Do u love me? - an ishra ss updated part 3 completed

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Hey all...m here again wid a new story. This tym seriously a short story. This idea came after watching Ishita in bathrobe yesterday. So came up wid dis story.

Do tell me if u like it or not.

First part in the next post below.


PART 1
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Part 1



Ishita comes out of the bathroom wearing wardrobe. Raman who was busy checking his files for meetings today realized her presence and turned to see her. She was in bathrobe gifted by him. Her hair wet and open. The tiny droplets of water were falling on her face from hairs making her look all the more divine and beautiful. He was in the state of awe. Devoid of any expression on his face, he was just staring at her without even blink. Ishita felt uncomfortable under his gaze. She was blushing hard. Her cheeks turned crimson red at the thought that he was checking her out.

"Raman..wt r doing? " she tried to ask looking everywhere but him. Without responding he started his footsteps towards him. She was shocked. What was he upto, she thought. "Raman..." he saw her confused and smirked to himself. He approached her. She started moving backwards. With slow steps, he was moving in closer and closer while she tried to move away.

The wall behind blocked her steps. She stood there, her back glued to wall and he came even closer blocking her path from sideways with his hands. She was breathing heavily and he could see nervousness in her eyes. He smiled at the thought of effect he was having on her. He removed the negligible distance between them, their faces inches apart. He didnt miss the blush and slight smile on her face so he knew she was also feeling the same as he was after seeing her in such state.

His lips went near her ear. She closed her eyes unable to take his torture any more. As his lips approached her earlobes, she heard a husky voice "So..u hav started using my gift. Good job. But jaan, I gave it to you so that I dont have to see u doing that tailoring and wat u did. U r showing me dis now. Controlling has become more difficult now baby. What will I do?" he completed his words with a smirk and left her there picking his blazer out of the room.

She opened her eyes. It took her some time to realise what actually happened few minutes back. Was it true wat she heard..he actually called me jaan and baby. Aiyoo Ishita..he was just teasing you. Nthng else. You r mad. Why did you respond. As if u were feeling week on knees, u needed him for support. U should have mocked him there only. See..he was just kidding. He came so close and didnt do anything. Wait a minute, did I actually say he should have done something. No no no..Ishita u'll go crazy. He has just made fun of u. Nd u fool with ur actions hav just given him another chance of laughing at you. She cursed herself. But wy did he say it will become difficult to control. Did he actually mean those words. Seeing me in such a state makes him uncontrollable..rlly? Then why doesnt he tell me straightly..wen I asked him if he loved me, he clearly stated he can never ever love me. He is not mad enough to find love in me. And now his own words, what were they meant to be if not this. She was hell cnfused and annoyed. Leave it Ishita, u can never understand this man. Tedha Kumar. She cursed him And left for her clinic.

Her day at clinic was a bsy one. Though she had lot of appointments, but the moment she was free, she found his words ringing in her head. This Ravan Kumar has made her life very difficult. What the hell is wrong with this man. Agr pyar hai to sidha sidha bolde na. Wo bhi khush me bhi khush. Har cheez ko ghuma firake krne ki aadat hai.

She completed her work and rushed for home. She made punjabi spcl aloo gobi for him and after making everyone eat, waited for him.

Av Ravan Kumar ko pta nhi Aloo gobhi psnd ayegi ya nhi. Aane do dekhte hain.



So how u find it. Pls leave ur precious comments.

I hav planned 3 parts for this. Next will be Raman's thoughts. And 3rd their conversation. Hope u like it. Will try to update next part soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please PM Me when you update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aYASHIKA

Interesting. ..
Loved it..
Continue soon



thnks Ayashika...will try asap
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starting is good..pm me if possible
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Originally posted by: Arshi-

starting is good..pm me if possible



thnks arshi..will pm u for sure..
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Very nice start👍🏼..Aaah I wish the Ishra scene was longer. pls update soon😊 and PM pls😊
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Originally posted by: Asha122

Nice start... Continue soon...



thnks asha..will continue soon
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will continue dear asap
thnks 4 likingg
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Please do continue..
can u give the link for your writing?

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