Ishra SS - Chapter 5 (Page 7) (Sept.3)

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Hi everyone, I started a new SS on Ishra. This is the first time I have written Hindi dialogues and Hindi isn't my first language, I apologize for any mistakes. Hope you guys like it and all feedback is appreciated. I also don't have a name for this SS, so any suggestions for a title would be appreciated.

Part 1- Below

Part 2 - Below

Part 3- Page 2

Part 4-Page 5

Part 5- Page 7

Part 1

There were only 2 more days left until Ishita and Raman's first wedding anniversary, and by now Ishita had realized their love for Raman, but hesitant to confess. Finally Ishita had decided she needed to confess to Raman and she chose the occasion of their anniversary to the needed. Ishita planned to take Raman out for dinner and tell him all her feelings. Ishita wanted to look her best so she took Mihika and Vandita to the mall with her to pick out a new dress. The three sisters spent hours at the mall, but Ishita couldn't find the perfect dress.

Mihika: "Akka humne toh pura mall ghoom leya, par aap ko abhi bhi koi achi dress nahi mili?"

Ishita: "Nahi Mihika, mujhe voh perfect dress nahi mil rahi."

Mihika: "Hmmm... Jiju ko impress karne ke liye itni kosish"

Ishita: "Mihika tum bhi na. Anyways hum sab shops dekh chuke hai, toh ab kaha dhoodo ek achi dress?

Vandita: "Voh dekho, humne voh ek shop chodi hai baki sab dekh chuke hai."

Ishita: "Chalo phir wahan chalte hain."

The three sisters went to the shop and started looking around. They had been looking for a few minutes when Ishita heard a familiar voice. She turned around and saw Raman. She wondered what he was doing in a ladies shop at this time. Then she saw him talking to someone, but she couldn't see who it was since the person were standing behind of a clothing rack.

Raman: "Yeh dehko na, yeh perfect hai. I think we should buy this one." Ishita saw he was holding up a dress.

Now Ishita was anxious to know who Raman was talking to. She was closer to the person, but made sure she wouldn't be spotted by them. Ishita couldn't believe what she saw.

Raman was with a girl. The girl was a young and beautiful girl. Ishita didn't like her one bit. The girl was skinny and she was wearing a skimpy clothes. She wondered why Raman was shopping with her. She came closer and listened to their conversation.

Girl: "Oh my god Raman, yeh dress? Yeh kuch I don't know zyada simple nahi lagti tumhe? Dekho na humhe koi designer dress leni chahiye. "

Raman: "Bilkul nahi, mujhe lagta hai ki yehi perfect hai. Mujhe yeh simple wala acha lagta hai."

Girl: Acha theek hai yehi lelo. Aur waise bhi tumhari special night toh tumhari marzi." She lightly punched Raman on the arm and Raman blushed.

Raman: "Shut up yaar, itne log hai yaha aur tum... Aur vaise bhi yeh dress dinner ki liye hai."

Jhanvi: "Acha ab sharam aa rehi hai. Aur haan tum yeh dress lelo lekin main sach mein room mein extra sexy nighties and garments rakhne wali hoon. Dinner pe toh baat katam nahi hogi right?"

Raman: ""Chee yaar thodi se toh sharam karo. Pehli dekh toh lo ke tum kahan ho aur kiske saath ho."

Jhanvi: "Acha pehli khud bulate ho aur phir kehte ho ke aise baate mat karo."

Raman: "Be quiet and let's go."

Ishita couldn't believe was had just heard. Raman's special night, sexy dresses, some Jhanvi girl. What was going on? Was Raman and this girl-? No way Raman wasn't like that. He wouldn't cheat on her, but then again what if she was just Ruhi's mom for him. Ishita needed to find out what was going on. She couldn't just let Raman walk around with that girl. She found Mihika and Vandita.

Ishita: "Mihika, chalo. Mujhe kuch nahi lehna hai."

Mihika: "Kyun Akka, abhi toh aap-"

Ishita: "Mihika mujhe kuch zaroori kam hai, aap log ghar jaao, main baad mein aati hoon."

Vandita: "Ishu sab theek toh hi na?"

Ishita: "Haan Akka, mujhe clinic jaana hai toh, I will see you guys later."

Ishita ran outside the mall to see Raman and Jhanvi sit in his car. Ishita quickly started her car and followed them...


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Part 2

Ishita followed Raman's car to his office. She stopped her car before entering his office parking since she didn't want to be spotted.

Ishita: "Acha toh yeh ladki Raman ke office mein kaam karti hogi. Par usse ke saath shopping kyun? Mujhe paata karna hoga."

Ishita parked her car in Raman's office parking and went in the building. There she spotted Romi.

Romi: "Arre Bhabhi aap yaha? Bhai se milne aaye hain?"

Ishita: "Haan voh actually kuch important kaam tha."

Romi: "Bhai toh abhi apne cabin mein gaaye hain. Aap unse miliye mujhe kuch kaam hai."

Ishita walked took Raman's cabin and took a deep breath before knocking on the door. She hoped to find just Raman in the cabin. Raman and no one else.

A voice came from inside, but it wasn't Raman. It was that girl, Jhanvi.

Jhanvi: "Come in."

Ishita went in and looked around for Raman while giving a sarcastic smile to the girl.

Jhanvi: "Jee, kya aap Ishitaji hain?"

Ishita: "Haan hoon lekin tumhe kaise pata?"

Jhanvi: "Raman ne baata tha aap ke baare mein.By the way I'm Jhanvi."

Ishita: "Tum Raman ko Raman bulati ho?

Jhanvi: "Raman ko Raman nahi toh kya Ravan bologi?"

Ishita: (Self-talk): "Acha isse yeh sab bhi bata diya Raman ne."

Ishita: "Yeh kaise baat hui? Apne boss ko respect deni chahiye and aur tum ho ke unko naam se pukarti ho."

Jhanvi burst out laughing while Ishita was shocked.

"Yeh sab kya ho raha hai?" Raman called from the back.

Ishita: "Arre Raman aap ageye?"

Jhanvi (while laughing): "Raman tumhari biwi ko lagta hai ke tum mere boss ho aur main tumhari employee."

Raman: "Arre iss mein hasne wali baat kya hai? Misunderstanding clear karne ke baje tum has rehe ho.Tum bhi na. (Turning towards Ishita.)Ishita actually kya hain na, Jhanvi mere employee nahin balki mere bahut achi dost hain. "

Ishita: "Oh okay I am sorry mujhe pata nahin tha. Aap ne kabhi bata nahi tha."

Raman: "Actually aaj hum dono kafi time baad milye tho isiliye."

Ishita (ST): "Shaayad isse liye shopping ke liye le gaya aur voh bhi special night ke liye."

Ishita: "Vaise Jhanvi aap shaadi shuda ho?"

Ishita mentally slapped herself for asking her this.

Jhanvi and Raman looked at Ishita with a surprised and confused look.

Jhanvi: "Haan par aap yeh sab kyun pooch rehi hai?"

Ishita: "Nahin voh maine toh aise hi poocha tha."

Raman: "Dekha Jhanvi meri kismat. Aisi pagal ke saath shaadi hui hai meri."

Jhanvi: "Raman tum na kuch zyaada bakwas nahi karne lage ho?"

Raman gave her his typical sarcastic smile and the two of them burst out laughing while Ishita was fuming with anger. Raman saw her anger and wondered what she was so mad.

Raman: "Ishita vaise tum yaha iss waqt kaise? Sab theek toh hai? I mean ghar pe aur Ruhi?"

Ishita: "Haan sab theek hai, actually voh main..."

Ishita looked at Jhanvi and Jhanvi understood.

Jhanvi: "Um Raman I should go now. I will see you later."

Raman closed the door after she left.

Raman: "Ab bolo kya hua?"

Ishita (ST): "Aise seeda bolo ke aap ko mall mein dekha to gussa hojaye. Kaise pucho? Lekin raha bhi nahi jaa raha mujhse."

Raman: "Arre tumse pooch raha hoon. Kya hua?"

Ishita: "Kuch nahi."

Raman: "Toh phir yaha aise hi aaye ho?

Ishita took a deep breath and prayed to God that Raman wouldn't explode after hearing her.

Ishita: "Actually I am going to be honest, main aaj mall jaaye thi aur waha maine ek aadmi ko dekha-"

Raman: "Toh kya malls sirf tum aurto ke liye bane hain. Aadmi tha toh kya hua? Bechara paas gaya hoga girlfriend ya biwi ke chakkar mein."

Ishita: "Puri baat toh sun lo. Who aadmi aap jaise tha. Toh mujhe laga ke shayd aap ho."

Raman immediately turned away his face away from Ishita.

Raman: "Arre tum isliye yaha aaye ho? Main mall mein kyun jaaoga? Aur voh bhi iss waqt. Office hours mein? Tum na sach mein pagal ho. Aise kuch be bakwas kar rehi ho."

Ishita knew Raman was lying since she had clearly since his face in the shop, but why was he lying to her. Raman also noticed Ishita wasn't believing him, so he changed the topic.

Raman: "Vaise sochne wali baat hai. Tum jahan hoti ho, tumhe main dekhiye dehta hoon. Aisa kyun?"

Ishita: "Kya bakwaas kar rahe ho? Bina vaja shuru ho jate ho."

Realizing Ishita was visibly upset and wasn't believing his lie, he tried to make her forget the mall incident.

Raman: "Acha main kya soch raha tha, ke ab lunch time ho raha hai, to kyun na hum dono kahin restaurant mein chale?"

Ishita: "Kyun ab aapke office hour's nahin hain?"

Raman: "Office hour's hain toh kya, mujhe bhook lagi hai. Anyways main jaa raha hoon tumhe aana hai toh aao varna tumhari marzi."

Ishita was worried as to why Raman was lying to her, but she didn't want him to be alone since he might ask Jhanvi to have lunch with him. There was no way she was letting that girl near Raman.

Ishita: "Acha theek hai chalo."

Ishita went with Raman, the whole time she was thinking about Raman and that girl. After lunch she went home and thought about what to do. She wanted to ask someone for advice, but who?

She didn't want to share this with her mom or her sisters, so who should she talk to?

She finally decided talk to Raman again in the evening...

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Edited by smilesforever98 - 11 years ago
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very nice start
i think both have fall in love with each other deeply and planninng their way to confess it on their anniversary evening.
Jealous ishita LOLZ
continue soon
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Really interesting I think Raman has got the dress for Ishita and wants to surprise her love this help I mode of Ishita do continue soon
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nice start... really interesting... continue soon...
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Part 3

It was almost 10pm and Raman wasn't home yet. Ishita was laid on the couch with her eyes shut. She was mentally practicing confronting Raman when he came home when she heard the front door shut. She got up and peered over their room's door and heard him talking on the phone. She couldn't hear much, but she did hear Jhanvi's name. She wanted to go up to him and just throw his phone away, but decided to stay back and listen to their conversation. She convinced herself that eavesdropping was okay in this situation. She came out of her thoughts as she saw Raman coming towards their room. She quickly ran back to the couch and pretended to be asleep. She carefully opened one eyes and saw Raman didn't noticed her.

Raman (on phone):"Jhanvi, seriously I never thought I would feel this way."

Raman: "Anyways jo tum pehle puch rehi thi uska jawab hai... (He blushed and smiled while looking down) umm I love you."

Raman: "Nahin umm nahin sirf I love you."

Raman: "Yaar kya batun tumhe maine actually yeh shaadi Ruhi ke liye ki thi. "

Ishita couldn't believe what she had heard. Raman loved Jhanvi. She turned her face away from Raman, so he wouldn't see the tears flowing from her eyes. She covered her mouth with the blanket, so Raman wouldn't hear her sobs. Finally when she heard the room door shut. She carefully looked over to see if he was still there; he wasn't. She sat up and cried her heart out. All this time Ishita hoped that Raman would love her, but he loved someone else. And she, she was just the wife he never wanted. She couldn't believe it.

Here she was wanting to spend each moment of her life with Raman, wanting to love him and be loved back, but he was busy with other girls.

Ishita (ST) : "Kyun? Mere saath yeh sab kyun hota hai. Mere kya kasoor tha ke mujhe yeh sab dekhna pad raha hai. Shayad mere galti hai. Main hamare rishta ko agaye badna chahti thi. Mujhe samajna chahiye tha ki voh mujhse kabhi pyar nahin karenge. Kash maine Ruhi ke alava kisse aur se pyar karne ki galti phirse nahin ki hoti."

Ishita got up, wept her tears and slowly opened the room door and figured out Raman was in the bathroom. She quietly went to Ruhi's room to sleep with her daughter. After all she was in this house just as Ruhi's mom.

Ishita(ST): "Main sirf Ruhi ki maa hoon aur kuch nahin. Mujhe ab apni limit cross nahin karni chahiye. Toh abse Raman ko unki privacy vapas milgaye. "

Ishita went and lay down next Ruhi. She tried hard to go sleep, but every time she would close her eyes, she would hear Raman's words and see that girl and Raman.

A few minutes later Raman came back to his room and saw Ishita missing from the couch. He went into the living room to look for her, but didn't see her there either. He finally looked in Ruhi's room and saw Ishita laying down on Ruhi's bed.

Raman (ST): "Ishita toh room mein thi toh ab Ruhi ke room mein kyun? Iss ka bhi kuch pata nahi chalta."

He walked to the bed. There he placed a light kiss on Ruhi's forehead and then walked around to Ishita's side. He noticed a tear at the corner of her eyes. He leaned over and brought his face just inches away from Ishita's face. Ishita could feel his warm breath on her face. Her heart was beating as fast as the speed of light. Raman slowly wiped off her tear with his thumb. He slowly got back up and figured Ishita probably wanted to sleep with Ruhi so he wouldn't see her cry.

That night both Raman and Ishita couldn't sleep. Raman couldn't sleep thinking about why Ishita was crying where on the other hand, Ishita couldn't sleep thinking about Raman cheating on her.

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Edited by smilesforever98 - 11 years ago
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Really good can't wait for them to confess
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Amazing. I like the end part.
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Wow v.v. Nice pls pm me if continue i really like it
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i really like the writing style and where this story is going but i have one small critic : it's a bit too predictable (i'm not trying to be mean, it's just the feedback i can give you). I love reading it none the less.

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