SS: Turning over a new leaf....Last part...Pg 73... - Page 51

Brillaint ending to a excellent story what a ending shagun the new leaf wow ishra a perfect happy family .
Amazing Krishna 🤗 keep writing .

Originally posted by: Nichuss

cant believe this one ended...

nice ending ...

shocked seeing shagun lecture :P

arjun back to raman n ishu...

everything final ends happyilly...

Ya...It ended... Quite a long one... 18 parts...

Jyada ho gayi na...i meant Shagun's lecture... Har raat Ishita ko dekhne ka asar...

Finally, Ishra gets Arjun back...

Thanks a lot for liking it...😊

Originally posted by: -Srkfan4ever-

Omg. I'm super late in posting this comment.

Phir bhi. Next SS me pakka first aaungi.😉 Yes, next SS. I will be waiting for it.😉

Coming to the last part of this SS. I super loved it Kri.🤗

I had always wondered ki how you're gonna conclude the SS as har part me thoda thoda suspense hota tha. And this part was the BEST one. Very different, very interesting.

And I loved it how you didn't show ki all of a sudden Shagun changed. No, She was thinking about this since long. Never in my dreams I thought I would feel bad for Shagun. She was always a bitch for me. 😆 I felt bad for her in this SS though. Her apology was heartfelt. I loved how you potrayed that She genuinely wanted to correct her mistakes.👍🏼

This SS was super amazing Kri.🤗

PS.Remember what I wrote in my first paragraph okay? I'll be waiting. 😉

PSS. I just realised that I wrote a mini Ramayan.😕😆

wow Divya... An amazing way to end this ss... That's a fabulous reply from your side... Loved it...

Will definitely PM you for my next work also... I just hope i managed to close the loops to the extent possible... Glad that you found the ending an interesting one...

Yes... That was something which i planned from the first part... Shagun's change... Happy to know that you felt the same... And i have another reason to rejoice... I succeeded in my mission... You are feeling bad for Shagun... Thanks yaar...

Thanks a lot for liking this SS...

Will try to strike back soon... BTW, loved your mini Ramayan...😃

Originally posted by: rockstar29

Brillaint ending to a excellent story what a ending shagun the new leaf wow ishra a perfect happy family .
Amazing Krishna 🤗 keep writing .

That's a lovely comment again... Thank you so much for liking it...😃

Will try to come with something new... If something is going to inspire me again...

Wow , what an amazing end . 👏👏👏👏. Thank you so much for giving us this wonderful SS Kri. 🤗🤗

This SS was definitely a roller-coaster ride. I was able to see each of the following in this SS :- Love, Trust, Understanding, Affection,Bonding, comedy... Sab acha thaa. Amazingly written yaar. Kudos to your writing. U kept us all hooked and waiting for your SS. Hats off to you.👏👏😊

I just loved Shagun turning good in the end. Loved the way she gave it back to Ashok.
But yes, based on your title, it did strike me during your last update that "kahi ye title shagun ke liye tho nahi.? wo kudh aakar arjun ko dengi kya?."

Thanks again for this wonderful update and waiting for more and more of your such wonderful SS Kri. Hope you will PM me whenever you write one.😊

Take care
Cheers
Priya

Originally posted by: priyadarshini.r

Wow , what an amazing end . 👏. Thank you so much for giving us this wonderful SS Kri. 🤗🤗

This SS was definitely a roller-coaster ride. I was able to see each of the following in this SS :- Love, Trust, Understanding, Affection,Bonding, comedy... Sab acha thaa. Amazingly written yaar. Kudos to your writing. U kept us all hooked and waiting for your SS. Hats off to you.👏👏😊

I just loved Shagun turning good in the end. Loved the way she gave it back to Ashok.
But yes, based on your title, it did strike me during your last update that "kahi ye title shagun ke liye tho nahi.? wo kudh aakar arjun ko dengi kya?."

Thanks again for this wonderful update and waiting for more and more of your such wonderful SS Kri. Hope you will PM me whenever you write one.😊

Take care
Cheers
Priya

That's an amazing reply yaar... Thanks a lot for liking it so much... You have bisected it beautifully... Will definitely PM you...😊

OMG !it was the last one..i feel like itni-jaldi-khatam ?! u knw :D
KP this was beautiful !a lovely SS n truely with a nice ending.. I personally liked the way u changed Shagun's char n brought out a nice human in her.. But at the end she had to leave...

Lovely concept n beautifully drafted! Well done KP ❤️

Originally posted by: RisingAsh

OMG !it was the last one..i feel like itni-jaldi-khatam ?! u knw :D
KP this was beautiful !a lovely SS n truely with a nice ending.. I personally liked the way u changed Shagun's char n brought out a nice human in her.. But at the end she had to leave...

Lovely concept n beautifully drafted! Well done KP ❤️

Heart touching update...
I really felt bad for ishra...ishita is pretending to be ready for it but inside she is getiing scared and being in pain...for shagun, she better stay like that i will be so angry if she do anything wrong wth arjun
Eagerly waiting for next update. ?..also sorry for being late in comment was out of city, thanks for pm

It was a beautifull ending
Verry well written
Ishita was ready to sacrifice arjun and she was guilty hidding from everyone when shagun changed her statement at right time and finnally she gave arjun to ishra
I liked the way she dumped ashok...
And all her talks
Also lovee the hug between shagun n ishu n also the one between ishra...
I know i have lot of exemples sautans r not always enemies like in ektaland... they r friends...and even if they have littles arguments they stay in gud friendly relationship for their kids...
Your FF was one of my favorite on yhm...will miss it a lot
I loved the concept i wish shagun can change for gud in yhm too...
I would love to see friendship between ishita n her and both taking care of kids togheter...