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Hi guys im bk.
Actually im frustrated wid d present track so i thought of bringing sum romance b/w dem.
(raman has to attend a meetin in bhopal fr 3days he leaves.side by side ishu also had to go to bhopal fr a seminar fr a week,she informs every1 & takes ru wid her)
Ru:ishima, hum papa ko milenge vahan?
I:i dnt knw beta,muje pata nai ke papa kahan honge,phone nai uta rahen hai.
Ru:toh fir hum kahan rahenge?
I:mere frnd ke ghar...vo aapko bahaut pasand aayege.
Ru:yeah..
(der in d hotel shagun who had cum wid ashok was behind raman but he blew her off by praisin ishu or by tauntin her.ishu in had reached d house & asks her to take care of ru til she is bk.she wears a white,silver bordered designer saree wid silver sleeveless blouse as ru insisted.dey had to go to a party in a hotel so she agreed to wear but who knew dat she was gng to d same place wer raman was der)
AT D HOTEL
(ishu had entered d party place wid her frnds.raman gets a feelin dat she is here,but thinks he she is at home & keeps quiet.sum ppl present der was askin abt his new married lyf)
R:mere nayi lyf toh bahaut ache chal rahe hai.(he tels abt wat all hapd & hw ishu helpd) infact evrythin settled fr me aftr dis marriage.sab biwi ka kamal hai.
(hearin dis shagun fumes)
Mr.M:vaise mr.raman itne tareef kar rahe ho apne biwi ki kab milaoge apne is wife se?
R:voh...(he turns & sudenly he noticed ishu der wid her frnds)ishita..ek min mein abi milate hun.
(he goes 2 ishu,hearin ishita she felt sumthin & der she saw raman cmg towards her)
I:raman...iss ka meetin yahi pe ho raha hai?aiyo kadavule ab toh ye muje sab ke samne dartne wala hai.
R:ishita tum yahan..kya kar rahe ho?
(her frds ask her who is he)
I:ye mera..pati hai.
S:kya??ishu..tumne bataya nai ki tumara pati bi aaya hai.
R tels slowly"ye to muje hi nai bataya aap logoko kaise batayege"ishu hears it)
I:voh sakshi actualy..
S:(she teases dem)arre..sry yaar tumara pati ne tumse baat karne aaya hai aur hum beech mein..tu baat kar na baad mein miltein k bye.
I:sakshi...
R:ab bolo madam aap yahan?aur ye saree...
I:muje ruhine pehene keliye kaha tha isliye pehna meine.
R:oiye helo mein toh bas ye kehne wala tha ke saree ache hai aur ek tum ho...
I:sry..I dint hear properly.
R:voh toh tere adat hai na.vaise wr is ru?
I:she also came wid me.vo mere frnd ke ghar pe hai.
R:oh..tum yahan kitne der rehne waali ho?
I:kyun?
R:mere saat aao fir pata chalega tujhe.(he takes her to his members) gentleman meet my wife Mrs.Ishita Raman bhalla.
I:hello
R:hi bhabi..im ranjit.raman was rite aap bilkul vaisa hai jaisa ussne kaha tha.
(ishu just smiles.dey take a seat.shagun was seein al dis & is jealous)
I:aisa kya kaha aapne un logse?
R:kyun?
I:muje jaana hai
R:tuje jaana hai vahan shagun ke face deko sab samaj jaoge.
I:(smiles aftr seein her face,but)acha...to aapke ex wife ko jalane keliye ye sab kiya aapne.
R:sahi tha tum bewakuf ho.tumhe toh usska mere aas paas rehna pasand nai na isliye aaj ussko mein kud mere peeche padne se rokliya.aur vaise bi meine tumare baarein mein jo bi kaha dil se kaha tha k..
I:(she smirks)jaante hun lekin aapse kud suna chate thi isliye i...
R:oh so tum naras hone ke natak kar rahe thi.dek mein kya karta hun.
I:acha..dektein(she smiles & winks)
(announcement was made dat der is a comp fr couples who hav to dance & d best one wil win.couples names wr read & dey all danced even ashgun danced.lastly"Mr.&Mrs. Raman bhalla")
I:wat??no mein koi dance vance nai karne
R:ye kiska harkat hai?(he notices saksi signalin to go & dance.he smiles recallin wat she told & decides to make her dance)
R:chalo ishita.
I:kahan?nai..im nt cmg.
R:dek..pichle bar holi mein keechkar le gaya tha lekin agar tum nai aaoge uttake le jaonga.
I:(she had no other go so gt up,raman took of his coat & dey went.he was wearin a white shirt)
SONG"tere jhuke nazar"STARTS
(raman was holdin her close whispers"aaj mein tumhe kuch bolne waala hun"she lookd at him,he turns her,dey dance sweetly in b/w frm d line
"tere juke nazar,tere har ada"he pulls her close & she looks down he makes her look up.
He turns her he slides his hand on her stomach & comes closer.she places her hand on his & rests her head on him dey both slitely bend bwd.ishu & raman wr into each other.he turned her & both luk at each other & move slitely.dey dance & at d end ishu came rotatin on his pull & he holds her wid his left hand under her waist.he comes closer whispers "I luv u" & kisses her on d cheek which was quite surprisin she thot it was fr fun.he smiles at her she also smiles.raman hugs her.
R:mein sach mein bol rahan hun i luv u.
(ppl wr clappin except one.shagun ran out cryin)
I:(she luks around ru was nt der.she knew dat thruout raman was lukin at her oly.so it was nt fr shagun,she was blushin so badly & hugs him) i luv u too mere ravan kumar...music ends.
(dey cum bk to deir senses aftr hearin evry1 screamin & hootin.dey part & cum down d stage smilin.later dey r anounced as winners)
S,R & others:congratz ya & wow...awesome dance u both wr so...stunnin.evergreen couple.
R&I:(look at each other) thank u.
AT DINNER:
I:meine aapke saat masaq kiya aur aap badle mein mujse dance karvade hai na.
R:(smiles)acha meine hi kiya sab kuch.tum toh aise keha rahe ho ki jaise tumne kuch nai kiya.apne saree ko dikane keliye bar bar tum ghum rahe the..
I:kya??
R:(he smirks)haan..sach hi toh keha raha hun mein.
I:(she gets irritated)raman..aap na..aapse baat karna hi bekar hai.(she starts eating)
(R was njoyin teasin his wife)
R:arre aram se kao na varna utak jaayege undar kahin..
I:raman...
R:kk...sry.
(just den sakshi & deir other frds cum)
S:ishu humhe toh laga ke tumhe dance karna pasand nai hai.par aaj...aaj toh...
I:tum kehena kya chate ho..sakshi.
R:dance karna pasand nai hai.ye toh pehele baar sun raha hoon mein.
(ishu looks at him.he keeps quiet)
S:tum udar kya dek rahe ho,mere saval ka jawab do..
I:tum...
R:voh actually mein leke gaya tha ussko as dey caled our names.
S:acha...but d way u both danced was nt lyk...
I:bas ab bahaut hogaya chalo ghar chaltein ruhi wil b waitin.
S:haan chalo.raman aap yahan akele kya karenge chaliye aap apne wife aur beti ke saat reh sakthein na.
I:nai unko..(he cuts in)
R:dats a great idea.muje bi apne beti se milna hai.
(dey reach d place,ru hears evrythin & gets happy)
Ru:wow..my parents r d best.
S:haan ruhi sab white ka kamal hai bilkul unki dilon ke tara.
(dat was d tym dey realised dat both wr wearin white.dey get embarassed but inside dey wer so happy thinkin of d tym dey spent wid each other dat day).
Actually im frustrated wid d present track so i thought of bringing sum romance b/w dem.
(raman has to attend a meetin in bhopal fr 3days he leaves.side by side ishu also had to go to bhopal fr a seminar fr a week,she informs every1 & takes ru wid her)
Ru:ishima, hum papa ko milenge vahan?
I:i dnt knw beta,muje pata nai ke papa kahan honge,phone nai uta rahen hai.
Ru:toh fir hum kahan rahenge?
I:mere frnd ke ghar...vo aapko bahaut pasand aayege.
Ru:yeah..
(der in d hotel shagun who had cum wid ashok was behind raman but he blew her off by praisin ishu or by tauntin her.ishu in had reached d house & asks her to take care of ru til she is bk.she wears a white,silver bordered designer saree wid silver sleeveless blouse as ru insisted.dey had to go to a party in a hotel so she agreed to wear but who knew dat she was gng to d same place wer raman was der)
AT D HOTEL
(ishu had entered d party place wid her frnds.raman gets a feelin dat she is here,but thinks he she is at home & keeps quiet.sum ppl present der was askin abt his new married lyf)
R:mere nayi lyf toh bahaut ache chal rahe hai.(he tels abt wat all hapd & hw ishu helpd) infact evrythin settled fr me aftr dis marriage.sab biwi ka kamal hai.
(hearin dis shagun fumes)
Mr.M:vaise mr.raman itne tareef kar rahe ho apne biwi ki kab milaoge apne is wife se?
R:voh...(he turns & sudenly he noticed ishu der wid her frnds)ishita..ek min mein abi milate hun.
(he goes 2 ishu,hearin ishita she felt sumthin & der she saw raman cmg towards her)
I:raman...iss ka meetin yahi pe ho raha hai?aiyo kadavule ab toh ye muje sab ke samne dartne wala hai.
R:ishita tum yahan..kya kar rahe ho?
(her frds ask her who is he)
I:ye mera..pati hai.
S:kya??ishu..tumne bataya nai ki tumara pati bi aaya hai.
R tels slowly"ye to muje hi nai bataya aap logoko kaise batayege"ishu hears it)
I:voh sakshi actualy..
S:(she teases dem)arre..sry yaar tumara pati ne tumse baat karne aaya hai aur hum beech mein..tu baat kar na baad mein miltein k bye.
I:sakshi...
R:ab bolo madam aap yahan?aur ye saree...
I:muje ruhine pehene keliye kaha tha isliye pehna meine.
R:oiye helo mein toh bas ye kehne wala tha ke saree ache hai aur ek tum ho...
I:sry..I dint hear properly.
R:voh toh tere adat hai na.vaise wr is ru?
I:she also came wid me.vo mere frnd ke ghar pe hai.
R:oh..tum yahan kitne der rehne waali ho?
I:kyun?
R:mere saat aao fir pata chalega tujhe.(he takes her to his members) gentleman meet my wife Mrs.Ishita Raman bhalla.
I:hello
R:hi bhabi..im ranjit.raman was rite aap bilkul vaisa hai jaisa ussne kaha tha.
(ishu just smiles.dey take a seat.shagun was seein al dis & is jealous)
I:aisa kya kaha aapne un logse?
R:kyun?
I:muje jaana hai
R:tuje jaana hai vahan shagun ke face deko sab samaj jaoge.
I:(smiles aftr seein her face,but)acha...to aapke ex wife ko jalane keliye ye sab kiya aapne.
R:sahi tha tum bewakuf ho.tumhe toh usska mere aas paas rehna pasand nai na isliye aaj ussko mein kud mere peeche padne se rokliya.aur vaise bi meine tumare baarein mein jo bi kaha dil se kaha tha k..
I:(she smirks)jaante hun lekin aapse kud suna chate thi isliye i...
R:oh so tum naras hone ke natak kar rahe thi.dek mein kya karta hun.
I:acha..dektein(she smiles & winks)
(announcement was made dat der is a comp fr couples who hav to dance & d best one wil win.couples names wr read & dey all danced even ashgun danced.lastly"Mr.&Mrs. Raman bhalla")
I:wat??no mein koi dance vance nai karne
R:ye kiska harkat hai?(he notices saksi signalin to go & dance.he smiles recallin wat she told & decides to make her dance)
R:chalo ishita.
I:kahan?nai..im nt cmg.
R:dek..pichle bar holi mein keechkar le gaya tha lekin agar tum nai aaoge uttake le jaonga.
I:(she had no other go so gt up,raman took of his coat & dey went.he was wearin a white shirt)
SONG"tere jhuke nazar"STARTS
(raman was holdin her close whispers"aaj mein tumhe kuch bolne waala hun"she lookd at him,he turns her,dey dance sweetly in b/w frm d line
"tere juke nazar,tere har ada"he pulls her close & she looks down he makes her look up.
He turns her he slides his hand on her stomach & comes closer.she places her hand on his & rests her head on him dey both slitely bend bwd.ishu & raman wr into each other.he turned her & both luk at each other & move slitely.dey dance & at d end ishu came rotatin on his pull & he holds her wid his left hand under her waist.he comes closer whispers "I luv u" & kisses her on d cheek which was quite surprisin she thot it was fr fun.he smiles at her she also smiles.raman hugs her.
R:mein sach mein bol rahan hun i luv u.
(ppl wr clappin except one.shagun ran out cryin)
I:(she luks around ru was nt der.she knew dat thruout raman was lukin at her oly.so it was nt fr shagun,she was blushin so badly & hugs him) i luv u too mere ravan kumar...music ends.
(dey cum bk to deir senses aftr hearin evry1 screamin & hootin.dey part & cum down d stage smilin.later dey r anounced as winners)
S,R & others:congratz ya & wow...awesome dance u both wr so...stunnin.evergreen couple.
R&I:(look at each other) thank u.
AT DINNER:
I:meine aapke saat masaq kiya aur aap badle mein mujse dance karvade hai na.
R:(smiles)acha meine hi kiya sab kuch.tum toh aise keha rahe ho ki jaise tumne kuch nai kiya.apne saree ko dikane keliye bar bar tum ghum rahe the..
I:kya??
R:(he smirks)haan..sach hi toh keha raha hun mein.
I:(she gets irritated)raman..aap na..aapse baat karna hi bekar hai.(she starts eating)
(R was njoyin teasin his wife)
R:arre aram se kao na varna utak jaayege undar kahin..
I:raman...
R:kk...sry.
(just den sakshi & deir other frds cum)
S:ishu humhe toh laga ke tumhe dance karna pasand nai hai.par aaj...aaj toh...
I:tum kehena kya chate ho..sakshi.
R:dance karna pasand nai hai.ye toh pehele baar sun raha hoon mein.
(ishu looks at him.he keeps quiet)
S:tum udar kya dek rahe ho,mere saval ka jawab do..
I:tum...
R:voh actually mein leke gaya tha ussko as dey caled our names.
S:acha...but d way u both danced was nt lyk...
I:bas ab bahaut hogaya chalo ghar chaltein ruhi wil b waitin.
S:haan chalo.raman aap yahan akele kya karenge chaliye aap apne wife aur beti ke saat reh sakthein na.
I:nai unko..(he cuts in)
R:dats a great idea.muje bi apne beti se milna hai.
(dey reach d place,ru hears evrythin & gets happy)
Ru:wow..my parents r d best.
S:haan ruhi sab white ka kamal hai bilkul unki dilon ke tara.
(dat was d tym dey realised dat both wr wearin white.dey get embarassed but inside dey wer so happy thinkin of d tym dey spent wid each other dat day).
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