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Posted: 11 years ago
Very sweeet... ek dham ek kilo badam halwa milta
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dream continues

Scene starts in terrace while Ruhi was busy making Ishita busy and Raman waiting for a chance to speak to Ishita .Ishita understood Raman's impatience and acted as if she is ignoring him and concentrating on Ruhi telling her stories.

Raman waits for few minutes and understood that Ishita was doing intentionally giving reply for what he did last two days.Raman sleeps thinking about turn of events in a day in his life.Now he has expressed his feelings to his wife and same did she .Then he brought Ruhi to the farmhouse .

Ruhi,devine thread which brought together the sole reason Raman and Ishita are living till days ago now she is symbol of their love.Who said that love between two people is indicated by the they bore.Child symolozes the love their parents show to them when their parents love is not true neither would be their child a precious gift of their love but would be a symbol of human deceit and selfishness.

Raman and Ishita have their happy family with their pretty princess for whome they can go to any extent of danger or for whome they will even bring stars down.

In morning Ishita wakes up first and still its dawn and sun din't rise till then .Ishita was looking happily at her family her husband and daughter.She considered herself deprived of this happiness now she will proudly tell to anyone that she has her own loving family.

She then gets up and was gazing outside then her sight goes to the car standing in the garage.

She walks towards it and Raman who was sleeping till then wakesup listening sounds of Ishita's anklets.He notices Ishita was not there and Ruhi sleeping peacefully hugging him.He picks up Ruhi and make her sleep in the cradle in terrace and covers her with the blanket and keeps pillows for support.

He then walks towards Ishita sitting in the car.

In car Ishita was silently sitting and remembering her childhood memories about marriage and how she wanted that her husband should give her everything she wanted without even asking now she is happy that she got Raman.

She never asked Raman for something her happiness lies in Ruhi and Raman and they both are her life and she got them without asking Raman.

Raman comes there looking for Ishita and notices her sitting inside the car and he goes and sits there along with her.

Ishita smiles seing Raman there and asks him about Ruhi and he says he made he sleep in cradle and came here.

Ishita lies her head on Raman's shoulder and start discussing over their journey from their misunderstandings to contract marriage to Ruhi's parents to family members to now husband and wife and true soulmates.

Ishita hugs Raman and Raman convinces her that all this is true and never ending dream for them which they will make sure it is true.

Now scene shifts to a distance place where a lady is sitting in dark and crying bitterly seeing her kids sleeping there.One of the kid has a bandage bound to his head while other was sleeping peacefully.

Both kids are twins and there is no sign of their father in that sight nor his photo nor any name.

Then scene shifts to Ishita and Raman sleeping in car Raman shirt was covering Ishita and her jewellery over the deck of that car.Ishita wakes up and understood sunrise and she goesto her room wearing Raman's shirt.

Raman was still sleeping and same does Ruhi.

Ishita gets ready and brings sleeping Ruhi to her room and wakes up Raman and asks him to get ready .

She plans that they should ho to roaming on that car and she will show them the farmhouse that day.

Ishita planned a family picnic for her family.

In Iyer house Oc couple were speaking to a purohith and theywere discussing about a match to their daughter Ashwini.

Ashwini is only child of old couple who was born after so many years of their marriage almost 15 years.

They stood with each other all those years giving strength to themselves over their childless marriage but destiny can never be avoided and they finally bore their daughter and symbol of their love.

Ashwini completed her graduation and she was supposed to get married this year.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome... Continue... Waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
It really does feel like a dream come true for IshRa but looks like there's another side track building with the lady and her twins. I just hope there's no trouble for IshRa in all this.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ABBY92

It really does feel like a dream come true for IshRa but looks like there's another side track building with the lady and her twins. I just hope there's no trouble for IshRa in all this.

Surely they will not trouble Ishra.
This is deep planned track to bring Adi back to track .
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazingg update as alwys! Lovedd it!
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Ruhi's prank

Scene starts with Raman and Ruhi getting ready and Ishita making breakfast.Ruhi is superexcited with plan of outing and dancing around.

They then had their breakfast .Raman helps Ishita in packing the stuff .

Ishita "Raman unlogon ko batha deejiyen naa kee Ruhi hummarey pass hain bahut tension mey hongey who log."

Raman "Mujhey abh yaad aa rahan hain.Kaisey ghar hain yaar.Raath ko mainey jab Ruhi ko uthakar laa raha tha koi naheen rokha.Ghar mey itney loog rehkar bhee.Isstarah laaparwah kaisey ho saktey hain."

Ishita "Raman kyaa bol rahen hain .Waha sab log ko kya patha tha kee aisey kuch honey waala hain."

Raman "Museebath kabhee ghanti bhajaake nahee ayeegi.Tayya rehnaa padtha hain.Agar mere jagah koi kidnapper hoth tho thab kitnaa mussebath aa jatha."

Ishita "Aisey math boliye naa .Hummesha burey khyaal aathey hain aapko tho."

Raman "Think practical yaar.Main tho Mihir ko chodoonga naheen.Usske wajaha sey sabh ho raha hain."

Ishita moving slowly towars Raman and holding his hand"kyaa kyaa ho raha hain?"

Raman calming down "Kuch accha tho he huan .lekin who ladkee ko Akeley kaisey chodsaktha hain."

Ishita "Kuch naheen hua naa abh bass karo .Ruhi aaraheen hain aap naith jayiye."

They all get inside car and Raman was driving and Ishita was sitting beside himand Ruhi was behind singing her own songs.

Same time Raman's mobile rings and it is from home Mihir was calling.

Ishita picks the call.

Mihir "Bhaabhi ,aap sabh log theek hain naa.aur Ruhi?"

Ishita looks at Raman and he signs as you wish "Han Mihir yaha sab kuch theek hain.Ruhi bhee yaheen hain."

Mihir "Thank god bhaabhi aapney bathadiya.Yaha sab log tension mey they"

Ishita looks at Raman and he acts as if ignoring .

Ishita "Sab kuch theek hain naa wahan."

Mihika who was listening all this in speeker mode finally speaks.

Mihika "Yahan sab kuch theek hain waha tho kuch jyaada hua lag rahan hain.kuch jyaada happy lag raheen hon."

Ishita blushing "Kuch naheen tum chup rahon."

Mihika "Kuch naheen .Akka mujhsey kyaa chuppana.Kyaa jeeju ney aapko propose kiyan."

Ishita was shocked listening this "Kyaan bolraheen hon chup rahon."

Ishita signs this to Raman and Raman stops the car and takes the lead.

Ishita keeps phone in speaker and both Ruhi and Raman get ready to attack.

Raman "Mujhey pehley yeh bathaon kee tum logon ko kaisey patha chalaa kee mera phone mera pass hain ?"

Mihir "Bhain mainey try kiyya tho lagee.Main kuch naheen jaantha."

Raman "Kuch naheen jaantha.Bachee ko koi ghar sey uthakar jaaahan hain aur tum ghodey bhejkey sa rahey they."

Mihika was enjoying Mihir's confrontation.Mihir "Mujhey kyaa patha bhain aap chor key tarah andhar gussengey."

Ruhi "Chachu papa key jagaha koi aur hoth tho aap mujhey aisey chod detey."

Mihir "Jab main fight kartha ."

Ruhi "Jhoot aap tho so rahey they."

Ishita was happy that both of them diverted topic easily.

Mihir "Bhai aap kall aarahen hain naa."

Raman "ek minute tumhey kaisey patha challaa kee hum aasaktey hain."

Mihika "Jeeju uss gaadi key baarey mey main jantheee hun humey laga kee aapney ussey repair kiyaa."

Ishita "Han hum aaj raath ko ayengey kall naheen .Ruhi key saarey cheejey naheen hain yaha Raman ney adha packing karkey aagayan."

Ishita looks at Raman who was keeping annoyed face as Ishita told that they would be leaving farmhouse tonight.Ruhi was also sad.

Ishit a"Abh kyaa huan ."

Raman "Tho phir hum aaj jana hain.Issliyen mujhey bathana hee nahey chahiye thaa ke mere pass keys hain."

Ishita "Raman hum waapas aa saktey hain.Hum iss baar poorey planning key saath ayengey."

Raman "Tumhaara planning jaantha hun .Poorey pariwar ko bulaawogi.Koi kasar naheen bach hian tho mummy papa ko bhee bulaalethi."

Ishita "Accha idea hain main abhee phone karthey hun."

Ishita was about to call but Raman grabs the phone immediately.

Ishita laughs at Raman whle Raman composes herself.

They then reach the spot and spen a quality time.Ruhi was more happy there and then she asks Ishita about her old stories of that place.

Ishita tells them how she used to come along with her parents here in childhood and how she used to enjoy it.Both Ruhi and Raman were listening to her .

Ruhi "Abh main bhee bolungi main kitnaa masthee kar rahee thee .Mama hum waapas ayengey."

Raman "Han beta hum jaroor waapas ayengey yeh papa ka promise hain.Aapkey mama naheen bhee aye tho thab bhee hum dono ayengey."

Ruhi understood what Raman meant "Papa hum donon Akeley kyon hum uss aunty ko bhee saath layengey."

Raman and Ishita were shocked listening this.

Raman "Kiss aunty?"

Ishita was hearing all this patiently to know about whome Ruhi was speaking to.

Ruhi "Papa who aunty jissey aapney milaa tha jab aap mujhey lekar aa rahey hian tho.?"

Raman "Main kissey mila.Hum tho seedhey aye they naa." Raman shocked as they have'nt met anyone that day.

Ruhi pulls Raman down and tells him silently maiking sure it is enough to be aubible to Ishita.

Ruhi "Papa yeh hummara secret hain kyaa?"

Raman "Kyaa secret?Tum seedhey bathaon kyaa huan."

Ishita was cofused over what is happening but one thing that caught her attention was some lady met Raman.

Ruhi "Papa who aunty ghar bhee aye thee naa aapsey milney."

Ishita "Sonali Kotnis?"

Ruhi "wohi."

Ishita gives angry look at Raman and Ruhi giggling seeing it.

Raman "Mainey kissey sey naheen mila ."

Ishita "Tho Ruhi jhoot bol raheen hain .Who kyon jhoot bolegee ?"

Raman loks at Ruhi who was acting normally"Mujhey kyaa path who jhoot kyon bol raheen hain."

Ishita sits in car silently and Raman drives it back to farmhouse.

Their they pack their luggage and leave to town.

Ishita was angry at Raman and Raman trying to speak to her and Ruhi smiling seeing her prank working.

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Posted: 11 years ago
To my regular readers.
I informed about present track of Ashwini's marriage .
Raman buying the farm house to help old couple and make Ishita happy.
Then marriage in farmhouse.

The lady with twins.(sorry one kid will die)
He charecter is already introduced .
She will teach Raman one important lesson.good one.over how much pain a woman can bear for her kids happiness.
This will stop Raman from stopping Ishita to take a risk of becoming a mother bearing lot of pain.
Then Adi understanding difference between real father and users.Will be in friendly terms with Raman but will be with Shagun .
Lady will become part of Bhalla family with much drama and action.

She is a positive charecter.
She is a women who got cheated by a person and left alone with kids.
Raman will help her in many ways.Ishita asks him to do so.

Edited by SAKIV-RAM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM

To my regular readers.

I informed about present track of Ashwini's marriage .
Raman buying the farm house to help old couple and make Ishita happy.
Then marriage in farmhouse.

The lady with twins.(sorry one kid will die)
He charecter is already introduced .
She will teach Raman one important lesson.good one.over how much pain a woman can bear for her kids happiness.
This will stop Raman from stopping Ishita to take a risk of becoming a mother bearing lot of pain.
Then Adi understanding difference between real father and users.Will be in friendly terms with Raman but will be with Shagun .
Lady will become part of Bhalla family with much drama and action.

She is a positive charecter.
She is a women who got cheated by a person and left alone with kids.
Raman will help her in many ways.Ishita asks him to do so.



Yeah,Ishita should not go under painful treatments to become a biological mother. Although we would love to see Ishita to conceive NATURALLY.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: RheaSh



Yeah,Ishita should not go under painful treatments to become a biological mother. Although we would love to see Ishita to conceive NATURALLY.

I am taking this part from book.
There Ishita will go throug procedure but it will be stopped .
In book she wanted her family support then but she feels they were avoiding her and she ends this marriage.
Here I just want it to be completed for their happy family.
But I am sorry if you dont like my track.

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