IshRa: A full Proof Plan - ' The Confession' updtd pg 44 - Page 34

Bravo bud...this was an awesome ss...I loved reading it...and I'm very happy with how things turned out for Ishita and Raman. These two deserve to be happy, but not at the expense of losing who they really are, and I think you did a really good job of keeping them true to themselves and all their nok-jhoks, but allowing them love.

Awesomeness!

Hey first of all...thnx so much for updating the last part. Though we all waited too long.
Now coming to the feedback the confession part was lil disappointing. They way you continued till jealousy burn was ultimately written and conceptualized but to give it an end was lil abrupt for me.
However I appreciate your work and thnx for giving us such wonderful threads to read.
My disappointment with the last part is strictly my POV n that is just because I always want the ISHRA confession has to be very intense n emotional.
Thnx once again 👏

Originally posted by: twerping

Sighhh! I feel so sated..like one feels after eating a really yummy piece of chocolate cake...

This was so good! Where do I even start!?!

The fact that you used Ishu's troublesome post-anaesthesia after-effects like this or that Raman would have used the Ruhi ke liye excuse to have her in his arms, or that he'd tease her about her deluded notions of her dress size or that Ishu would use the Ruhi excuse to run her fingers through her Raavan Kumar's hair or the fact that romance doesn't make our Raavan Kumar mushy but brings out the warmth in him despite his brusqueness...I am in heaven now. Loving your version of the romance of Ishu and her 'patli kumar bhalla'!

Originally posted by: ABBY92

I liked how in the beginning Ishita had started her own plans to get Raman to talk to her again. And the whole surgery scene was beautiful with the way Raman cared for Ishita. I loved how even though Ishita confessed her feelings for Raman under the influence of anesthesia, Raman did not bring it up immediately after the surgery and in fact waited to confess his feelings as well in the end. I really liked this SS.

Originally posted by: vani_prem

simply wonderful, i hope you keep writing as this was such an easy read. good length too...not too short, not too long. do PM me if you write another FF/OS/ TS etc.

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Thanks dear. I always look forward to your comments which always bring a smile on my face n leave me blushing too😳

It was a pleasure writing this n a pleasure meeting u here on the forum.

Stay in touch. N do let me know how I should call u.

This is the most cutest confession ever! Kash aisa kuch YHM mein bhi hota Beautifully written OS, it was simply magical

Hi!

Originally posted by: twerping

I'll most definitely turn up again as soon as you write your next story!! As I said before, I'm your fan, OSJ! And really your writing is spectacular!

I buddied you so that we can stay in touch! Hope your creative mind is already working on the next fic and I am guessing today's precap might have set your imagination on FIRE! 😉

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

This was one of the liveliest stories I have read. It was emotional but comical at the same time. Perfect balance that made reading it a true pleasure! Well done! Thank you for a great story! 👏