ISHRA snippets: Ishq ki Saazishein-Pg 75 Completed

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#301

he pushed her?! poor ishita
ah- the embarrassment that awaits them 😆
pls continue soon

thanks for the pm 😊

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neeraja

@life93

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#302

hi vidya di🤗

ishu 😉 made him jealous 😛 n that shrava he was adding fuel in fire😆😆😆

and well haww yeh raman kumar bhala kabhi nahi sudherega😛

he pushed her on the bed😉😉 and the bed broke🤣

now how will they answer the whole family ! dirty minds are on mode🤪

moti madrasan🤣

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Debolina

@debomaaneet

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#303

Colour green suits this karva kumar!😉
Loved it 😃 was waiting for it eagerly.

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Dakshayini

@dhaakshu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#304

Bed toot gayi?!

Oh Ishu, and poor Raman.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#305

🤣 Raman and his dialogues!!

Loved it vidya⭐️

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exploringmyself

@exploringmyself

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#306

loved it!! plz upd8 soon :)

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columbia

@columbia

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#307

I have mixed feelings about this one. Especially the last part I don't like situations where men manhandle women and women are portrayed to say no but they mean yes. I am not a big fan, in fact I would have liked ishita to be ready for the 'physical onslaught' something like kya kar logei Mai darti nahi type of dialogue otherwise you are a really good writer!

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swathin

@swathin

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#308

Awesome update
Loved the insecurity n jealously of Raman
N last part was superb

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#309

Originally posted by: columbia
I have mixed feelings about this one. Especially the last part I don't like situations where men manhandle women and women are portrayed to say no but they mean yes. I am not a big fan, in fact I would have liked ishita to be ready for the 'physical onslaught' something like kya kar logei Mai darti nahi type of dialogue otherwise you are a really good writer!

yeah me too...I wrote it just to show his anger and jealousy of having seen her close to another guy...he wouldnt have done anything even if the bed didnt break...I wasnt planning to make her weak before him anyways. My intention was never to show Raman as a MCP who would force himself on her. this was just a crazy comical story...

thanks!

Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago