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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smilydear

Thanks for PM ...

Loved this part as well ... I always wants to see Raman jealousy, as he has a lot of control on his emotions, I really want him to be in character but still visible for everyone that he is jealousy, if not everyone but definitely to Ishita, from your part3 it was visible that he was looking for attention from Ishita, will definetly look for more child like attention seeking scenes as you are a good writer.
I never wanted Subbu to comeback for jealousy track . He should come only to accept his mistake for letting her down at the moment when she needs him the most.

thanks a lot dear.. i m really very glad to receive your comment... thanks a lot for your appreciation...😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dhaakshu

Awesome update!

Ruhi's reply😆😆
I loved the scene where Raman was biting the bone and Raman's replies in their room.😆
Best Dialogue : Raman (in his mind):Yeh to aise behave kar rahe hai jaise pata nahi mun main anaconda hi dekh liya ho... pata nahi yeh do mahan doctors milkar mere daton ka kya haal kar denge hey bhagwaan mere daton ki raksh karna!!!...😲
Oh god! 🤣🤣🤣
I couldn't control my laughter at all, ANACONDA!!!🤣
But really, what Ishu said to Sagar about Raman was so sweet.🥱🥱
Ishu ka birthday, I hope kuch special ho jaye.⭐️
This was my favorite part of this SS.😃

thanks dhaakshu... i m happy u liked this update so much... i will surely update next part soon...😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg on each update...u stole my heart dear...😃
lovely update...
Waitng fr d nxt update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Silsha

Omg on each update...u stole my heart dear...😃
lovely update...
Waitng fr d nxt update 😳

thank you silsha...
i m very happy to know this...
i will update next part soon...😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
reallyy amazinggg!! plss continuee... eager to read moree.. plss PM me.. thnkuu
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: avni_19

reallyy amazinggg!! plss continuee... eager to read moree.. plss PM me.. thnkuu

sure dear...👍🏼
thanks for your appreciation...😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Two days later... Its 11:55 in the night... In sagar's bedroom...

Sagar: Bas paanch min aur.. aur phir ishu ka birthday... I m so excited. Itne saal yeh din akela celebrate karta ta, par iss saal yeh din ishu ke saath celebrate karunga... (looking at his watch) bas 2 min. aur...

Its 12... sagar moves to ishu's room and knocks the bedroom door delicately. Ishu wakes up, she was looking very pretty with her air flowing down her shoulder, sleep in her eyes... and she opens the door and is shocked to see sagar on the door...

Ishu:(yawning) 🥱sagar tum itne raat ko... Kuch chahiye tha kya?😕

Sagar just keeps looking at ishu and smiles...😊

Ishu snaps her fingers in front of sagar and he comes back to reality...

Sagar: haan wo.. ammm.. HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!😳👏

Ishu is completely shocked...

Ishu: tumhe yaad hai sagar...

Sagar: obviously... I hope maine tumhe aur raman ko disturb nahi kiya... shaadi ke baad yeh pehla birthday hoga na tumhara...

Ishu (smiles): haan... par raman ko pata nahi hai ke aaj mera birthday hai... isliye... (she looks behind and sees raman who is sleeping peacefully.)

Sagar: Oh.. tumne batay nahi...

Ishu: Actually kabhie mauka hi nahi mila...

Sagar notices watch in ishu's hand and realizes its 12.10...

Sagar: acha ishu good night and happy birthday once again...😃

Ishu: thanks...😳

She closes the door and turns behind smilingly and goes and sleeps on the bed...

In the morning...

Sagar is preparing cake in the kitchen... and raman comes from the bedroom...

Raman: Aaj gharke saare log Anshan pe chale gaye hai kya... maa.. papa...

Sagar: (busy in making cake) uncleji walk pe gayi hai.. auntyji uthi nahi hai aur ishu clinic gayi hai kuch emergency thi...

Raman (to himself): maine uss din ka intajaar karunga jab tere yaha se jaane ki khabar koi aur muzhe dega...

Sagar: kuch kaha tumne...

Raman: nahi toh... main kaha kuch kehta hun?? (raman notices he is preparing something)

Raman: yeh kya kar rahe ho tum... humare ghar mein nilu hai, tumhe ghar ke kaam karne ki jaroorat nahi hai...

Sagar: yeh ghar ke kaam nahi hai... aur waise bhi mein cake bana raha hun...

Raman: oo.. dentistry chod ke ab bakery ka business shuru kar rahe ho... Acha hai acha hai...😉

Sagar: very funny raman...

Raman: Anyways aaj kya khas hai jo tum yeh cake bana rahe ho...

Sagar: aaj ishu ka birthday hai...

Raman: tum baat kyun badal rahe ho.. maine pucha aaj kya KHAAS hai?😆

Sagar: (laughs) tumhara sense of humour bahot acha hai... waise kal hi ishu ne bataya aapko pata nahi tha ke aaj ishu ka birthday hai isliye maine socha main hi bata deta hun...😃

Raman: ishitane tumse kab kaha?

Sagar: Kal raat ko... jab tum so rahe the...

Raman: Kya????

Sagar: Haan wo mein aya tha na.. kal ishu ko wish karne tumhare kamre mein...

Raman : (forcefully smiles) ooo... toh tum kal bhi aye the.. good... (raman leaves thinking something...)😃

In Ishra's bedroom. Ruhi was sleeping and raman was sitting besides her thinking...

Raman: iss Jhansi ki rani ko kuch toh dena padega... par kay??? Idea.. talwar deta hun..

kuch zyaada hi goddy ho jayega... Phir complain karegi yeh jhansi ki rani... ammm...🤔 haan pen aur paper deta hun...

phir apne bhashan likhegi aur khud hi padhegi... Wow!!! Nahi phir muzhe kanjoos bolegi... kya du usko?😕😕

Ruhi wakes up...

Ruhi: Aap kisko kya dene wale hai?

Raman: tumhare ishima ka birthday hai na...

Ruhi: ooo wow.. aaj ishima ka birthday hai... Wow... maza ayega... aaj party hogi...🥳

Raman: haan party toh karenge par..gift toh dena hoga na...

Ruhi: aap ishima ko gift mein mumy papa dijiye...

Raman: kya.. tumhari ishima ko naye mummy papa kaha se lao??? Kya ruhi tum bhi...😕

Ruhi: Offo.. naye nahi.. purane.. mera matlab hai pati toh Chennai gayi hai na?? toh aap unhe laiye wapis delhi... kyunki ishima apne mummy papa ko bahot miss karti hai...

Raman: ooo.. idea!!!

He whispers something into ruhi's ears... and ruhi hugs him and says... yeah aaj ishima bahot happy ho jayengi...

Ruhi goes to Ishu's clinic...

Ishu: Arey ruhi tum yaha.. tumhe yaha kisne choda...

Ruhi: Papane..

Ishu: Papane? Papa kaha hai?

Ruhi: wo toh office chale gaye..

Ishu: ravan kumar kahike...😡😡

Ruhi: muzhe aapki yaad aa rahi thi...

Ishu: ooo mere baby ko meri yaad aa rahi thi... main ghar hi ane wali thi beta...

Ruhi: par main agayi...aap muzhe promise karo ke aaj main aapse jo bhi mangungi aap dogi...

Ishu: promise...??? par ruhi...

ruhi: plz... plz...

Ishu: achha okay... PROMISE... kya chahiye tumhe?

Ruhi: ishima aaj mumma aur beti shopping ke liye ja sakte hai...

Ishu: shopping!!😲

Ruhi: plz...

Ishu: par...

Ruhi: plz ishima plz...

Ishu: acha thik hai... chalo...⭐️⭐️

In the car...

Ruhi: pehle hum shoppin karenge... phir noodles khayenge aur phir hum waha se kids corner jayenge aur phir ghar jayenge...

Ishu: par is sab mein toh sham ho jayegi.. ghar pe maine kuch nahi bataya hai...

Ruhi: maine dadi ko batay hai.. dadi ne hume permission di hai..

Ishu: kya... permission...

Ruhi: offo.. ishima.. chalo na.. aaj hum full day enjoy karenge... girls day out...😊😊

Ishu: kya? Girls day out??? (she giggles)😆

Ruhi: meri school shuru ho jayegi toh enjoy karne nahi milega na...😭

Ishu: ooo

In raman's office...

Raman: (on phone) haan maine jo bhi kaha hai waise hona chahiye.. muzhe koi mistakes nahi chahiye.. haan thik hai kab tak ready hoga.. mein bhejta hu kisiko lene...

Mihir enters...

Mihir: bhai yeh aapne flight ke ticket mangvaye the wo maine amma appa ko de diye... wo bas nikal chuke honge...

Raman: that's great mihir... matlab wo sham tak pahonch jayenge..

Mihir: par yeh sab kyun...

Raman: arey aaj Ishita ka birthday hai na... toh bas usi ke liye...😳😳

Mihir: wah bhai.. I m very happy.. itna romantic raman kumar dekhne milega yeh maine khwaab mein bhi nahi socha tha...

Raman: bas.. ab kaam pe dhyaan de... warna...😡

Mihir: okay sorry... par...

Raman: MIHIR!!!😡

In the house...

Raman: yeh kya hai.. gende ke phool.. shaadi ka ghar nahi hai.. birthday hai. Kuch dusre phool lagao..

Phoolwala: kaunse phool lagao?

Raman: amm...🤔

Sagar: (comes from behind) orchirds.. aur roses.. ishu ko dono bahot pasand hai..

Raman smiles at sagar..

Raman: thnx...

Sagar: its okay.. ruhi ne tumhare plan ke bare mein subhe bata diya tha.

Raman: OOo.. ruhi ki bacchi... acha hai...😡😃

Toshiji: oye raman puttar jara yeh halwa chakke batana kaisa bana hai...

Raman tastes it...

Raman: first class bana hai maa... Ishita ko acchha lagega...

Papaji: dekh yeh kapde kaise lagenge aaj ke function ke liye?

Raman: papa aap toh isme bilkul hero lagoge...

Toshiji: kal Ishita ko daat lagaungi achese...😉

Papaji: oji toshiji aap aisa kyun bol rahe ho...

Toshi: aur nahi toh kya bhalla ji.. kitni badi baat chupa ke rakhi thi kitne jaldi mein sab kar rahe hai.. bhala ho sagar ka jisne hume batay.. warna hmko toh pata hi nahi chalta...

Papaji: kya aap bhi toshiji...

In the mall...

Ruhi: ishima aap yeh sareelo.. bahot beautiful lagega aap pe...

Ishu: par beta yeh party wear hai... kuch simple lete hai na...

Ruhi: to kya hua.. jab aap party pe jayengi na tab pehenlena...

Ishu looks carefully at the saree... it's a blue coloured net saree with beautiful embroidery on it... she remembers blue is raman's favourite colour and smiles...😊😊

Ishu: waise hai toh preety.. thik hai... aapke liye toh humne kuch liya hi nahi..

Ruhi: yeh dekhiye.. she brings out a white frock which is very cute...😃

Ruhi: main yeh frock lungi..

Ishu: yeh bi party wear...

Ruhi: plz... muzhe yeh bahot pasand aya...

Ishu: okay... chale ab payment kar de...

Ruhi: hmm..

After coming from kidszone in ishu's car...

Ruhi: aaj kitna maza aya na ishima...😃

Ishu: bahot...🤗

Ishu's phone rings..

Ishu: Raman.. ruhi yeh phone uthana...

Ruhi: papa ka phone...

Raman: hello...

Ruhi: hello papa...

Raman: ruhi.. acha hua tumhine uthaya... kaha ho tum...

Ruhi: main aur ishima ghar aa rahe hai...

Raman: O... dekho yaha sab tayari ho gay hai aur guests aa gaye hai... toh ab tumhe ishima ko tayar karke lana hai...

Ruhi: par papa.. yeh...

Raman: tension mat lo.. aur main jaise kehta hun waise hi karo...

Ruhi: okay...👍🏼

Raman tells something to ruhi...

Ruhi: okay papa..

Raman: All the best... bye...👍🏼

Ishu: kya keh rahe the papa...

Ruhi: kuch nahi...😉

Ishu: kuch nahi...😕

Ruhi: ishima wait... muzhe washroom jana hai..

Ishu: ruhi hum log 10 min mein ghar pahonch jayenge...

Ruhi: nahi ishima muzhse wait nahi hoga... aapka clinic yahi hai.. jaldi se jaakar ate hai...

Ishu: ruhi... par clinic mein koi nahi hoga abhi...

Ruhi: aapke pas chaavi toh rehti hai na.. ishima plz...😃

Ishu: okay chalo...

They both go to clinic and ruhi takes the shopping bag with them too...

Ishu: jaldi jao.. hum bahot late ho gaye hai...

Ruhi: haan..

After sometime ruhi comes out...

Ishu: chale..

Ruhi: nahi ruko.. humne toh yeh saree aur yeh frock try hi nahi kiya...

Ishu: ghar pe jaake try karenge ... abhi chalo...

Ruhi: ishima muzhe abhi try karna hai.. chalo na try karte hai...

Ishu: par ruhi...

Ruhi: chalo na ishima... aapne promise kiya tha.. aap muzhe na nahi bolengi aaj...

Ishu: okay... Thik hai...😊

They both get ready... and ishu looks stunning in that saree and ruhi looks too cute...

Ishu: abhi change kare...

Ruhi: nahi aise hi jaate hai ghar...

Ishu: ruhi...

Ruhi: papa ko bhi dikha denge na...😃

Ishu: ruhi... par...

Ruhi: yeh last baat ishima promise... plzz...😃

Ishu: thik hai chalo abhi...

Ruhi: jumps... yeah..yeah...

Ishu smiles at her and they leave...

All the guests have arrived to bhalla house, raman is looking as usual handsome but this time he had a tough competition by sagar aswell... it's a perfect party atmosphere... raman was waiting for ishu to arrive...


Guys i hope u have enjoyed reading this part... Sorry for updating late...😊😊Plz leave ur comments behind be it positive or negative and dont forget to click the like button... I will update next part soon...⭐️⭐️


Edited by 13MEGHA05 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome yaar...Surprise birthday party for Ishu...superb...Ruuu you are so cute...
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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome Update 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww lovely update...👍🏼👏


but this time he had a tough competition by sagar
@bold nobody can give competetion to our RKB...😳😳


p.s-plzz update next part soon.. u make us wait a long... waiting for next update..

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