In Your Heart(MDT SERIES SS)pr13/pg27.(10/3/2015)

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part 1

Scene starts in Iyer house it is early morning 4 O' clock.Ishita woke in an instant as if she saw some nightmare.She wakes up from bed and realizes it was just a dream.It has been since two months that is what she remembers.

She last remembers that she woke up in an hospital and some lady apologizing her for some accident.She don't who she is and she neither remember about the accident.

Her parents were sitting beside her and she could see a lady whi standing at door .

Ishita "Aap kaun?"

Lady was confused and puzzled she never expected that soemone could forget her it is Shagun.

Shagun "Main kaun?"

Ishita "Main yahan kyaa kar rahen hun?"

Doctor understood that it is matter of anmesia.

Doctor "Aap accident sey pehley kyaa kar rahen they?"

Ishita "Mera accident kabh huan.I mean how?" she was getting some head ache.

Doctor "No problem.Aap yeh bathayiyen kee aapko jho yaad hain bathayiyen."

Ishita "Main clinic jaa rahen thee suddenly main behosh ho gayen thee."

Doctor "Koi date tho yaad hoga aapko."

Ishita "Aap yeh sabh kyon poochrahen hain."

Doctor "Just general test."

Ishita "November 10th 2013"

Doctor "Ok .You take rest hum aapsey baath mey lilengey."

Ishita then accidentally looks in calender and realizes date is different she is in November 2014.

Ishita "November 2014"

It caught doctor's attention.

Ishita "Mujhsye kuch yaad kyon nahen hain."She is getting headache.

Amma "Ishu koi problem nahee tum theek ho jaogee.Tum ..."

Doctor "Aapkey maa sahen kehrahen hain.Aap tension math leejiyen aapko jaroor yaad aajayega but you shoul not take tension."

This is the scene she remembered last this in her present life.One whole year is missing in her life.

She wanted to know what happened in this year but doctors told she should not force her memory to know by other sources and she should try her best to remember herself.From what she remembered about her house everything changed from their neighbours to everything.

Everyone is behaving normally with her or atleast acting as if everything is normal.

She started going back to clinic and with a whole year missing it is a big puzzle in her life.

There is one more person who is awake in just a room located in similar corner but opposite house.

Raman has spent many sleepless nights since the same day.His wife remembers him nomore.

He remembers the day when he he took medicines and went back to Ishita knowing she got consciosness but she din't recogonize him neither did she tried to recononize.He is complete stranger for her.

Then when they discussed with doctors.He adviced him not to remind anything happened as it may lead to imbalance and she may strain herself.

"She has to get ready to know what happened then only we can tell.She may be wanting to know but her health is not in good condition.She might not be able to adjust herself to new thing directly.So let her be herself."

From then onwards it is backto olden days.

Ishita would'nt interact with many as she don't know how she used to interact with them.She conjusted her world to clinic and house and frequent visits of Bala and Vandu.

Everyone is aware of this and no one tried to make things complex.

But it was torture for Raman.He has many things to be happy but they are same which made situation worse for him.

Romi started his own buisness in Mumbai with Raman's funds .He started a recreation club and married Sarika months ago.Ishita was Ishita Bhalla then.Simmi also became partner for her brother and they are running it combined with Raman's guidance and support.

Mihir and his wife Mihika were in Mumbai as PSR needed an MD there and none were trustworthy than him.

Mr and Mrs Bhalla were also in Mumbai looking after their children there as Sarika needed support in he rsituation.

Here Raman is left alone with Ruhi.He has been taking care of Ruhi .

Then Ruhi was very sad knowing Ishita remembers her no more but she knew her Ishima is always her Ishima she will remember everythign back.They always see her morning while going to clinic but she never looked at them as she was in dilemma who are who for her.

It has been a month since then and there was no improvement in Ishita's condition.Ishita has stressed herself to know what happened but no one was helping.

Then it was morning 8'o clock and as usual they saw Ishita going to clinic it is the time they could see Ishita as she will lock herself inside later if she comes back home.

Then while in drive Raman could feel sadness in Ruhi's face and she wanted to be with her mother and she missed her so much.

Raman "Ishima yaad aa rahen hain."

Ruhi has tears in her eyes but she know she would make things complex .

Ruhi was silent and Raman understood what is matter.

Raman "Ishima key pass jaan ahain naa tumhey."

Ruhi "Par Ishima key pass kaisey jaon.Ishima ka health theek nahen hain naa."

Raman "Who bhee bahuth deppressed hain.Paati ney bathaaya.Main kuch karoonga."

Raman "Tum abh school jaon main shaam thak kuch kartha hun."

Then it was evening and Raman has made plan to make Ruhi spemd timewith Ishita.

Raman "Yaad hain naa.Tumhey kuch bhee yaad nahen dilaana hain.Aur Ishima nahen aunty bulaogee."

Ruhi "Yaad hain."

Raman"Aur koi problm hon tho mujhey phone karnaa .Main waapas aajaonga."

Then after confirming from Amma that Ishita is in home he went there.

Amma "Raman tum yahan kyaa?Koi kaam hain kyaa?"

Ishita was in hall she noticed her neighbour clearly for first time.All these days she used to hide herself and everyone from her vision.

Raman "Aunty help chahiyen.Bahuth important hain."

Amma "kyaa ?tum pehley bolon tho sahee."

Raman "Company ney emergency board meeting rakha hain London mey aur mujhey jaana padega."

Raman "Unlogon ney urgently rakha kee mujhsye koi planning karney mey time nahen milee.Ruhi ko ghar mey akela nahen chod saktha."

Amma "Theek hain Raman.Ruhi ko hummarey ghar mey chod doo.Yahen rahegee."

Amma then pointing at Ishita calling her "Ishita ko bachey bahuth pasand hain who khyaal rakhegee.

Amma "Ishita yeh Raman hain Raman Bhalla ummarey saamney ghar mey rehtey hain.Yhe unkee beti Ruhi.Raman yeh Ishita hain." As if introducing her for first time.

Ruhi "Hi aunty."

Raman giving Ruhi's hand to Ishita dn she holding as carefully as she used to.

Ishita "Hi Ruhi."

Raman "Thanks aunty main abhee nikaltha hun.Ruhi key pass gahr key keys hain koi problem ho tho mujhye bathayiyen."

Raman "Ruhi be a good girl."

Ramanleaves telling this while Ruhi is bidding him bye and Ishita was confused and happy at same time with a kid under her protection.Ishita felt somehting strabge in her heart but she could'nt understand what it is but it felt nice for her.

She was holding Ruhi's hands and enters her house.

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Left alone would be updated today evening .
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This story is very interesting... Update soon...
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very much intrstng...
nice concpt nd diff strt...
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Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

Left alone would be updated today evening .

There will be update on restored also.
Old tracks will be updated on each a day from tommorow.

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looks like no one interested in this story line.
should I continue or not.
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Nice start .. Pls continue ... Raman is so understanding :)
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its interesting hope apshagun didn't create drama
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😆Re writing their love story?
I'm curious, please do continue!😊
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Loved the update..
Great start to the story..👏👏
Please pm me the next part..😊😊

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