Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82)

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

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Posted: 10 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: harichandana
Nice one navi .total update is awesome. raman is excellent in this.loved his confi n total chai scene. amma applies a break for ishra marriage bt no worries raman hai na he wil convince evryone. waiting for next one ankita come soon waiting anxiously I know u wil give a wonderful one again

Thanks a lot! Glad you liked what I wrote. Ankita did a great job carrying it forward as well. 😊

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#542

Originally posted by: shavi2311

completely agree with u sakshi...plan or unplaned nevr wrks out bt keeping readers in mind update always wrks..tht thee updte when it is full of ishralious... no one can beat it...

Oh my god

u grls hav actually flattered me😃

u smiled reading this and enjoyed the scenes...wat more can I ask for...srsly...u people are best

thnks a lot🤗

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: Nichuss
this was awesomely executed...
loved reading it

Hey nisha di🤗

i guess this is the frst tym I got a review from you on my writing...and this was least expected for itt...but u liked itt..thnks a lott😊😊

u actually made me smile

thmku🤗

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#544

Originally posted by: nividances
Don't be sad Ankita...cheer up! 🤗
You did a great job with the update! I really liked the private moment between the two. As important as it is to convince the family for their marriage, it's just as important for them to become more comfortable with each other and you portrayed that beautifully! 😃

Good job!

Am glad u liked that point wat i wanted to show nivi

thnks a lott

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..TeriDeewani..

@..TeriDeewani..

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#545

Hello. I'm NEHA Ankita Di
Really luved ur updt
U write vry nicely
Luved ur tere liye also
And cheer up!
And lastly a big jaadu ki jhappi

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: crazy_neha
Hello. I'm NEHA Ankita Di
Really luved ur updt
U write vry nicely
Luved ur tere liye also
And cheer up!
And lastly a big jaadu ki jhappi

Hey neha🤗

hii dear

thnks for liking my work

am so glad u hav read n liked itt

nyc to meet you

yess...am cheered up...thmks dear😳😳

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#547

What a beautiful update!😊

This is so sweet and romantic.. I really love it.

Wonderful job.👍🏼

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aarti hari chandana

@Ishradivani

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#548

Ankita di its a wonderful update

Though u did only ishra bt tats all wat we want right

With simple dialogues n subtle romanceu made it beautiful

Its totally unexpected bt u expressed ramans longing for isita nruhi so beautifully

U r a amazing writer yaar really .i so loved this update i readit four times d sameday bt was able to rply noww sry for late rply n waiting how next part turns out