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Posted: 18 years ago
#11
michael seems so sweet???? is he and ronnie getting together?????????/
and i like meg too!!!!
and now u made me hungry for chocolate chip cookies!!!
luv ur story!!!
update soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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michael and ronnie?? hmmm... u'll just have to wait! 😉

i had choco-chip pancakes for breakfast... 😆

glad u like the story! and i will update a lil later! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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so it is michael and ronie .... im good.....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i never said that.. hehe... you'll just have to wait! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
"I thought I smelled pancakes! I can't believe you guys were gonna have
breakfast without me!" Meg and Michael looked up to see Johnny standing
at the entrance of the kitchen with a look of mock indignation on his face.

Even if he had just got out of bed, Johnny looked like the dream guy
of every girl. He wasn't a jock or anything but he could have easily passed
for one. He was about 6 ft tall, had light brown hair, sparkling green eyes,
and, because he shared Michael's love for surfing, a permanently tanned
complexion.

"Sorry man! We just thought you were still sl--"

"Yeah, yeah, save it Mike!" mumbled Johnny as he tried to stifle a
yawn. "Move over Meg!" he added as he walked up to the kitchen counter.

"Good morning to you too!" replied a highly irritated Meg while
vacating the seat for Johnny.

"What's up with your sister?"

"I don't know. You ask her. She IS your girlfriend after all."

Meg and Johnny had been dating for two years now and although
Michael had at first resented the fact that his sister was dating his best
friend, he finally approved of their relationship.

"Meg, what's wrong with you?" asked Johnny as he turned to face
her.

"I'm just worried about Ronnie."

"Don't tell me she's still crying over that jerk!"

"Johnny!! Don't you ever say that in front of her!" reprimanded Meg
while hitting him on the arm.

"Oooowwww! What did you do that for?! It's not like I said anything
wrong. He was - oh wait, I mean, he IS a jerk."

"I agree with him sis!" added Michael through a mouthful of
pancakes.

"Well so do I! But calling him names isn't gonna do us any good. It's
just gonna make Ronnie feel worse if she hears us. We should focus on
helping her out of her misery."

"And we do that how?" asked Michael. "She gets upset at the mere
mention of his name."

"Then we don't mention Mark! DUH!" replied Meg like that was the
most obvious thing to do.

"So what do you suggest?" questioned Johnny.

"I have a plan..." Meg answered.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooo.... intresting.... johnny sounds cute 😳 😳 😳 so meg is dating brothers best friend and brother will date her best friend??? i like the way it works 😉 kinda like harry, ginny, ron hermy in HP cos hermy's like harrys sister...
good going rashmi!!!!
want more!!! pls post soon!!!!!!
loving ur story!!! its awesom!!!!
and nice cliffehanger...
i bet tey r going to set her up on a blind date
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: ~Sirius*Ysh~

ooo.... intresting.... johnny sounds cute 😳 😳
😳 so meg is dating brothers best friend and brother will date her best
friend??? i like the way it works 😉 kinda like harry, ginny, ron hermy in
HP cos hermy's like harrys sister...
good going rashmi!!!!
want more!!! pls post soon!!!!!!
loving ur story!!! its awesom!!!!
and nice cliffehanger...
i bet tey r going to set her up on a blind date



yea... johnny is cute... but i like michael better (maybe cuz wentworth
miller, the guy hu plays michael scofield in prison break is like the
ultimate hottie!)

yup...meg is dating brother's bestfriend but dont know if brother will date
her bestfriend... i mean, so far, ronnie is busy wallowing in her sorrow...
never thot of it as harry-ginny, ron-hermione tho... hehe... clearly, ur an
avid fan! hehe...

blind date? not too sure... but there is something big... hehe... 😉

im really flattered that you like my story considering ur such a great
writer urself! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
Ahhhh Rashmi!
Awsome part...
I like johney!!
Nice cliffhanger..
But i cant wait..
Please continue soon!
😃

-Mahak-

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mini786

Ahhhh Rashmi!
Awsome part...
I like johney!!
Nice cliffhanger..
But i cant wait..
Please continue soon!
😃

-Mahak-



thanks mahak! glad u liked it... will post in a day or two... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: SpoILed BraT

hey! this is my first story here... im not a very good writer so i'm really
looking forward to receiving help from the great writers here...

this is all i have so far... if u guys like it, do let me know so i can
continue... leave your comments/reviews/crticisms... anything that could
help me improve! thanks!


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As she stood alone by the shore, Veronica's mind raced back to the first
time she saw Mark. She felt a tear roll down her cheek and she lifted her
hand to wipe it away. But a split second later, another tear rushed down
her face. Then came another and another until there was a steady flow
running down her cheeks.

It had almost been a year since Mark left but his image was still
clearly imprinted in Veronica's mind. His voice still echoed in her ears. His
laughter still rang in her thoughts. She could still recall the day they met
for the very first time. The events so clear that it seemed like it was only
yesterday when they bumped into each other...

"Oh no! I'm late for class... AGAIN!" uttered a panicky Veronica as
she gathered all her books. She knew that this day would not go as she
had hoped it would. She woke up late, made a mess out of her breakfast
and got stuck in traffic for about an hour. And now, she was late for class.
She hurried down the corridors, which were almost empty by now, and
made her way to class. She knew she had to run faster to avoid getting
into more trouble. Bad idea! Just as she started running, bang!, she
bumped into someone. Her things went flying in all directions. She
scrambled to gather her things while muttering apologies to the person
she had run into.

"Oh my god! I'm really sorry...I should learn to watch where I'm
going... I'm so so sorry..."

"It's alright. It my fault too. I should have seen you coming. Here, let
me help you with those."

He bent down to help her with her books. "I'm Mark by the way.
What's your name?"

"Veronica."

"Are you new here?"

"Yea, and I'm really late for class so I need to run."

"Oh, alright. Just be careful."

"Thanks."

And without looking back at Mark, she rushed to her class.

wow!!! Rashmi 👏you are genius yaar,

Nice love story ....I liked the way you narrated it....omg!!!! your charecters veronica and mark seems to be cute and innocent.....how pity to note that veronica just in a panic of picking the books missed Mark unnoticed...

part one is good....will see the part 2 next and give you my reviews next...

"congratulation"...😃

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