Between the shadow and the soul. - An IshRa OS.

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cool_arpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hayyee

This is all my mind wanted...😳

You are a fantabulous , amazingly talented writer...👏

TFS...made my day!😊

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serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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are you not proud of me?! 😎

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Ram-an-tic.Moi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

I'm mesmerised! This is so so so well written.
Could actually feel Raman's disgust and later the tension between ishita & raman when he ties the knot.
And did you just say we have a barrage of OS & SS coming our way? Let me tell you, no1 here is going to be complaining! Absolutely love your work buddy! Can't wait to read more, more & MORE! Please keep 'em coming. Fabulous work. *claps*

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Paru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Hey ... Anee right??

Love the way you describe everything in your works be it people, their emotions or their surroundings. Excellent OS and the last part was just ... awww 😳

Am really hoping that the article today got it right (usually the hero is the dumbest of the lot and BIL eyeing wife can provide weeks of fodder for a huge MU b/w the leads 😛) and Raman does notice Parmeet's lechery towards Ishita and actually does something about it.

Chalo Ummed pe duniya kayam ... let's see if RKB actually gets this right in the show too 😆

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13MEGHA05

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

wow!!!

too good...

i just love to read your stories...😊

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eternalasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

First of All Aani - May your mind be fully taken over by Ishra and may the forum be flooded with Ishra OS's and SS's. Mera aashirwaad tumhaare saath hai 😆

As usual, I am left stunned reading your stories. I have to go silent for a few minutes to let it seep in.

You had Raman do what everyone in the Forum wishes he does in YHM with regards to the Parmeet. You had him doing what I want him to do - act the smart CEO that he is, validate Parmeet's actions, quietly protect her with calm "wo uske paas aaye to kahir nahin" manner, taking into consideration all the ramifications and coming up with a plan. MUUUAAAHH!!

I loved this part:

"He cannot block the barrage of those memories that overtake his mind. How he had stood silent in the face of all those acts he witnessed. History is repeating itself and he, he is again in much the same position he found himself earlier. Life coming a full circle."

Life always brings back to us similar traumatic situations until we learn from them what we need. It is kind of an opportunity to heal and grow as it were.

The fact that he notices that and makes a different choice and that he sees a woman that is different from Shagun in every possible way was portrayed brilliantly. I have been wondering about that - This has happend to me three times now - I think of something and the next day sure enough it is reflected in one of your posts.

I also was really touched by the way you described Ishita's beauty (physical, spiritual) and how he couldn't take his eyes off her. She is quite mesmerizing - her whole being - the eyes just gravitate to her

Edited by eternalasha - 11 years ago

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Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

I loved the dori scene Aani! It felt so spontaneous and natural.

But most of all, your story opened up a new possibility in this triangle. What if Raman misunderstands Ishita and Param seeing how he had experience with Shagun and Ashok?