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Originally posted by: -Payal-

Kiara,

I don't comment very often (as I'm sure you can understand). Your other FF is a favorite of mine (i always hit the 'like' button at the very least). I am a HUGE fan of the way you write. You paint the picture so vividly...and I love how detail oriented work is.

I am SO GLAD that Rajji's IshOk Friendship SS triggered this. I can't wait to read more.

Thank you both!

Love,

P

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Payal,

Honestly. Thank you. Your words just brought this huge smile to my face.

It doesn't matter if you comment or not - personally I would love to hear your critique but honestly I just want to assure myself that there's someone out there, reading. And thanks, I'm so proud of the fact that every one level Meherbaan and that I'm recognised for it - it feels great and at the same time insecure 'cause you suddenly have someone who spends time on what you present and you can't make a waste of their time.

IKR. i totally should love that girl, though at the moment she's responsible for this distraction that she has brought forth. I need to dedicate the first chapter to her. :)

Originally posted by: -Payal-

I edited my original comment as you were responding. LOVE Meherban, and I will come back and comment when you finish it for sure. Loved Climax, too...it was a wonderful take on that controversial bedroom scene (which, despite it being viewed as distasteful, I loved to the core).

Time doesn't permit a proper reply to each chapter, but I promise to leave a comment when I can. No need to feel insecure...just keep doing what you're doing in the way you're doing it. Its fab and I wouldn't change a thing. I think what I love most is that you're vivid and vague at the same time, allowing the reader to make their own conclusions...and, your stories have multiple layers which you peel back individually (at least, in Meherban, I feel you do). I love that.

As for Rajji, yes, you totally should love her. Disraction or not, she's simply...pretty fabulous. :)

Take your time with this and Meherban...I understand the pressures of Real Life all too well :)

Love,
P

Originally posted by: rajji-cutest

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I am SO scared of what is coming. I am literally scared.

So. I kinda now where this is going and... oh god.

Woman where is the disclaimer about breaking the reader's heart ?!

Oh. My. God.

I didn't read the Merbaan story (since the summer i only read OS and that too, less and less often) but if Payal says it's good, then i'm rushing to check it out.

Love.

Originally posted by: -Payal-

Excuse the intrusion.

Rajji, I have to say, I'm with you on this - I know where this is going, and it seems to be a scary, dark place full of pain and anger for everyone involved.

Even ruhi will be involved. EVEN RUHI PAYAL !

At the same time, I'm exhilarated because I think this is a place that deserves to be explored. We can't deny that we have probably all wondered "what if"...I'm just glad someone is shedding a bit of light on it.

SO TRUE. I can't fight you on this.

Hope you enjoy Meherban...I don't think it will disappoint. The writing is as detail oriented as it is vague (and by that I mean that it allows for the reader to interpret and make conclusions)...and the story has layers that are explored one at a time. The characters' equations with one another are a treat.

Happy reading!

Will do ASAP. 😃

PS: After her explicitly saying "Raman could cheat...this could take a dark turn" ...and this quote to accompany the prologue:

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'Cause darlin' I'm a nightmare dressed like a dream. 'Cause I don't believe in fairy tales, but I believe in you and me. ...you're still looking for a disclaimer? I thought she spelled it out quite well for us! 😉😆

Hahaha that's true ! I was reading the disclaimer thinking "i got this!" then the first part/prologue and my heart was telling me "DON'T GO THERE. DON'T".😆

I needed a disclaimer type : "you think you're ready. Well. You're NOT."

Not nice, just honest. Also, I need to tell you that I find it creepy that I would find you on my porch (I can only assume you'd be hanging out with Dev as he spends a lot of time during the day out there when it's not too cold) as apposed to my front door. Lucky for you, I live on the ground floor. 😆
See, you should have told me more about your house's architecture! Now i feel stupid! 😲 I supposed your front door had a porch too. Anyway the simple idea of spending time with Dev makes me actually want to enter on the porch side. 😃 He'll love me, i KNOW it !

[Kiara, thanks for allowing the intrusion (not that I asked)...sorry for "spamming" your thread. Looking forward to this one...whenever you get around to it.]

I'm sorry for spamming too. its just that i love dogs. And Payal. But mostly dogs.