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Nisha

@Nichuss

Elite

+ 33

Posted: 10 years ago

#751

thank god ishu stood for him...

and the truth he said...

she believed him...

now entry of her father...

how will b father n sil meeting face to face in front f daughter cum

wife

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: Nichuss
thank god ishu stood for him...
and the truth he said...
she believed him...
now entry of her father...
how will b father n sil meeting face to face in front f daughter cum
wife

She is a woman of firm beliefs and righteous virtures. She had to stick with her husband.

Thank you.

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Avanti

@avi_12

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#753

Oh my God!!!!! Its just a week when i read your 6th or so update and today i find its all done??? Why did you end it????😭😭😭😭😭
Anyways... u got the story ahead very well... i was almost on a roller coaster ride!!! So beautifully you have portrayed Ishra's story 👏👏 loved all the smart conversations between them and then that tight blow to that moron, whatever his name was!!!
Last scene was epic...😃😃
Now what should i do without your FF 😔😔
Start writing a new one😈

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: avi_12
Oh my God!!!!! Its just a week when i read your 6th or so update and today i find its all done??? Why did you end it????😭
Anyways... u got the story ahead very well... i was almost on a roller coaster ride!!! So beautifully you have portrayed Ishra's story 👏👏 loved all the smart conversations between them and then that tight blow to that moron, whatever his name was!!!
Last scene was epic...😃😃
Now what should i do without your FF 😔😔
Start writing a new one😈

I have already but not oin Raman and ishita. Its on Simeon and abhimanyu, a prospective couple.

Thank you for the lovely comments.

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#755

Awsumm ff..!! Loved it..!!

And superb ending...!!

The whole convo./...was superb..!!

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#756

I can't believe I'm so late with my comment..!!

Beautiful update Aamna... I loved that you tied all the loose ends...Their bookstore connection, her weathered relationship with her father, her ambition to be a writer.. it was truly a fitting end!!😊

Really really enjoyed this one, Aamna.. such a treat to read!!!🤗

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: desire_nikki
Awsumm ff..!! Loved it..!!
And superb ending...!!
The whole convo./...was superb..!!

Thank you Nikki!

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: nrn1486
I can't believe I'm so late with my comment..!!
Beautiful update Aamna... I loved that you tied all the loose ends...Their bookstore connection, her weathered relationship with her father, her ambition to be a writer.. it was truly a fitting end!!😊

Really really enjoyed this one, Aamna.. such a treat to read!!!🤗

Better late than never neethi and I'm glad you found the ending apt.

Thank you :)

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#759

Originally posted by: -Srishty-
First of all sorry for the delay, yesterday I had a quite busy day and also I was out of words to comment on the last part of this story. Somehow I'm finding it difficult to comment.

Never have I enjoyed the climax as much as in this story. I've realised you keep things simple, discomplicated and without the unecessary drama which is really one of the best things of your writing. You get straight to the point. That being said Raman-Ishita's conversation was really enjoyable to read.

Raman is such a chuppa rustam. He contacted Mr. Iyer without informing Ishita, I felt like hugging him here. He truly is a Mr. Perfect, a Prince Charming for any girl.

Everytime I was coming near to the end I used to go back and re-read the whole thing from the beginning but this couldn't go on forever, isn't it? I want more, more and more.

Is it too much to ask for a last part, a part B of this? With only Raman-Ishita-Ruhi in it? Please?!

A fantabulous story from a fine writer!👏

Apology accepted after reading your wonderful comment.

And thank you for the overview of my writing style/fiction, its a joyful moment to know how its being perceived in totality.

To be honest, I had, somewhere along the line lost my muse and the zeal to end this story and I hastened to finish it before I lose the entire interest altogether so I'm glad the end turned out well and you enjoyed reading it. Its also to say that I might not come up with a part B, I don't usually say no, I find it hard when someone asks with such expectations so I won't promise but I shall try to make a better epilogue. Not anytime soon though (IF I plan to that is).

Thanks again :)