ishra-os-a cute little story!!part-2!!updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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After a hectic day raman and ishita return home ,,have dinner and go to their bedroom..
Raman:kya hua khana kam khaya kya moti muh kyun utra hua hai??
Ishita:kuch bhi mein kya itna khati hun??pura din kaam karti hun isliye bahot thak gayi hun!!
Raman:ha to so jao and aaj couch pe mat sona bed pe so jao ache se...nai to kal kaale dhabo ke saath uthogi and clinic pe sab patients darr jayenge!!😉
Ishita:uff ye tauntkumar ise pehle aur taunt mare me chup chap so jati hun!!and she says good nite!!
Raman:ye baju me soyegi khaak goodnight hogi!!And raman switches off light and they sleep..


After a while ishita starts shouting she is hell lot in pain..
Raman gets panicky and says,,Ishita kya hua,he is terrified!!
Ishita:Mujhe pain ho raha hai stomach me sahan nai ho raha raman please kuch karo..meri gynecologist ko phone lagao..
She keeps shouting in pain..raman is terrified
Raman:gynec phone nai utha rahi..ek min and then he lifts ishits in his arms and carries her and drives to the hospital..
Raman:doctor please dekhiye ishu ko pet me dard ho raha hai and almost cries..
After sometime doc comes to meet raman.
Doc:ab vo thik hai dont worry..ishita ne bataya mujhe ke usko bachpan me tb hua tha..actually unka uterus weak hai isliye ye pains kabhi kabhar aa jate hai..so me tablets likh deti hun vo lele jab bhi aisa pain aaye..by the way i am glad aapka support dekhke ishita maa nai ban sakti and india me males koste hai aisi auruto ko but i am amazed aap kitna dhyan rakhte ho i must say ishita is a lucky girl..
Raman:speechless nods and says thank u doctor..

Raman almost in tears mene us din ishita ko kitna hurt kar diya jab mene shagun ko bola ab vo khushi dubara nai milegi aisa bol ke..shitt mera vo matlab nai tha but ishita ko kaisa laga hoga kaise kar diya mene ye😭

Raman goes to ishita.
Raman:ishu kaisa lag raha hai tum thik ho na?Me darr gaya tha!!!
Ishita:han thik hun..ravankumar bhi darta hai i thought darata hai..and smiles to make the mood light.
Raman:majak mat karo..ishita sorry and is almost in tears
Ishita:kya hua raman sorry kyun bol rahe ho aap?
Raman:bahot hurt kiya na tumko us din jab shagun se adi ki baat kar raha tha
Ishita:kya raman kuch hurt vurt nai kiya
Raman:ishu tum bahot achi ho,bahot pyaari ho and tum kabhi bura nai sochti kisika..pls i am sorry tumhe hurt kiya..but i promise me hamesha tumhare saath hun kuch bhi ho mein hun tumhare liye!!
Ishita:wah ravankumar ache dialog bol rahe ho writer change kar diya,,kya baat hai pyaari lag rahi hun,, achi lag rahi hun,, ishu bol rahe ho..jhansi ki rani me aaj aapko mother teresa dikh rahi hai,,kahin aapko pyaar to nai ho gaya and grins!!😳

Raman:bakwaas band karo aur dava khao..
Ishita:aaye haye kya baat hai
Raman:pehle khud writer rakho kanjoos nake dusro ke dialogs churao
Ishita:kya baat hai pain me mein thi n dard aapko ho raha tha ye to pyaar me hi hota hai
Raman:looks at her controls his smile and said itna khati nai to pet me dard nai hota isliye bolta hun thusna band karo
Ishita:ho mein kya itna khati hun!!sadu ravankumar and she turns
Raman goes and kisses her forehead and says thik raho hamesha ishita ramankumar bhalla!!❤️ And they get lost in each others eyes!

Hey guys just a thought..hope u guys like it..
Part-2

Lost in eachothers eyes suddenly raman gets distracted by his phones ring and both come back to reality!!

Raman:mummy ka phone hai,,he picks and tells her everything..Ha hum aa rahe hai aap tension mat lo aur ha amma ko mat batana abhi thik hui hai tension me aa jayegi!!

Both reach home,,
Toshiji:oye putar kitni kamzor ho gai ja putar aaram kar..me cheti tere waaste juice leke aati hun!!
Raman starts laughing kamzor!!😛
Ishita punches him and goes to her room..

Ishita starts to dress up to go clinic..raman sees this and says..
Raman:oye madam kahan jane ki taiyari kahin lecture dene ja rahi ho kya!!
Ishita:clinic se phone tha emergency hai
Raman:pagal aurat aaram karo..kahin nai ja rahi tum padi raho ghar pe.
Ishita:raman jana padega

Just then ruhi enters,,says kya hua??
Raman:deko na ruhi tumhari ishima meri koi baat nai sunti..dekho kitni patli ho gai hai😆bolo na unko aaj rest kare abhi hospital se aayi na!!
Ruhi:ishima papa sahi keh rahe hai..dekho vo aap ki kitni care karte hai..please unki baat mano
Ishita:ok ruhi me ghar pe rahungi..and looks at raman angrily ,,Raman smiles and winks at ruhi..ruhi goes to school..

Ishita:sab baat me ruhi ko bichme kyun late ho??
Raman:leh tum mere dialogs chura sakti ho toh mein tumhari trick nahi chura sakta!!madam aap ki hi training hai!!ja raha hun office..
Ishita smiles!!.

At office,,
Raman:mihir ye tondon ko nai project ke detail mail kar dena..ye tere pair me kya hua??
Mihir:han bhai,,vo bhai aaj jogging karne gaya tha to sprain ho gaya hai..
Raman:andha hai ke aankhen ghar rakhke jogging karne gaya tha!!!
Mihir:kya bhai,,mere jogging karne ka passion toh aapko pata hi hai..waise bhi health is wealth..
Raman:tere bhabhi ke gun tere me dikh rahe hai..lecture ka shounk tujhe bhi hone laga hai..dafa ho aur kaam kar!!

Suddenly raman gets into deep thinking and makes a call..
At home,,
In the evening ishita receives some parcel when she opens she gets shocked its from raman..
When raman comes back home,,in their room
Raman:kaisa laga gift?
Ishita:ayo raman..iska me kya karungi aisi cheeze me nahi pehanti!!
Raman:pagal aurat mene party ke kapde gift kiye hai tumko..befkoof kahin ki..jaahil ise track suit and sports shoes kehte hai and ise subahe jogging ke time pehante hai..kisne degree de di tumko dentist ki..ullu..aur kalse hum dono jogging shuru karenge..
Ishit:kya jogging raman.ruhi ka school,ghar ke kaam,clinic nahi possible hai..aap samjo
Raman:bakwass band karo jitna kaha utna karo..nai to hospital me padi rahogi..moti
And waise bhi health is wealth..
Ishita worried looks at raman and raman smiles😛😃




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Dhwaniiam thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I loved it ...
Please do continue ... I want to see Raman taking care if Ishi ...
Please do continue . And PM me
ravankumar thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thnx a lot dear glad u liked it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awww very cute...
Loved it...
Specially the way raman was scared n realized what he did..
So sweet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww cute OS.
Loved it.
I wont be surprised if we get to see something similar to this in show.
Bcoz alwaysCvs maintain equality in this two character so ystrdy raman questioned Ishu whthr She had fallen for him in near future I m damn sure we will get to see same question asked to Raman. i m waiting for it.
Thanks for this sweet OS
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Posted: 11 years ago
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so cute :) next part continue pls. pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey nice yaar...part 2 is amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved it .. Baby ...
Please do continue ..
Thx for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Raman is really impossible.I mean khud mihir ko daant diya aur baad me ja k khud usi ka dailogue use karliya.He is true ravan kumar.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I liked the bit where Ishita turned the tables on Raman and asked "kachina aapko Mujhe Pyaar toh nahi ho Gaya?"

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