TS: RoRu aftermath updated on pg 9 - Page 9

rula deya na yaar...

Originally posted by: Angel13

Hello dear
First thank you thank you thank you very much for writing this another part and Awww you dedicated to me wow thanks a lot. It means a lot to me
Coming to story...beautiful written
Very emotional one
Loved how everyone realized their fault
Shagun as always doing her nautank
Glad raman and others ignored her and Adi
Awww ruhi is cutie pie
Always wiping her ishima tears
Loved how you portrayed ruhi relation with everyone especially mother and daughter
Thanks once again
Hope to see you writing more stories

Originally posted by: RMGT

Awsm dr.
Love it.
Hope this will happen on the show also.
Bt is this the end? Or planing 2 cont.
Tnx 4 pm

Originally posted by: sulochana90

rula deya na yaar...

awesome update

thank you so much

Ur writing is nice but m sorry I did not like the way ppl talked with Adi, he doesn't deserve so much of hatred as he is misguided. If Raman and Bhallas couldn't bring him back to the proper path even when they are living together, they are in as much fault as Shagun, so scolding a child and blaming him only shows that the child was never in your heart as ur love, he was just a fascination and as the fascination broke, u turned ur face away from him, leaving the child broken and making him believe that all his assumptions and the stories which were told by his mother were true.

Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream

Ur writing is nice but m sorry I did not like the way ppl talked with Adi, he doesn't deserve so much of hatred as he is misguided. If Raman and Bhallas couldn't bring him back to the proper path even when they are living together, they are in as much fault as Shagun, so scolding a child and blaming him only shows that the child was never in your heart as ur love, he was just a fascination and as the fascination broke, u turned ur face away from him, leaving the child broken and making him believe that all his assumptions and the stories which were told by his mother was true.

Lastly, I also did not like the part where you tried showing love by making everybody transfer their properties in the name of Ruhi and Raman giving 10% share to Adi, in a tone which showed he is giving to a beggar. I really did not like this part.

M sorry for criticising.

awesome update
I really loved it
personally I feel if adi is not changing this thing has to b happene

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome update
I really loved it
personally I feel if adi is not changing this thing has to b happene

Originally posted by: shavi2311

thanks alot...the frst thing wen iam writng this...u r in my mind... i just want u to satisfy frm dis... writng anothr part of dis is nevr my choice bt u askd it frst...so iam happy u liked it...nd credist to shw yar thy potryd ruhi nd ishu very well so the essnece i relieved here...

Yes dear I am fully satisfied with this part
This is what I wanted to read raman and toshiji reacting and blasting on Sjagun and Adi
Wish even in the show something like this happens but I guess it's too much to ask for
Anyways I am very glad and thanks once again for writing this considering my request in mind
It was mind blowing well written

Aww...that was superb