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Originally posted by: arunabhi

That was a nice part.. Poor Ishra , All ended up teasing them 😆😆😆
Cute one and finally the cheek kiss.. Awww !!!
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Hello Guys...thanks fr awesom response nd suprb comnts...I knw many of u told tht my pace of stry is running its because this is my alst chapter...
I dont want to loose orignal essence of stry by giving boring updtes or strech the stry...so im ending this...

I cant even believe i wrote 15 chapters of my FF...nd it crosed 50 pages...im feeling great of myself...

All this is possible is bcoz of u guys support...very very very thank u...to all my silent readers nd people who like nd comment...

okay enough of me...here goes the updte...

Chapter-15


All iyers nd bhalla's are busy in sangeet...amma is warning thm to hav bharatnatyam in sangeet nd all others are against it...somhw thy convnce amma nd mak it bollywood sangeet...

Bhalla's house ful of hustle all r in their world of selctng songs nd dance perfrmnces...

Ishra,romika, mimi,bala nd vandu are togethr aftr discusns...all r palning to tease ishra nd our ishra are fighting on their fav songs...so tht thy can perfrm with their loved one's...raman song is sadi ka fall sa(dnt bash as it is my fav dance of ishra...frm all...) ishu's is maanva laage...their high pitch made all to gather nd see the issue...

Bala nd romi knw hw to ctrl their saali nd bhai so thy took charge nd made thm calm...thy asked the issue...ishra says and all giggles louder...bala says u r fighting lik kids fr a song too bad ishu...is this the way u treat ur husband...?(teasing starts...) jiju its nt lik tht bt this raman is nt listng to me...he always do wht he likes doesnt care abt my likes...

Raman speaks hw he fulfiled all her likes by night bik ridings, making her eat ice cream in kashmir, gtng red roses at middle of night nd travlng in anothr train at tym of kashmi, dnt u remembr my suprse of cmng to ur room rathr going to my house wen i came frm US...nd madam dont forgt abt yestrday night...u woke up me @ 2 askd me chat...i obligd tht too without knwing anyone nd allowing u drve bike...ishu asks raman to shut up nd leaves angrly as their are out...

all the othr are more into teasing nd asks raman abt their secrt romntic rides hw thy spent on their rides...raman highly want to escape bt thy r nt allowing nd he gets idea nd says frst let me convnce her aftr tht i vl say wht u want to listen...thy tease him more by saying frm nw u startd behavng lik Jhoru ka Ghulam...he glares angrly bt leaves to ishu...

Ishu sorry yar...muh se nikal gaya...i lov u very mch...nd pls yar dnt keep ur angry pout...i cant tak it...ishu nd comes frwd fr a kiss...this tym he drctly kisses her on neck nd cmng slowly cmng dwn..ishu's angr is cools nd allows him nd she too starts kissing him on his shoulders nd neck...givng love bites to him...thy kiss fr som tym nd raman keeps his hand undr her kurti nd travels upwards bt she stops him...gives him a passionate kiss on his lips nd thy bite each othr lips unkowingly to her he travels his hand on her upside nd squeeze thm...vch her realise wer his hands are...

Ishu breaks the kiss nd says we r dancng on my fav nd goes frm their...raman comes running behind nd catches her hand nd says nt so easy u hav to dance on my fav...all sees their blushing faces nd can imagne wht thy did easily...

Romi nd mihir starts bhabhi bahi ka baath maanlo warna appko dance ke alava kuch aur karna padega bhai ke saath nd winks at ishu...romi tu nd starts running behind him nd asks raman to catch bt he says on one condtn...ishu says wht while runing u wil dance on my fav...no nd follws romi...aftr som tym romi gives up nd says hw many u made bhai run...raman says dnt brng me in middle...thy all laugh...nd ishra again strts their discsn on song...bt bala says u practce on both songs at sangeet we dcde the song...so u strt prctce on both...lets see who is lucky...ishra agree nd thy all strt their practcng...

Ishra are in their own dream land thy evn dnt knw wen song ended nd bt stil thy are seeing ecah other with love nd passion...romika nd mimi tickles raman nd ishu...their broken bt our mii nd romika nt stop their tickling...ishu goes near vandu nd raman near bala bt thys trt tickling ishra...


ISHRA'S SANGEET:

All the couple perfrmnces are over our ishra left...romi decided to tak her bhabhi side nd plays maanva lage song nd thy dance on it bt to their suprse sadi fall sa also plays vch is done by mihika...thy both are happy nd ishra says to ecah othr tht...iam happy fr dancng on ur fav nd doing these fights wil b memorble fr us nd thy collide their heads...

Mimi, romika, bala-vandu, ishra are their nd thy strt palyng truth or dare...thy play in couples...so frst target is bala-vandu nd raman asks thm wht is their romtic momnt nd thy shares it nd thy tease bala nd vandu tht stil their romnce is on air...thn to mimi...romi asks her to kiss mihir.infrnt of all...she as usaul kisses trough mirror nd all makes of it...nw romika nd ishra left...bottle turns to romika...bala asks tht who propsd frst...romi says he...nd thy ask hw he propsd to sarika...nd romi brought white flowers instead of red...all beat romi fr tht nd scolds too...

our ishra turn all r ready with their ques bt thy tought of askng same ques as thy dont knw whose cahnce wil cme...so mimi asks thm wht thy thnk of each othr wen thy r in BBM frst yr...thy remembr hw thy sertly had crush on each othr nd laughs...nd thy says the truth hw delbrtly thy are wait fr one chance to talk with each other...

Next haldi is done nd raman want to apply haldi to ishu nd he goes to ishu's home with out knwing anyone...nd grabs ishu to her room nd applies haldi by rubbinh his cheek nd his forehaed on her...thy are abt kiss bt knck on the door mak raman to go...bt befr leaving he says i vl tak my revnge on our spl night nd winks...(dnt ask me logic of raman going to ishu's home...)

MARRIAGE:

Thy perfrm both tamil nd punjabi rituals...ishra proceeds to raman home...nd she is welocmed by punajbi rituals by gruhapravesh nd wearing chooda(bangles...) all the day passes by by diffrnt rituals...nd it becomes night...

Bt romi makes hell difficult by stoping ishu nd asking her to mak tea r chit chting with her...nd tells raman tht papaji is calling him...finally thy r in their room...ishu til nw nt entrd raman room...to amk fer feel spl he comptly mak over his room accrdng to their tastes...nd keeps som photo graphs of their single nd som of their romntic photographs...to amk her feel tht it is also her room...

Thy mak love all night nd sleep cuddling to each othr(dnt xpct frm me to write mature contnt...i cant write...sorry fr disapointmnt...) its 8 in the morning...ishu woke up frst nd feels raman body on hers nd raelise thy are naked a shy smile plays on her lips...hw thy romncd nd made love last night...she cares raman's cheeks nd kisses thm...nd turns to get dwn of bed bt raman catches her nd says GOOD MORNING MRS.ISHITA RAMAN BHALLA...she feels lik her name sounding very diifrnt nd she loves her new name...raman drags her nd kisses her on lips...nd bite thm...he realises her aftr som tym...

she fresh up nd cmes to him by scoldng tht love bites are visible on palces nd hw to manage infrnt of family...he smiles nd says its ur issue nt mine nd goes to fresh up...ishu stil in bath robe searchng wht to wear raman cmes nd hugs her...she jerks him lovingly bt he taeses her wht wil u say to all nd hw wil u hide this...she beats him on shouldr...he again taeses her by shw ur JKR mode nly on bed nt here...nd handover a packet to her...she asks wht...he says solutn of ur prob...

Its a dress of full hands nd collar neck...covrs comptly her body...she kisses him nd goes...he chuckles nd gets raedy...

At break fast...

Ishu prepares non veg items...all r shckd as she dnt evn touch non veg bt she gerself prepard this...raman asks y did she preaprd...?? she says i wnat to mak u all happy...i dnt want u ppl to comprse bcoz i wont eat...toshi says its nt needed bt she says its her wish to do this nd says nt to stop her...romi nd mihir njys break fast...while raman is angry nd nt eatng proprly...ishu mak him eat with spoon as he is nt eatng nd guesd his angr...all watch thm kept quite...

ishra in their room...

Raman asks why did u do tht...she speaks i want to mak u happy...i knw u dnt evn touch non veg wen im with u... i really want to accompany u in all...bt i cant eat non veg bt i learnt cooking non veg fr u...i dnt want to comprse in home too...he kisses her nd says hw can u undrstnd me well...i wnat u to learn non veg cookng fr me bt i nvr said u...she smiles nd says lik u undrstnd me very well nd mak me comftble nd feel secure always...

IT's BECAUSE OF OUR ROOH(SOULS) is with each other...nd thy knw very well wht we want frm us...

While leaving ishu says im preprng Butter chickn fr aftrnoon...he smiles nd says she knws hw to impress me very well...


Aftr 1 YEAR...

On 21st day our little princess of ISHRA...

ishra are looking dashing nd comptng each othr bt ishu becme more plum nd raman taesng her tht she is nt fittng in any clothes...nd he shld ordr her cutom made clothes to fit her...she beats him bt he says I LOVE SO MUCH...nd i cant stop teasing u wen v bcme 60 also...nd takes her little princess frm him goes dwn...

Thy strt naming cermony as decided by both of thm if its girl raman wil choose name...all asks him to keep name nd warns him to keep proper name as bhabhi wil scold if keeps som odd name...he says RUHI...nd all look at him in awe...he asks wht...thy says u did cheating...he cant get thm...thy say bhabhi want to keep same name...he smiles nd say he knws tht as he can guess it..bcoz i knw her very well...all asks ishu tht if its boy thn...she says AAYU...evn nw family says tht ur ROOH(SOUL) is with ecah other...


P.S:Finally i completd my FF...Comnts nd critsim are alwys welcomed...

P.S.S:I hop it met ur xpctatns...

Once again thnk u...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Happy story! Happy ending! Awasome!
Tnq 4 d all pms!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very beautiful u wrote this ff n its was good romantic pls keep writing n thank you for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...
i liked song sel convo b/w Raman- ishita...
anyway
it was HAPPY ENDING...loved it ...
thanks for the lovely and Romantic story...



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