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Swathi

@swathibalan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

As usual superb Aani. The last line deserves special👏

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Beautiful, I love the words you used to describe their relationship.

Kudos to you. :)

She bent and beat him into a new shape. She set him in a fresh mold with her smiles and laughter, by her care and concern, by her unending ability to give and her love for his daughter and family. Her warmth acted as the fire in the furnace that burnt away the negativity plaguing his life and mind. The light of her aura and smiles brightened up his dull, dark world.

I loved these lines, so beautifully worded.

Wonderful.

-N

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

as usual wonderful one shot.👏

I love these line, itsthe best sum up of ishita effect in raman's life

Her warmth acted as the fire in the furnace that burnt away the negativity plaguing his life and mind. The light of her aura and smiles brightened up his dull, dark world.

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

That was a sweet OS. I liked how you tied in the whole Shagun fiasco to how Ishita never considered the bed to be hers and Raman's as he always claimed it as his. It was good that Raman finally realised that and made sure that from now on Ishita also sleeps on the bed. And true to RKB style, he did it in a way where he did not have to directly ask Ishita to do so. I really liked this OS.

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appuss

@appuss

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

last line was a masterstroke👏👏👏

loved the Os😳😃

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Res...

edited :-

m sooo sorry Aani reading it fr soo late 😳
few days went really bad track vise nd then time change news. I was all upset abt it.

khair late hi sahi finally I read it.
What a sweet OS Aani.. it has all in it. yhe trio we love like anything. Ruhi's cuteness, Raman's naughtiness nd Ishita's shyness.
enjoyed reading it.
specially the part where he was thinking abt 2 women in his life. nd how Ishita has gud heart. nd then he realised she never claimed her right on bed. she dnt think it as her. beautifully written Aani.
loved the end where Raman wished fr day when they both will loose. we fans too waiting fr that rain 😳

beautiful OS Aani.. Loved it ...

Edited by FieryLioness - 10 years ago