Poem: He and I

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

He was delight and agony

He was catastrophic and remedying

He was fact and fiction

He was gain and loss

He was strength and weakness

He was sacred and corrupt

He was beautiful and unsightly

He was light and pitch-black

He was everything and nothing.

I am mourning and celebrating

I am scorn and forgiveness

I am anger and calm

I am vile and kind

I am certain and confused

I am confident and lost

I am concrete and clay

I am aware and asleep

I am alive and dead.

thegameison

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Madhura

@Madhura..

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Posted: 9 years ago

I feel this has some concept which I am not too intelligent to connect.
It is good, with distinctions and extremes, but seems simple and flow was great.

-Madhura

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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Posted: 9 years ago

He was light and pitch-black
He was everything and nothing.

I am alive and dead.

These are my favorite lines from the poem.

This poem reminded me of Pallavi Vimani, a character that stays with me since I read her. Its in a way kind of close to her.

I loved this one for its conflict and the co-existence of the conflict.

-Chitra.

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surbhi

@suearmaniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

This is nice.
He left u with contrasting feelings i think

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Ekta

@HaymurS

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Posted: 9 years ago

Very deep but beautiful lines

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 9 years ago

The poem was very deep, and beautiful! Loved the representation of the inner conflicts of our minds!

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
Res 😳

Unres😳

What a poem 👏👏

The deep inner conflicts of the protagonist can be felt. The inner turmoil one goes through in relationships is well seen in this poem. You are an extraordinary writer 😳

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paru

@enthusiastic

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Posted: 9 years ago

beautiful lines
loved it soo much
thanks for the pm

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Mrinalini

@minakrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

He was delight and agony

He was catastrophic and remedying

He was fact and fiction

He was strength and weakness

He was everything and nothing.

^The comparison of words is amazing! 👏

I am confident and lost

I am concrete and clay

I am aware and asleep

I am alive and dead.

^Phenomenal work K! ⭐️ 👏

~ Mrina <3

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Ayushi.

@-.wanderlust.-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#10

I am in awe of these lines here.

Actually that is how being attracted to someone having an equally strong personality as you, who becomes solely important for the mere existence yet that person's presence is somehow toxic to our self being.

Co-existence of such world, not possible.

Keep writing.

-Ayushi xx

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