SS: Kabhi Nahi Chodungi Tumare Saath..!!! updated part 11 page 30 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
Arey yaar iss Shagun ko tho mein 😡😡😡.. Poor Adi, He needs love and care..
Loved the way Raman cared for Ishitha.. Please get them to confess and yes make sure they romance in front of Shagun !!! We can have fun..
Let's see where this goes.. Nice update ..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.
Iss shagun ko tho...
She used adi 4 ger gatiya plans.
Ishra worried about their desision.
Ishita MU Raman.
Plz don't create MU between ishra.
Let them romance infront of shagun.
Update sn
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update
when adi ll learn ...
last part was too good


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Posted: 10 years ago
woww!! awesumm updatee!! loved it!! shagunn..arghhh!! i just hate this woman to the coreee!!! why is Raman moving out!! another siyappa! hope ishra supports each other in this situation!
cont soon! cant wait for the next part! :D Brilliantly written! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
guys thank you soo much for your support and love. i am overwhelmed with the response i am getting from you guys. when i started this ss, the kind of response am getting now was least expected. i have no words to thank you people am really very grateful to each and every one of you.
ok now am here with my other part... sorry for the mistakes.. please do enjoy reading



Ishita who was already confused and restless with many thoughts and especially shagun coming into their lives, misunderstood him that he was talking about shifting along with shagun, her anger rose thinking that he once again chose adi and shagun over her and ruhi. She didn't allow him to talk further, she abruptly stopped him and said

"RAMAN.. GAADI ROKO"

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Part 9a:

"raman gaadi roko"

"kyon kya huva"

"roko gaadi"

He looked through the window, there were no stalls, even the road was empty. He was confused by her sudden behaviour.

"raman meine kaha ghaadi roko, please stop the car now raman"

As soon as he stopped the car, she got down and started walking. Infact she started walking fastly, before he could recognise she had moved a little distance far from him. He parked the car and ran behind her fastly

"ishita"

"ishitaa.. ruko"

"suddenly kya hogaya tumko"

"arre yaar kuch toh bolo"

"kahan jaaraheho.. ishita ruko"

"kahin bhi jaavun.. aapko kya"

She was literally testing his patience. "arre mujhe kya matlab?"

"abhi tak tho tum teek thina.. achanak kya hogaya"

"arre yaar phirse pagalpan ka daura padgaya kya"

"haan haan mein tho paagal hun"

"mujhe jaha jaana haina mein apne aap chalungi"

"yaar tum sacchi pagal ho kya.. kya bina matlabki kuch bhi bole jaraheho"

"ohh.. hello super jet express thoda slow walk karo, yeh drama bandh karo"

"ishita.." "ishita"

"teeke.. am not following you anymore, jo karna hai karo, am going back" she didn't even bother to turn back and see him, he got hell irritated and turned back, and started walking towards his car slowly. After few steps, he couldn't control himself so he again turned back to call her. Immediately he ran towards her, 3 guys had surrounded her, she was standing at he centre least affected. He went straightly towards her, held her by her arm

"ishita chalo yahan se "

She stood there rooted, didn't even move an inch. By that time, one of the men came forward and held her by the other arm

"arre saab, kyon force kar raheho.. chodo na.."

Raman gave a hard punch on his face "oyee chup.. zuban sambalke baath karo, yeh meri biwi hai"

"arre tumare biwi hai tho ghar mein bitadho na, aise beech sadakpe kyon kadi hai madamjii"

The argument between raman and the men got more worse, on the above of all her behaviour irked him a lot. She didn't even look at his side, stood still. He poured out all his anger and frustration on the 3 poor souls, he bet them black and blue". They ran for their lives, still ishita stood there rooted, didn't even take a glance at him. She was never like this, but her love for him, feeling of left alone jealousy and most importantly the mere thinking of him moving out of the house along with shagun and adi, made her vulnerable, made her angry. He marched towards her with full anger and dragged her towards the car, she struggled to come out of his grip but his grip was more tighter.

"tummara dimak karab hogaya kya, achanak ithna gussa kyun"

"agar vun logone tume kuch kiya tho" That was all she could stand, she shouted on the top of her voice.

" tho kya" "aapko isse kya matlab hai" " kaisa farak padtha aapko"

He was about to say something but she didn't let him to talk.

"aapne kabhi mere baremein socha"

"chalo teeke mere bare mein tho nahi, kamse kam bhaaki gharwalon aur ruhi ki bare mein sochlethe na"

He was confused on what she was talking and more over she was not even allowing him to speak.

"aapna sirf bolthe ho ki aap ruhise bahuth pyaar karthe ho par nahi"

"aapko tho hamesha adi aur shagun ki khushi ki parwa hai"

"bas sochliya ki aap adi aur shagun ke saath Mumbai shift kar raheho"

"aapne ek bar bhi nahi sochana agar aap ghar chodke chale javoge, ek baar bhi nahi sochana sab ko kya hoga, ruhi ko kya hoga near kya hoga"

Her words were ringing in his ears, it was then he realised that she had misunderstood what he had said. He opened his mouth to clarify her but she cut him short.

"mani sacch kehathatha ki agr aapko chuna padana, aap zarur adi aur shagun ko he choose karoge"

Tears made their way down her cheeks. She was crying and talking continuously. Raman thought "yeh aurat sacchi pagal hai phele mere baath puri sunehi nahi aur uparse mujhe kuch bolne nahi derahihai.. khudh bolejarahehai.. aur dekho uparse ro bhi rahi hai phir bhi bolna bandh nahi kar rahehai"

"raman mein maanthihun ki humne ruhi ke liye shaadiki thi "

"aur mujhe yeh bhi patha hai aap shagunse bahuth pyaar karthe ho, par raman mein kya karoon"

" raman agar mujhe aapse pyaar hogaya tho, mein kya karoon, isme meri kya althi hai raman"

"i love you raman.. i love you so much" by now she was crying profusely but didn't stop her rambling"

"ruhi keliye bol bolkar kab kaise aapse pyaar hogaya mujhe pathahi nahi"

"meine apni feelings ko bahuth control karneke koshish ki pa nahi kar paaye"

"raman agar aap chale javoge tho mein zinda nahi reha paavunga raman"

Raman was on cloud nine, finally his madrasan has shed all her ear, insecurities and opened up her heart to him but was not ready to hear him out, she was not even allowing him to speak up. Atlast he lost lost all his coolness and did what he felt right at that moment.

Holding her by her shoulders he rammed his lips on hers. He took all of her mouth in his. She was totally shocked. Her mind couldn't register what was happening. She tried resisting him, the more he pushed him away, the more he crushed her. His hands slowly travelled down her body and rested on her waist.he held her tightly by her waist. He chewed each ad every bit of her lips, sensing his vigourousness she finally gave in. She started responding to his kiss, he bit her lower lip to enter her. She moaned and slightly opened her mouth enough for his entry. He tasted every nook and corner of her mouth with his tongue. Their saliva started flowing from ones mouth to the others. The kiss that started vigourously turned slower and more passionate. Both of their tongue danced in unison and were exploring each others mouth. After some time which was like eternity to them, they broke apart due to lack of air.

She could not meet his eyes due to shyness and also couldn't hide the blush that crept on her cheeks. Raman enjoyed the scene in front of his eyes, her flushed face swollen lips were a treat to his eyes, he felt a new kind of joy on seeing his effect on her. Out of embrassment, she moved towards the car but held her by her wrist and stopped her. He went on his knees holding her hand. Ishita was shocked as well as puzzled about what he was upto.

Edited by yazhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome updates! Eager to read further!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome...
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Posted: 10 years ago
For part 8
It was seriously superb part,..!!
Shagun...ahhh😡😡 I would surely kill her someday..!!And even Adi is helping her out..huh..!! Why can't they stop poking nose in Raman and ishita's life..!! 😡
And Ishita's brain..no wonder...she thought raman is saying to moving to mumbai with shagun...Why can't for once..she could think some sensible thing..!!
Ohh god...so much happening..!
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow amazing...2 updates in a day so eager that expecting othe updates tooo😉😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...part 9 was such an unexpected treat...!!
Ishita confessed her love between her lectures...!!
Awww...it was sooo cute..! raman kissed her to shut her up..!!
Awwwiiieee..!! i am so excited for next part..!!
plz Plz continue soon,.,.!!
i am eagerly waiting for next part.!!
thanx for pm..!!
do pm me for next too..!

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