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MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: misanthropist.
Ohh myy goodness who is that idiot who broke my sautan's heart😭 I love you babe🤗 who said anything about my heart being broken?🤔 and if it wasn't for the sautan then I wouldn't have recongnised u😆 what happened to your name? acha khasa toh tha! I lub you too, par main abhi bhi straight hu okay?😆

It is my favrt Ed Sheeran song god knows why shape of you is overrated and not this!I know right! this song is my jam. I din like shape of you when I first heard it, if it weren't for the beats then I would have never try and listened it again 😆 perfect is jus perfect. thou nowdays its on roll. finally!

Coming to story ye tou isse Padhne wali jitni hi sundar hai!
aree baf re! self praise 🥱

The way you described her inner turmoil and the way she was haughty enough to say her runaway hubby is gay just so she feels better gives out vibes of very normal girl... You know how we're no?!
tu normal hai?🤣 I doubt that.😕 thanks btw.😃

someone asked me few days back will you slap your ex for a million dollars and I was like I would drive a tractor over him even for a bar of snickers dude
😆 ahaha. I hope no would offer you such an enticing offer warna kahi bechara ex boyfriend late boyfriend na ban jaye.😆

That guy Rehan well he's quite sati-savitri kind of lad... He was penned well too:) sati savitri.😲 I had actually framed his character anything but,lekin since I had to summarise all my story and his feelings into a os it may have turned out to be so. he was supposed to be the imperfect guy with a handsome face but too many flaws unlike his brother who was novel definition for a perfect guy.
@bold, nach rahi hu main ab.😃😆

Waise
Dance without music- kuch kuch hota hai
Stepping in for wedding dance practice as substitute for groom - Namaste London
Loves a girl silently - gayab
This Rehan guy i(or shud I say you) s total Bollywood material 🤣 I don about him par main definitely too much filmy😆😆 btw tu bhi kam nahi. I never realized all this similarities except for no music wala. good notice 🤓

Well written sautan, grammar and phrasing too🤗 thanks a lot bae 😳

I want a sequel as a return gift of your birthday 😳 you know winter(Birthday) is coming !🤣
oh my my! my birthday is coming!!!! sequels as a child!! that makes me think that I will ask you for a treat. 😈😉 sequel ka pata nahi. sharam nahi aati birthday girl ko advance meh gift maang te ho?🥱😆

love you sautan!

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Of pinks ties and blue bows

"Arnav Singh Razaida!" She shouted right into his ears and Arnav could feel his ears crying tears of blood. "I swear Laad Governor! If we don't reach the hospital on time, I will make you sleep near the pool for a week, Devi Maiyaa's swear!"

Arnav gulped in fear as he turned his car towards the hospital. He could never have imagined that he, the great ASR would ever fear someone let alone a skinny little girl but the last nine months had changed his views. His wife had kept him on his toes and he had followed her orders, fulfilled her demands like the good husband he was. However today he could sense his death. Her water had broken suddenly in the middle of their ... ahem.. ahem... passionate adventures and he was rushing her towards the hospital which apparently wasn't fast enough when he thought he was putting flash into shame with his speed!

They rushed towards the emergency as soon as they reached the hospital. Arnav had already called their gynecologist and they were waiting for her arrival.

"I'm scared Arnav ji! What if something happens to me or what if something happens to our little aloo!" Khushi whined as another contraction hit her.

"For the hundredth time Khushi! Don't call our baby aloo. She's our baby not some kind of vegetable. And no, nothing is going to happen to you or our baby. Dr Mithila said she would be here soon!" Arnav assured his wife as he got nervous very second.

"For the hundredth time Arnav ji! Don't call our baby her. He is a boy, my little junior Laad Governor!" Khushi made her point loud and clear to which Arnav just made a face.

Finally the doctor arrived and asked Khushi shift towards the operation theatre however Khushi being scared of everything about the hospital, pulled Arnav towards her from the collar of his shirt and cried out that she wanted him with her.

The doctor obliged after sometime much to the fear of Arnav as he didn't wish to witness his wife getting pierced by needles or hear her shouting. But one look at his petrified wife made him forget all his concerns and at that moment, he just wished to be with her, be there for her.

...

"Calm down. Thats alright. Just take a long deep breath!" the nurse suggested to a very nervous Arnav as he followed her. Somehow being in the company of medical professionals had calmed Khushi down and it was Arnav who was sweating.

"Offo Arnav ji! Relax a little will you? There's nothing to worry about and if you do just hug fluffy!"Khushi made an attempt to calm her husband however her words went in vain as she cried out when the contradiction occurred for the fifth time.

Not being able to digest his wife in pain, Arnav did something he never thought he would. He hugged that teddy bear he was carrying who his wife had named as 'fluffy'! When Khushi had found about her pregnancy she had made a teddy bear for their child. And according to her, that was the first thing their child was suppose to see once she was out.

...

Three hours of plain torture. Torture of his wife crying out and with all her might pushing that little being out while he stood there helpless. Oh how he wished to take all her pain away. But he couldn't. And those hours of torture ended with a sharp cry.

A little head emerged out followed by little hands and feet. Arnav stood there rooted to his place as Khushi continued to cry, but this time tears of mirth. Their little one had finally made an entry on Earth.

"Congratulation! Its a girl!" The doctor announced and the couple's happiness knew no bounds.

Arnav's hand trembled as he took his little girl in his arms. His little girl, his princess. One look at her and he knew he would be wrapped around her tiny fingers.

Arnav embraced his wife and she carried her in her arms, her tears never stopping.

"Have you thought of a name?" He silently asked.

"Arushi"Khushi whispered after a while and he just smiled at her then gazed at their baby.

"But I thought you were rooting for a boy?" He teased his wife to which she cleverly answered,

"I was but I always knew she was a girl. After all she lived inside for 9 months!"

Arnav shook his head in amusement. Khushi would never accept her defeat. He on the other hand was ready to be defeated all the time.

"So did you get it?"

"What? Jalebis? Yes half a kilo. Just like you wanted."

"No Arnav ji! I was taking about the cute little ties and bows you bought for our baby from New York. Thou if you have brought some Jalebis, I will have one." Khushi said.

"Oh yes. I have brought them. Just as you wanted. Pink ties and blue bows."

"What? No! I wanted pink bows and blue ties!" Khushi made a pout.

"Doesn't even matter? I don't think my baby minds. Right princess?" Arnav addressed his infant daughter. Khuhi was about to argue but Arushi decided to yawn for the first time at that moment, somehow agreeing with her dad.

"See! My princess agrees! Shes my little one. Daddy baby one team isn't it?" Arnav stated proudly.

While Khushi whispered,"We should have a baby boy soon!"

Edited by MsChanadlerBong - 7 years ago

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Konsi treat? Pehle return gift :p nd kya chahiye tuze?

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

That was a beautiful work!!

They were meant to be❤️

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Mahi

@Mannmohanaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

Great work Sam! This was a bit off the usual mark though 😆

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Maria

@x.titli.x

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

That was so gripping! 😲 from the beginning till the end! 😲Such a lovely OS which described love to another level!

Sam you're just fantastic!

🤗

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Niki.

@Niki.

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Wow beautiful OS!👏

And love that Ed sheeran song very much its one of my favorite.😳

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San

@slippedaffairs

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#19

unreserved on pg 1 : Link

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Preet

@Preet.Kc

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Oh my GOd this one is too good.
Superb!!!
Sam I think you need to continue this one, yeah you can not leave it like this, this is not a One Shot, but more like the prologue of a story, so you can't leave on our own imagination, we can't sit here and think why she fall of the wrong brother when her childlove was Rehan...
Beautifully written.
Please think of continuing it.
Loved it

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