I Got You Now : an immersive experience

Angel-luvs-s thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#1
hi guys i am back again. so it happened that one day my english teacher was talking about different kinds of narratives and he talked about a rare kind that was not used often. 2nd person narrative. intsead of you using 'I' or 'He/She' for the character a second person narrative makes use of the word 'You' . so this is my attempt of trying something new. so you are the main character in this story. you refering to the reader. and guys this is a warning. this is a horror story, so if you are someone who gets scared easily you might not want to read. so here you go. happy reading.

You woke up with a jolt. Your clothes were damp with a nervous perspiration. You can feel the air getting heavier and heavier so much so that you could feel something solid as you reach out to touch it. You immediately draw back as you feel exasperated by your surroundings.

You are in complete and utter shock as you glance at your hand and see the bruises on it. It is like someone gripped on your hand as tight as possible leaving the handprints as a memento of its presence. You could feel the beads of sweat descending your face as you take deep breaths in attempt to calm yourself but you know it's not working.

You say a tiny prayer under your breath as you plop down back into your bed. You momentarily shut your eyes but you feel someone's heated gaze on you. You try to ignore it but you can feel it burning through your eyelids .you open your eyelids in surrender but there was nothing there. You pulled up the sheets till your chest as you forced yourself to return to sleep. You get the same feeling that someone is watching as you did before but this time you force yourself to shut your eyes.

Suddenly you become painfully aware of your inability to breathe. You find yourself gasping for air as the blanket tightens your body to your bed. You try to throw your sheets down but your body doesn't obey you. Tears start streaming down your face but the situation keeps getting worse.

But just when you lost all hope you are able to breathe again and you can help but smile but your happiness is short lived. As you attempt to get up some force pushes you back down. You can feel an unnatural load on your chest. You want to scream but don't know. You shut your eyes in a final attempt to escape but they fly open immediately.

And in a split second you see the most horrendous sight you have ever laid eyes on. A woman is floating above you and the rancid odor of rotting flesh overwhelms you. It stings your eyes. You could hear her horrid laughter tear your eardrums. You try to cover your eyes but it is of no use. You have no control over your body.

"I got you now…"

And that was the last thing you ever heard again.

the end?
thanks for reading. like and comment.

Created

Last reply

Replies

19

Views

1.5k

Users

13

Likes

36

Frequent Posters

--Ta_Sha-- thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Res/unre
Usually when I get to comment first I celebrate n show my exciting but
This time this is not the case
I knew u r a great writer but this I have no words
It was damn scary 🤢
N if I can't sleep tonight I m definitely gonna come in ur dreams no nightmare n will not let u sleep either 😆
I know right I m scared but still trying to joke around
Well what a fabulous piece of fiction 👏
Hats off to you
It is just WOW
Keep writing but yeah please less scary than this one
Thanks for the pm 😃
Edited by --Ta_Sha-- - 12 years ago
Hp_TvD_mAnIc thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#3
nic ha yr ur such a great angel
.-Soumya-. thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#4
Superb
I am speechless yaar
U literally scared me
Thanx for PM
peraltagasm thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Scary 😳 Nut awesome 😳 👏 👍🏼 Keep writing girl 🤗 Sorry can;t give along comment as I have tuition and Res karke rakha toh unres karna bhool jaungi 😆 Awesome work! Do write more and keep pming me 😳
sanjana_D3 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#6
Interesting and scary !
Thanks for the pm :)
anushka1129 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#7
it was awesome..
was imagine myself n suddenly i got really scare yaar..mostly at the end..
different n nice one..
thanks for the pm :)
keep writing ;)
PRASSI thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#8
It was scary but awesome yr...
Thanxx for PM...😃
...Natasha... thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#9
It's awesome
But very scary lol
tareyfan thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#10
tooo gud dear ...jst luvd it ❤️ beautifully written n dun wrry i dont get scared easily

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".