OS : Preparations, Confessions and Sacrifices

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Hi All,

This is my first writing in the public forum. I am feeling very happy and proud that I am writing about Raman and Ishita(lovely Divans). Thanks to Divan and YHM team for this and this one is dedicated to all the IF members.

PART 1: PREPARATIONS

After Romi's fiasco related to MMS Scandal, Exam paper leak scandal and Amma ' s accident, the happiness and celebrations is back in both Bhalla's and Iyer's family . The reasons behind this happiness are due to the three reasons -

1. The wedding dates for Mihir-Mihika, Pathak - Trisha is being fixed (Yes it is just two week s left for the wedding).

2. Both Iyer's and Bhalla's family would have forgiven Romi for his misdeeds and Romi has promised his family that he will study well and get a good job and be a good son like Raman for the family.

3. After the college committee realizes its mistake about the decision made against Bala and Vandita, they apologize their mistakes and both Bala and Vandita get back their positions in College.

Both Tandon's family and mihika's family have flown from respective places to Delhi for the wedding and Raman will be staying in his home and Ishita will be staying in her mayka to help with the wedding preparations.

[Raman in his room: He would be lost in Ishita's thoughts. He would be thinking how Ishita made Romi realize his mistakes and turned him as a good boy. Also, how she saved Romi's career (After knowing the truth about the paper leak scandal, the college committee would have decided to rusticate Romi and his friends and they had planned to handover them to police. But, Ishita was the one who fought with the college committee and made them to give a second chance to Romi and his friends) and his family praising Ishita for this].

Raman would be so much lost in his thoughts until Ruhi comes and pinches her papa on his cheeks, he feels some pain and comes back to reality [Mihir, Romi and Mr Tandon would have come to Raman's room to show the sherwani's that they had planned to wear for the reception and they would be shouting to the core of their voices but there is no reaction from Raman's side. Just then, Ruhi comes from her pati's house to take her Ishima's saree which she had bought it for the wedding. Seeing everyone shouting at her papa and her papa not reacting to it, she asks her Romi chachu to lift her and she pinches her papa].

All three of them start their teasing session with Raman saying he misses Ishita Bhabhi the most( it is not been 24 hours of separation and you are missing bhabhi so much).Though caught red handed, Raman still in his own RKB style avoids it and start asking the reason why they have come to his room. But all three of them were not in a mood to reply to Raman and they continued the teasing session.

[Mr. Tandon] - Oh really Raman, you dont miss Ishita bhabhi at all is it? Then yesterday in the shopping mall, who was that who looked totally lost in his Wife's beauty when she wore a beautiful blue-green kancheevaram saree for the trial purpose which she had bought it for the wedding.

[Mihir and Romi together] - who was that person totally lost in his wife's beauty when his wife was trying a matching diamond set for the wedding reception .

Raman realizing that he is totally caught with these three mischievous musketeers , he feels very much embarrassed and at the same time , Mr Bhalla in the hall calls Raman. Raman thanks lord and his papa for making him escape from these guys.

In Ishita's house,

[Ishita in her room]: Ishita's condition is not so different. Even she will be thinking how Raman admitted her Amma in the hospital at the right time, paying the bill amount,supporting us,appointing a full-time nurse throughout the series until Amma' s recovery . Raman's anger for Romi when he came to know about the MMS scandal and how he did not care to handover Romi to police and punish him even when Romi is his own brother and her family praising Raman for all the help he made to the family etc. She comes back to reality only when everyone in the hall calling Ishu for asking some punjhabi rituals that has to be followed during the wedding.

P.S : Please let me know your comments on this. If you people like this , I will continue else will drop it out.


Thanks in advance for your comments,

Swathi

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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful OS
Loved it
So love is in the air
Humm both raman and Ishu missing each other ❤️
please continue soon
Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful ... I loved it ..
Please do PM me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its sooo sweeet!!!!😊
i toh loved it...plz continue..👍🏼

shadi track..ummm!! gonna be delicious!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow its amazing looks lke a big fat wedding plz update 2nd part soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I liked the concept but why u had written it using "wud be"everywhere.No dailogues at all.I didn't felt any connection with the work.I m inquisitive about it.so,please clear it.my chotu sa request.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice start. I like how Raman and Ishita are lost in each other's thoughts and how everyone is teasing Raman about missing Ishita. Would love to have more dialogues in the next update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: lourel24

I liked the concept but why u had written it using "wud be"everywhere.No dailogues at all.I didn't felt any connection with the work.I m inquisitive about it.so,please clear it.my chotu sa request.


Thanks for your comments dear. Actually, I had used "would be" for Raman's thoughts in his room because i was trying to say in point of Mihir,Tandon and Romi's point of view. When they enter Raman's room to talk to him,Raman was lost in his thoughts.

Now, after reading it again, even i felt I should have given more clearance to that point. Surely, I will improve it.

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