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Kiara

@AraBearxo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#941

Originally posted by: Ish_0607
I was silent reader ( srry :p)but ur this update made me to comment
this story is very unique I just loved it
this is the best update of story
awesome and amazing are very small word for this
pm me when u update... :)

Haha. Hello. I'm Kiara. Ish. Sacchi?

Thank you. Khamsamnidha.

I think the past is magical. I love it.

Thank you.

Add the PM account and I may.

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#942

Originally posted by: SurrealFantasy
I KEPT LOOKING FOR THE FACE-OFF YOU PROMISED!!
The sadist in me is in deep deep sadness-coma because you brought false hopes to it. *Sobs*

Anyway, coming to the section, I liked that it was sorta filler, but showed Raman's progression in terms of acceptance and moving forward. Ishita seems wary, as she has every right to be, but I'm sure puttar will manage her.

Mihika and Vandu's conversation was very well crafted and emotional - the Mihika in the show is now stupid, so this is a nice flashback into the girl she could-have-been-still.

Can't wait to read further. Your good English makes me weep, because I wanna bang my head on my keyboard when I read stuff filled with grammatical errors - which believe me is VERY COMMON.

I Live You, Liver. Bas.🤗

Rock the socks out of the boards. *Imagine Snotty Inspirational Voice* - "You can do it."🤣

Okay. There was a reply. 😆

I penned that face off and then realised that the stuff Meherbaan Raman was preaching about. The show Raman was doing the same. The horror. So stopped the update.

Raman in the next update is your type. All melancholic and all that jazz.

We are obsessed with the term Puttar.Bas.

I like Mihika and Mihir because that's a relationship that lasted for so long and faced so many odds. Mihika ka high-school till now. And Ishita marrying the guy Mihika wanted to ask permission to invite for the wedding, that's kinda fateful. Meherbaan and all the fateful encounters. Sigh.

I confess. I found the conversation dramatic. In a needed way. It just reminds of how much the struggle to be together, you know. Face the worst, yet be together. That's my favorite bit in the update. Bas.

If that was sarcasm I'm coming after you with a 'koita' (sickle). 😆

Boards. Don't remind. 😳

Now read. I haven't read this again because I will continue if I do read it. So ignore the error.

"Are we done? You'll aren't family. You'll are a bunch of hypocrites who judge people based on your perception. You know what she didn't deserve. She didn't deserve being trash talked by the likes of you. She didn't deserve being flung out for faults that weren't hers. She didn't deserve to be forced to walked out because you'll decided that a guy without balls to face reality was your hero. She didn't deserve the pain you'll pit her through. She didn't deserve you'll. Or you'll don't deserve her. So the next time you have scheduled prep talks for your sister or her husband take it up to Nitya's sister or her husband because Ishita isn't related to you and neither are any of us. This is Ishita's well deserved closure. Let's be decent enough to give her that. Decisions were made years ago. You want to play house, play it in your mind because reality is nothing close to you version. I'll tell you what is. Making a innocent who was barely twenty one hate herself is. Instead of offering her comfort, flinging her to the wolves is. Making her lose herself is. Making her doubt her existence is. Not even trying to contact her for seven long years is. And now, you'll want her back? To do what? Kill her all over again. Or to watch her aimlessly waste her life away because the Ishita I met hated her bare existence. The Ishita I met couldn't hold back and lie down because she was haunted by you'll and your hypocrisy. She was your sister. Now she is my wife. And my wife will not be haunted by the likes of you. The assholes who still can't talk to her without cursing her. You'll make it difficult for her to spend an hour with you'll. And you want to be a family," Raman scoffed at the end as pushed away his glass of scotc

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#943

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Okay. There was a reply. 😆

I penned that face off and then realised that the stuff Meherbaan Raman was preaching about. The show Raman was doing the same. The horror. So stopped the update.

Raman in the next update is your type. All melancholic and all that jazz.

We are obsessed with the term Puttar.Bas.

I like Mihika and Mihir because that's a relationship that lasted for so long and faced so many odds. Mihika ka high-school till now. And Ishita marrying the guy Mihika wanted to ask permission to invite for the wedding, that's kinda fateful. Meherbaan and all the fateful encounters. Sigh.

I confess. I found the conversation dramatic. In a needed way. It just reminds of how much the struggle to be together, you know. Face the worst, yet be together. That's my favorite bit in the update. Bas.

If that was sarcasm I'm coming after you with a 'koita' (sickle). 😆

Boards. Don't remind. 😳

Now read. I haven't read this again because I will continue if I do read it. So ignore the error.

"Are we done? You'll aren't family. You'll are a bunch of hypocrites who judge people based on your perception. You know what she didn't deserve. She didn't deserve being trash talked by the likes of you. She didn't deserve being flung out for faults that weren't hers. She didn't deserve to be forced to walked out because you'll decided that a guy without balls to face reality was your hero. She didn't deserve the pain you'll pit her through. She didn't deserve you'll. Or you'll don't deserve her. So the next time you have scheduled prep talks for your sister or her husband take it up to Nitya's sister or her husband because Ishita isn't related to you and neither are any of us. This is Ishita's well deserved closure. Let's be decent enough to give her that. Decisions were made years ago. You want to play house, play it in your mind because reality is nothing close to you version. I'll tell you what is. Making a innocent who was barely twenty one hate herself is. Instead of offering her comfort, flinging her to the wolves is. Making her lose herself is. Making her doubt her existence is. Not even trying to contact her for seven long years is. And now, you'll want her back? To do what? Kill her all over again. Or to watch her aimlessly waste her life away because the Ishita I met hated her bare existence. The Ishita I met couldn't hold back and lie down because she was haunted by you'll and your hypocrisy. She was your sister. Now she is my wife. And my wife will not be haunted by the likes of you. The assholes who still can't talk to her without cursing her. You'll make it difficult for her to spend an hour with you'll. And you want to be a family," Raman scoffed at the end as pushed away his glass of scotc

I loved MiMi but now I don't like Mihika very much. Let's wait to see how this moves ahead.

THIS. THIS is Puttar in his RKB avatar, which comes first in my list of Puttar's avatars. #RKBFTW

Who is he talking to? Ishita's brother?

Put this in the next post and I'll love you till the end of eternity.😃

How was he becoming YHM's Raman? What was he preaching about?

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Kiara

@AraBearxo

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#944

MiMi. Sigh. They were cute. Like Mihika was hilarious. And they butchered her.

RKB is ruthless. This sint RKB yet. RKB is scary man. Best Puttar avatar ever. Shall never do him justice. RKB ka one word and you cover.

Yep. Ishita ka bro who gives him the much needed prep talk on 'how to be a good husband' or the brotherly prep talk which Raman already got from Bala. Hilarious shit.

Next post. As in next mini chapter. You should love me. That's conversation. Conversation. And fluff and kiss. After that I'm worried if I should change ratings to from PG to PG-13 or Rated R. My attempt at 'mature stuff' in Be Intehaan did nothing. So I don't know. You tell me, I shall follow. Not Complete lights out though, that's plain boring.

How is Meherbaan wala Raman such a gentleman I wonder? I mean, I remeber a comment in the initial chapters fifth or so asking how Raman is such a goody two shoes after two kids. And now that I think of it, it's hilarious.

Basically he preaches on how not to hurt her, and how they never gave her importance blah blah in the excerpt and in the show they were doing just that - the Shagun track.

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#945

Okay. Cool.

So Vishwa gets a small dose of RKB. Doing justice to that avatar is hard, no question, but this is just like him.

No one tells him what to do. And any one who wrongs his family, gets verbally assaulted (Bala's mother/Shagun/Ashok), physically assaulted (Param/Ashok) or thrown on the streets (Param).

So a verbally assaulting RKB is very welcome.

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#946

Originally posted by: AraBearxx

Okay. There was a reply. 😆

I penned that face off and then realised that the stuff Meherbaan Raman was preaching about. The show Raman was doing the same. The horror. So stopped the update.

Raman in the next update is your type. All melancholic and all that jazz.

We are obsessed with the term Puttar.Bas.

I like Mihika and Mihir because that's a relationship that lasted for so long and faced so many odds. Mihika ka high-school till now. And Ishita marrying the guy Mihika wanted to ask permission to invite for the wedding, that's kinda fateful. Meherbaan and all the fateful encounters. Sigh.

I confess. I found the conversation dramatic. In a needed way. It just reminds of how much the struggle to be together, you know. Face the worst, yet be together. That's my favorite bit in the update. Bas.

If that was sarcasm I'm coming after you with a 'koita' (sickle). 😆

Boards. Don't remind. 😳

Now read. I haven't read this again because I will continue if I do read it. So ignore the error.

"Are we done? You'll aren't family. You'll are a bunch of hypocrites who judge people based on your perception. You know what she didn't deserve. She didn't deserve being trash talked by the likes of you. She didn't deserve being flung out for faults that weren't hers. She didn't deserve to be forced to walked out because you'll decided that a guy without balls to face reality was your hero. She didn't deserve the pain you'll pit her through. She didn't deserve you'll. Or you'll don't deserve her. So the next time you have scheduled prep talks for your sister or her husband take it up to Nitya's sister or her husband because Ishita isn't related to you and neither are any of us. This is Ishita's well deserved closure. Let's be decent enough to give her that. Decisions were made years ago. You want to play house, play it in your mind because reality is nothing close to you version. I'll tell you what is. Making a innocent who was barely twenty one hate herself is. Instead of offering her comfort, flinging her to the wolves is. Making her lose herself is. Making her doubt her existence is. Not even trying to contact her for seven long years is. And now, you'll want her back? To do what? Kill her all over again. Or to watch her aimlessly waste her life away because the Ishita I met hated her bare existence. The Ishita I met couldn't hold back and lie down because she was haunted by you'll and your hypocrisy. She was your sister. Now she is my wife. And my wife will not be haunted by the likes of you. The assholes who still can't talk to her without cursing her. You'll make it difficult for her to spend an hour with you'll. And you want to be a family," Raman scoffed at the end as pushed away his glass of scotc

Babe! I'm going to interject... because I can! 😳

Wow ... okay so yes... preachy and OTT and not @ all subtle . But come on you fell for on screen RKB first right? And onscreen RKB he is this guy as much as he is the corporate destroyer (I'm talking pre SHADHI mess, when you loved him as much as me). And this guy sometimes he is needed. So I look forward to the calculating RKB of MB but I appreciate that this guy was the first draft, the immediate one... because even if you rejected him he made the initial entrance!😉

Last three lines of sermon... this is why I am hooked!

🤗

PS: my stalking skills, so ON! I caught you even when you 'updated' in the comments...*sigh* should've been a P.I... cum hairstylist/esthetican- best job description ever!❤️

Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#947

Please Do Continue Soon..Waiting For The Next Update Eagerly..

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..TeriDeewani..

@..TeriDeewani..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#948

Hey Kia just saw ur reply on my 1st post
That was so sweet
I will stay in touch wid u through Meherbaan,Be Intehaan and the list is big
Plzz updt soon or I'll forget the story 😉
If u get time plzz try reading my FF on IshRa its a different story wid different concept

Link: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4297536&PID=118959025&#p118959025

P.S:If it doesn't work search on google about my FF

IshRa FF:That's Love

Edited by crazy_neha - 10 years ago