OS: How Blue Is My Sapphire| Note Pg 16 - Page 4

Originally posted by: anaswara93

Well written.

Every girl should have faced koi Na koi such problems and the so called society always finds a way to taunt us,that's their problem.But we girls are fighters.We should fight for our rights.And I am proud to be a woman.Hats of to you and you are so strong.

Yeah, the so-called society always finds a way to taunt people, but it is not the culprits who suffer the most of wrath, quite unfortunately. I am proud to be a woman too. Thank you.

Originally posted by: rockstarlover

never let anyone to take control of ur life
never let anyone influence u in other way
life is full of surprises
sometimes it gives only pain sometimes it gives too much happiness
so don't lose ur hope
may be it has some better stored for u
be strong be a fighter
life will be urs

All of us live with our past. All of us allow it to shape our future. But some of us know how to shrug the past. I think that is who I am. I will let my past shape my future but not for the worst but for the best. Gloomy and rough the blue stone might be, but I am sure that the lessons it taught me, the gloomy and the rough way, make it as valuable as a sapphire.

These were exactly my thoughts during my graduation oath. I feel that the better should be made, not waited for. I made the best of what I could. I got success when I was at school when I began writing and during the height of the dark times, that kept me up. I will always be proud that I made myself, thanks to God, irrespective of the circumstances because he was not there to give me strength and listen to me along with the passion I had for making the best of what I have, I guess I wouldn't be here anymore.

such a emotional OS
it was based in true life too
it disgusts me to think that there are people in the world like that b*****d Sundar
n who can get away with it because of their family or money
as for the principal she too is no better than Sundar
I believe in karma n I hope it bites both back with vengence
takes a strong girl to stand up to all that n walk away with her head held high n she (u) should be proud of yourself not everyone could do that
as for the friend I know its her life but after hearing from her friend what happened to her im surprised she would choose to be with him I mean whats to stop him turning on her next
anyways was very well written
n I hope if any girl who is in similar situation she will read this n get the strength she needs to fight for her right
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

Originally posted by: Shalvikamathur

its absolutely fantastic yagya!! hats off to you to still remaon so strong even after having endured so much..!!
i believe everyone should take a stand against the wrong..
and coming to the os..it was amazing!!!

Thank you so much, Shalvika. Your comments always bring a smile on my face.

Originally posted by: Heatsha8176

such a emotional OS
it was based in true life too
it disgusts me to think that there are people in the world like that b*****d Sundar
n who can get away with it because of their family or money
as for the principal she too is no better than Sundar
I believe in karma n I hope it bites both back with vengence
takes a strong girl to stand up to all that n walk away with her head held high n she (u) should be proud of yourself not everyone could do that
as for the friend I know its her life but after hearing from her friend what happened to her im surprised she would choose to be with him I mean whats to stop him turning on her next
anyways was very well written
n I hope if any girl who is in similar situation she will read this n get the strength she needs to fight for her right
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

I too believe in Karma and God. Some people don't need to get punishment for anyone, they will receive a punishment from God. The same thought struck me too. I told myself it is her life but it hurt nevertheless. It felt like betrayal that she chose to side with him rather than me but it's her life, again. I also felt concerned for her.
If it gives strength to someone, then i will be more than elated. :)

Originally posted by: anjali-anjali

brillant

Thank you! :D

Every girl should be a fighter...

Originally posted by: elinad

Every girl should be a fighter...

And I support every girl who chooses the right path...that is the path to justice

We need more such people in the world. :D

Superb concept...ur born fighter...doing crime n not uttering a word against crime is same...always raise ur voice against crime...n ur a fab writer

Originally posted by: bengaliya

its nice. but i think it could have been better.

Well sorry to burst your bubble buddy..it's not only nice but much more...it's superb
If you got so much knowledge about better writing why don't you write one!!