feeling hot hot hot😆

Bend it like beckham is now bend iI like R&b they talk economy leave Bally scared ki shadi hogi ki nahi 😆😆 and end like this 😳 Shaane !!!

And Sam kya boloon 😆🤣

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taramira

@taramira

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#894

Originally posted by: Nisha0604
Thank you swathi and SB
I LOVE YOU TWO LOTSSS
For some reason i am HUNGERING for comments today
THANK YOUUU

Bolti band karne ke baad you are asking for comments! Not fair. Have to fully recover from this onslaught before i can say anything at all. But I love the way you are able to make R& B swing from being absolutely calm and collected to a love crazed guy. Demonstrates so clearly the II effect on him it's also obvious that just like II wants to win every little game they play...and I think it is this chemistry between the two that will keep this relationship going for ever despite all the challenges they face.

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Neha

@Neha07

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#895

Originally posted by: modernfamily

Omg chooda Yes😃. You can make her wear the entire set for a few days and then maybe he can ask her to get rid of it so she'll make it half. My family is very liberal about these things. Some girls like to wear it for a year. I don't like that plus II has to go to work. It's a 40 day rule I guess you can remove it after that.

Yes please Nisha.i just love chuddaas.well I don't think dat u can reduce d no. On ur own ni uhv 2 wear it for a min 45 days.i cb already imagine the chudaas makin R&B's life hell considering he's so hairy 😆 😆 😉

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TanjoreGirl

@TanjoreGirl

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#896

Nisha man where do you come up with these situations .. How does you brain work like this it's actually beyond my imagination👏

I don't have words each of your update is so lovely so unique, so perfect.

How you managed to change their prenup day to this is beyond imagination!

Econ convo and them fighting anywhere is so adorable kahin bhi shuru :)

R&B is so comfortable with people he likes he is fine with Bally remembers to get gifts of course we then go crazy for him and burn 20 pages of this thread searching for him 😆

Thanks lady for crafting such a wonderful tale ,your story and characters are beyond anyones imagination👏⭐️

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#897

Hey Desi US Fan

Thanks for responding

Yes it may not be the most logical most sensible most mathematically and cognitively best solution. But she did whatever she thought was right, no one will ever question HER about what she got out of the divorce Appa will not allow her to receive a penny or touch a penny.

Neither will Akka, God forbid it it were to happen, she herself wouldnt... this is like over compensation... I know that, its like a explicit action to protect and defend herself

Yes he must be honest with her he cannot lie to her about Paris plans. He wont, he is not a satyawadi, I try not to make any character NOBLE like Desi soaps, they all have some flaws.

Appa is short tempered, adamant, too principled and refuses to see goodness in people he has "decided to hate.

Amma SOMEHOW wants II to have a good life, she feels guilty for Subbu cheating on her as if it were HER fault. She does not have the courage to order Appa to accept R&B, she teeters between love for child and husband. Amma sees some things Appa does but clearly does not have the courage to refuse the alliance

Akka is also in a way obsessed with finding II her dream match. She is smitten by R&B in her own way no not creepily but Akka clearly does not see some things Appa sees. She only sees good things about the Bhallas

R&B? R&B is deeply attracted to her, he doesnt say things he should be at times, he keeps his feelings to himself, he is ambitious aggressive and does not have a very high opinion of her Appa. He is not at all expressive or gushy. He holds serious grudges, and is still unable to forgive his Dad even after 4 years

II is impulsive, emotional, speculative, reckless, caring compassionate, foolish ambitious and brilliant. She is very adamant to doing things her way. She doesnt like to take no for an answer. She does not want to see the negatives about Bhallas.. especially R&B. She is not blind but definitely like a tumbleweed, why I say that is because she is swept away mostly, but every now and then when the wind slows down she is hooked under a rock or a bush she stops to think and plan and wonder sensibly and when another gust blows she flies again...

they should address everything, it will happen over time, some forced some spontaneously... lies, half truths and lack of communication make great stories.

Edited by Nisha0604 - 10 years ago

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DesiUsFan

@DesiUs_fan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#898

Steaming hot update😉. R&B is coming dangerously close to losing his control with each passing day. Good to see this burning with jealousy side of Raman. II, you better get on the pill girl as soon as possible😊.We can never get bored of this couple and their issues.😆

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#899

Originally posted by: TanjoreGirl
Nisha man where do you come up with these situations .. How does you brain work like this it's actually beyond my imagination👏
I don't have words each of your update is so lovely so unique, so perfect.
How you managed to change their prenup day to this is beyond imagination!
Econ convo and them fighting anywhere is so adorable kahin bhi shuru :)

R&B is so comfortable with people he likes he is fine with Bally remembers to get gifts of course we then go crazy for him and burn 20 pages of this thread searching for him 😆

Thanks lady for crafting such a wonderful tale ,your story and characters are beyond anyones imagination👏⭐️

OK I cheated... I went out with girl friends from work to eat Thai yesterday one of them said she has the HOTS for Adam Levine and some times calls her hubs "Adam", I told her "I dont care for men with tattoos they creep me out, they remind me of bikers or junkies"

She goes "Oh! I think its a big turn on for me"😳

My CPU spun and I thought "Hmmm... II is going to be turned on by David BECKHAM"😳

And BOOM...

ive always wanted II and R&B to fight over the Indian economy for the longest time (YEP! THE GEEK'S VERSION OF ORGASM), he is wealthy NO wealthy person Ive met until this date is a Socialist😆 that believes in redistribution of wealth and equal opp

So R&B is not

II is passionate about India, I handed her a "Liberal/Socialist" agenda😃

Easy peasy👏

Edited by Nisha0604 - 10 years ago