Short Story: Button-Khuli Madam - Page 2

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aishwarya

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Posted: 8 years ago

I alwayzz love ur write ups!!

and this was damn good!!

Amazingly written K👏

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 8 years ago

Amazing piece of writing K! 👏 You're so talented. ⭐️

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paru

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Posted: 8 years ago

lovely story
thax for pm

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reflections.

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Posted: 8 years ago

This is absolutely amazing. I was laughing and sighing all the way through. It was that good. Were you inspired by Twinkle Khanna a little here? Seems to have been inspired by her form of writing. Nonetheless, amaze stuff bro.

This seems like a place I'd love to be in. #my-type-of-songs

You continues? You have to.

Okay.

Mohabbat hai mirchi.

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Ayushi.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Reserved.

'Cause I am out of focus & your write up needs my full concentration.

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Portraying a major issue of Indian society- something so Deep filled with Sarcasm- a winning Combo!

All through the story, you made sure the topic isn't lost with certain light moments. Good use of wit. You laugh & become pensive- all at once.

Not to forget, The Title is so Apt.

Some of the most interesting phrases were-:

zip-khule-bhaiyyas, multiple-husband-aunties,

"Arey naaahi, do se itna kamaal view nahi milta,"

"Arey shirt-shirt pe depend karta hai, bhai, tumko nahi pata."

Great work, there.

Keep writing.

-Ayushi.

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