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Hi Sweety,
It was an absolute pleasure reading both your posts. Though we have read the pervious post before, who would not want to have the chocolate when offered for the second time. We loved how brilliantly you described of the scene with your choice of words that gives the rain scene a whole new perspective. One such example, The dance was a foreplay to help them reach the level of unity. Each and every movement in that dance was a way of showing love, possessiveness, passion, desire, and belonging. The word 'foreplay' and how you connected it with the dance and the emotions were just superb. Kudos to the knack of choice you have with the words you choose because if failed to be conveyed properly it would be a flop. But you my child, have done wonderfully.
Sweety, there is no need for a long post when you have beautifully penned down the emotions. Great things come in small packages. It is never about the quantity but it's about the quality. Just like we had mentioned in the whatsapp chat, when we hijacked Shiva's phone. We love how you write from your heart, every word, every sentence clearly reflects it. Keep up at it. We are certainly looking forward to reading more of your posts.
It was an absolute pleasure reading both your posts. Though we have read the pervious post before, who would not want to have the chocolate when offered for the second time. We loved how brilliantly you described of the scene with your choice of words that gives the rain scene a whole new perspective. One such example, The dance was a foreplay to help them reach the level of unity. Each and every movement in that dance was a way of showing love, possessiveness, passion, desire, and belonging. The word 'foreplay' and how you connected it with the dance and the emotions were just superb. Kudos to the knack of choice you have with the words you choose because if failed to be conveyed properly it would be a flop. But you my child, have done wonderfully.
Sweety, there is no need for a long post when you have beautifully penned down the emotions. Great things come in small packages. It is never about the quantity but it's about the quality. Just like we had mentioned in the whatsapp chat, when we hijacked Shiva's phone. We love how you write from your heart, every word, every sentence clearly reflects it. Keep up at it. We are certainly looking forward to reading more of your posts.
God Bless..with love,
Shiva's Parents.
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