Ishra ff:Breath of Fresh Air: last part(chapter 16, page72)

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Akshatha

@Akshatha19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

wow...exceptional superb...

OMG!!! speechless⭐️...

Ishita really her pain of losing ruhi and love of her life, beautifully shown..

ishita self thinking about love, breaking marriage...

ruhi saying nervousness about her papa, ishita seeing so cute...

sisters convo was simple and sweet...

ruhi dressing like mini bride so nice...

When ishita came to keep the packet, the feelings poured out was just awesomely written...

Ishita lines in mandap was fab esp confession, raman's superb plan just worked out perfectly ... each and every line by ishita and raman smirk😉 just superb...

Romance of ishra hayeee just loved it❤️❤️...

thank u so much for writing so an beautiful and amazing story👏👏 ...

It was just magnificent and excellent story👍🏼...

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

this was awesome ending
loved it

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usaonly

@usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Wow wonderful ending and what a twist Bala is a bride ha ha .🤣Finally Raman mission is complete. Thank you for lovely story. Hope you will write some more in future.👏👏👏

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cutie782

@cutie782

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

Wow nyc ending buddy will definitely miss ur writing but do continue writing such beautiful stories! !!

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Anuhyaa

@Anuhyaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

This is so beautifully written...I enjoyed each and every chapter of this...
Please continue writing...
Your stories always hit the right chords...

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Jiyaa

@jiyaa02

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

Graceful end. Loved it

Naughty raman & his plan is just awesome👏👏👏

Bala in bridal dress omg🤣🤣

Lovely ff dear. Do write more 😃

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kuls

@theshushreader

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#477

awesome..

finally she acceoted she loves him n made such a big step..

omg bala was in the bridal dress..

hahaha..

n she finally became ruhi's ishima as well as raman's ishu..

nice update..

i am sure i ll be missing its updates

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VENBA

@VENBA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#478

Prefect ending yaar..

Just loved it..

Ishraru scene at the end was aweome..

The way ruhi called her ishima was fabulous..

Brilliant writing...👏👏

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maya252

@maya252

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana
Wow...just wow
well...dont you think zuch a beautiful story deserves a wonderful epilogue too...am waiting for itt
take your time but do write
oh..i always knew it was ishita...the bride
but ba jiju??
Lol..i read wife and kid line thrice wondering if i am reading wrong then next line confirmed mg doubt
superb ending
i kiss love kiss you kiss.. awww
thnks for this wonderful story yrrd
waiting for another one from your side

I'll definitely think about it, but as of now haven't planned any epilogue 😊
thank you 😳

Edited by dochdoe - 10 years ago