new ff-FOREVER IN LOVE WITH YOU

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys..iam here with new ff on abharan..thanx for those who assured me that they are ready to accept karan in another way...iam here with the prologue..plz pen down ur feed backs...

FOREVER IN LOVE WITH YOU
PROLOGUE


A 5 year old little girl is lying on bed on her stomach hiding her face in her palms..

She at the same time mumbling something.."I'll never talk with u'"which is not clear to her maami who was standing near the bed with a glass of milk in her hand..

"princess plz ut jao'drink milk'"

"nahi I don't want anything"says the little girl firmly'

Her maami smiles at the little stubborn girl who always behaves in the same way whenever she gets upset or becomes angry on someone..

She sits on bed beside that girl and tries to make her sit..

"chalo princess ab ut jao..muje batao kya huwa hai?meri princess kis par naraz hai?"

But she denies to move an inch from her place..finally she succeeds in making her sit'

She cups her face who is twisting her lips and trying to show her anger'.

"meri princess apni maami ko nahi batayegi ki kya huwa hai??dekho beta hum dono friends hai na..plz batayiye aap upset kyun ho?"

"mama apni promise bhool gayi"mumbles while pouting her red small lips..

She smiles at her cute little girl who look more cute when she is in angry mode..

"aisa nahi hai beta mama busy hogi office mein..o aajayegi'u drink milk"

"no I don't want.."she proclaims again as if it is her final decision

"but beta'"before she could say anything she hears the door bell..

She comes out and opens the door just to find terrified young girl standing there'

And smiles at her '"aabha aagayi tum?"

"bhabi princess kaha hai??"is the first word that came from her'

"hmm..u r gone today..madam's gussa reached its peak"said namratha(girl's maami)

"accha'bhabi mein kya karu..office mein kaam tha..so iam late..says aabha

"don't worry abhi bhi time hai go and manofy her..she didn't even had milk"

Aabha:what??She didn't have milk?hmm aaj bahana milgaya dood peene se bachne ka'chalo I'll try to manofy my angry doll'

She slowly moves towards her room just to find her princess looking out of the window crossing her arms'and her back is facing aabha

"Hmm'madam is very angry.."mumbles aabha

She knows that whenever her princess will be upset she'll stand there in the same position where she is now'

She slowly walks on her tip toes'she is about to hug her but stops when that little girl says"princess mama se naraz hai"and turns to other side'

Aabha again tries to face her but again she moves another side'

Finally aabha gives up.."iam sorry"says holding her ears'

But there is no change in her expression'

"toh batayiye mama kya kare princess ko manane ke liye?"asks aabha'

Before she could say anything aabha herself says"movie ?abhi bhi time hai aur mama tickets bhi le aayi hai.."

"sacchi"literally shouts while turning towards her..

"sacchi mucchi"says aabha while smiling at her little princess

She immediately hugs aabha with her tiny hands encircling her neck..

"mama u r the best..i love u"

Aabha:love u too beta..ab chalo ready hojao..maama aathe hi honge phir tum maama,maami ke saath chale jaana ok..

"Mama aap nahi aayegi?"asks with sad voice

Aabha:nahi beta mama ko kaam hai aur aapko pata hai na mama ko action movies se dar lagtha hai isliye'

Ab chaliye ready hojayiye warna aap movie miss hojayegi'

That little girl almost jumps with happiness and runs in to the wash room..

"aabha tum bhi chalo na.." namratha requests her'

Aabha:bhabi aap jaanthi hai na mein insab se door kyun rehthi hoon..aur ye sab sirf princess ko kush dekne ke liye kar rahi hoon.

Namratha:but aabha how long u'll run from reality..u have to face it bravely and move on in ur life...

Aabha:bhabi plz'aap bhi ready hojayiye mein bhayya ko call karke aathi hoon..

She then moves out of the room'

Namratha:mein jaanthi hoon aabha tum chahkar bhi o sab nahi bhool sakthi'I hope u accept this soon'.

At the same time in london:

Oh god I have just one hour..how can I handle this'says amar while making almost crying face..

He is running inside and out of conference room with bundles of files carrying with him..

"ofo..amar why are u so tensed??"asks tina who bumps with him..

Amar:oh tina did u forgot that boss is coming to office today that to after 6 long years..

Tina:oh god I totally forgot that out khadoos boss I mean karan sir is coming today..omg I'll arrange all the files properly..otherwise he'll eat me alive..

Btw amar why sir is coming today?he used to handle everything on phone na..then why??

Amar:ab muje kya pata tina..ye sir ka office hai..o jab chahe yaha aa sakthe hai..chalo let's go back to work..

Not only tina but everyone is running here and there carrying terrified expressions on their faces..finally their one hour completed and amar stood ready outside the office to receive his boss along with tina..

Then a black benze car stops infront of him..amar gulps his saliva as his body started tembling with the thought that he is back..he is preparing himself to receive the taunts from his boss for which he was habituated 6 years back '

Then a young man steps out of his car in his black suit..wearing googles..he is just looking perfect in every way'ofcourse he is mr.perfect .a perfect and successful business tycoon in london'.he unweared his googles and came to amar who stood just a step away from him with teriffied expressions and expecting some taunt but for his surprise he smiled at him and said"hey amar.."

Amar gasped in shock and looked at him confused'

Karan:hey amar..are u ok?

----no reply-----

Karan:amar'.

----no reply---

He waves his hand to bring him to his senses which was successful..

Amar:si'sirr'ia'iam..sorr..sorry si..sir..

[bechara struggling to say sorry😆😆]

Karan:hey are u ok?

Amar:ha..ha sir..

Karan:hey tina how are u?

She just nods while giving him confused expressions'

Karan smiles and moves inside leaving amar and tina confused'

Amar:tina plz pinch me once..

Tina:amar u pinch me first..am I dreaming'omg karan sir and smile'

Amar pinched himself to understand whether it is a reality or a dream'

"ouch"winced in pain..

Amar:ye karan sir ko kya hogaya?ye teek toh hai na..isne smile kiya..omg aur muje kuch bhi nahi kaha'

Tina:sir I think I'll faint now..he asked me how are u??

Amar:shayad ye sir ka naya avatar hoga'.

-------flashback---------------

Amar just reached office and noticed that karan's car reached office at the same time'

So he stood there to receive him'

Karan steps out with full attitude while talking to someone on phone'

Karan:no mr.mishra I don't want any denial in that..i want that land at any cost..i don't care about the people there..i just want that land..and that's final..if u cant do that then I can appoint my new agent'

Mishra:sir plz try to understand..

Karan:don't u dare to raise ur voice before me'I want that land at any cost..and ha collect ur last salary from the office'

Mishra:sir iam sorry plz'

Karan:bye..my x agent..

He don't give him any chance but disconnects the call..

Amar:gud morning sir..

Karan looks at him with the same attitude and irritating expressions'but he wont reply..

Karan:oh so u are more interested in commissioniare post right!

Amar looks at him confusingly''

Karan:what the hell are u doing here(almost screams on him)

Amar:sir..i saw u coming inside so..

Karan:so what ?are u welcoming me in to my own office..look iam not paying you to waste ur time here and there..

Amar:sorry sir..

Karan:shut up now..dont give me lame excuses and ask for bloody sorry..go back to ur work..other wise u can accompany our agent to collect ur salary..

Amar:sorry sir..i'll never commit this mistake again..

He literally runs inside as if some one is chasing him..to save himself from him'

-----------flash back ends-------------------------

Amar:tina jaldi andar chalo.. warna sir hamari naukri sach mein dream reh jaayegi'tumhe pata hai na sir ko late aana bilkul pasand nahi..

Tina:ha sir let's go..

Precap:

Karan:she is my angel'smrithi..smrithi karan prasad


so guys how was it???

plz let me know ur feedbacks..tell me whether is should continue with it or not...

i'll give character sketch next time..

plz press LIKE and do COMMENT

and if u want pm's from me plz add monaaneet to ur buddy list

and can anyone help with to prepare banner for this..?

me waiting for ur comments😉

love...

-mona

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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys if u are interested to read my other works...plz check this...
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Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
-Mounika- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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what guys no body is interested??😭
rechus thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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super starting... Karan remembering me Arnav...good job...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#5
super starting... Karan remembering me Arnav...good job...[/QUOTE
karan is angry young maan here...so obviously his attitudes remembers arnav..but thanx for response😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: maneetlover1


its really interesting karan's attitude..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey mona...
congrats on the new ff dear...
prolouge is very very interesting..
so karan here is angry young man...
wow... princess is so cute... she is angry on her mama...
yaar princess ka naam kya hain???
what is the past yaar?? eagerly waiting for that...
poor amar... literally shocked to see new karan..
yaar princess ka papa??? omg.. tumari tarah main bhi question bank ban gayi hu...
continue soon mona dear...
love u...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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it's aw some continue with it... and yeah if you make banner with it it is a superb idea...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Its an awesome starting and i really appreciate your effort for writing this Fan Fiction. Keep it up and looking forward for the next part. Will post my comments in a bit 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothikrish

hey mona...
congrats on the new ff dear...
prolouge is very very interesting..
so karan here is angry young man...
wow... princess is so cute... she is angry on her mama...
yaar princess ka naam kya hain???
what is the past yaar?? eagerly waiting for that...
poor amar... literally shocked to see new karan..
yaar princess ka papa??? omg.. tumari tarah main bhi question bank ban gayi hu...
continue soon mona dear...
love u...




awww thank u soo soo much darling...
iam really happy to see ur comments..me jumping just like princess...
thoda patientce rakho yar abhi toh shuru kiya...past jald hi reveal hojayega...
he..he...he...tum bhi mere jaisa question bank bangayi..lolz
kyun na ho aaknir mein tumhari chweet chweet thodi pagal behen jo hu..ah ha iska matlab ye nahi ki tum pagal ho...but my chweet sis...
love u sweet heart

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