Originally posted by: modernfamily
There's a thin line between po*nography and erotica and it's commendable that you always maintain that. Like tweety said your choice of words is fabulous. This part was a wonderful conclusion to the jaipur trip. With fights and sickness and arguments you did a good job by ending all of it with this scene. It's like this is the only way they can communicate, express their love and shed their inhibitions. I realise that touch is very important in a relationship. It gives you an understanding of the other person's insecurities. It's important to talk but it is equally important to touch. There has to be something palpable in a relationship to assure you of its existence.
I may never be able to put into words what I felt while reading this. It's something very personal. I'm sure everybody must have deduced something or the other from this scene. Again I would reiterate what tweety said that it was abstract and is hence open to interpretation. I had tears in my eyes while reading. Don't know why.